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The children had simply been sitting on the ground.
 
The children had simply been sitting on the ground.
   
Mitotsudaira and Futayo had landed next to them, protected them from the rubble and the pieces of the ship that were destroying the surrounding area and themselves, and cut apart any piece of the ship that was breaking in an unfortunate way.
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Mitotsudaira and Futayo had landed next to them, protected them from the rubble and the pieces of the ship that was destroying the surrounding area and itself, and cut apart any piece of the ship that were breaking in an unfortunate way.
   
 
A massive number of parts had flown and danced through the air, but spiraling silver chains had formed a protective wall and Futayo’s high speed attacks had beat down anything that threatened to make it through.
 
A massive number of parts had flown and danced through the air, but spiraling silver chains had formed a protective wall and Futayo’s high speed attacks had beat down anything that threatened to make it through.

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