Editing Horizon:Volume 3B Chapter 49

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“Hey, you want a fried shrimp?”
 
“Hey, you want a fried shrimp?”
   
“What’s this sudden change of heart? But I need to eat what a superior gives me, right? I can’t exactly say no, so shaja.”
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“What’s this sudden change of heart? But I need to eat what a superior gives me, right? I can’t exactly so no, so shaja.”
   
 
“Shaja,” replied Katsuie before raising the shrimp over his head. “Cooooome and get it!”
 
“Shaja,” replied Katsuie before raising the shrimp over his head. “Cooooome and get it!”
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The flesh and bone that was meant to swell out as he grew had been trapped densely inside him.
 
The flesh and bone that was meant to swell out as he grew had been trapped densely inside him.
   
His entire body was compressed, so there were no gaps in his defenses and he could pour overwhelming bursts of power into his attacks. However, that made it difficult for him to hold back and people had a tendency to keep their distance if not avoid him entirely.
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His entire body was compressed, so there were no gaps in his defenses and he had could pour overwhelming bursts of power into his attacks. However, that made it difficult for him to hold back and people had a tendency to keep their distance if not avoid him entirely.
   
 
…''All of that used to be kind of cool, but…
 
…''All of that used to be kind of cool, but…

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