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“And what is that?”
 
“And what is that?”
   
“The Logismoi Óplo.”
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“The Logismoi Oplo.”
   
 
The reason for that was simple.
 
The reason for that was simple.
   
“Lord Motonobu presented those as the most obvious example of the teaching materials he left for ending the Apocalypse. And he created the Logismoi Óplo by turning a girl’s emotions into those teaching materials. That means Horizon Ariadust, the one who will save the world by ending the Apocalypse, is starting out with even fewer emotions than you.”
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“Lord Motonobu presented those as the most obvious example of the teaching materials he left for ending the Apocalypse. And he created the Logismoi Oplo by turning a girl’s emotions into those teaching materials. That means Horizon Ariadust, the one who will save the world by ending the Apocalypse, is starting out with even fewer emotions than you.”
   
 
Masazumi was very glad they had visited England before this.
 
Masazumi was very glad they had visited England before this.
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“I guarantee that your ‘kingdom’ can take a form other than a state of emotionlessness. You are surrounded by more than just a cruel cycle of loss. There are other ways for you to live, but you are choosing to live this way. …We will prove that to be the case.”
 
“I guarantee that your ‘kingdom’ can take a form other than a state of emotionlessness. You are surrounded by more than just a cruel cycle of loss. There are other ways for you to live, but you are choosing to live this way. …We will prove that to be the case.”
   
They had no clue how to gain the power they needed as a nation or how to retrieve all the Logismoi Óplo, but their greatest objective was clear.
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They had no clue how to gain the power they needed as a nation or how to retrieve all the Logismoi Oplo, but their greatest objective was clear.
   
 
“We ''will'' end the Apocalypse and conquer this world.”
 
“We ''will'' end the Apocalypse and conquer this world.”

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