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...''Kime-chan is in a bit of a bad mood, isn't she?
 
...''Kime-chan is in a bit of a bad mood, isn't she?
   
Yoshiaki was the type to make a plan and follow it.
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Yoshiaki was the type make a plan and follow it.
   
 
In the Ten Spears under Hashiba's command, Fukushima was the leader and Takenaka did the largescale planning as their staff officer, but Wakisaka and Yoshiaki were mostly independent members of the
 
In the Ten Spears under Hashiba's command, Fukushima was the leader and Takenaka did the largescale planning as their staff officer, but Wakisaka and Yoshiaki were mostly independent members of the
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And when their current method used that kind of buffering...
 
And when their current method used that kind of buffering...
   
"It can be a concern during a serious battle."
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"It can be concern during a serious battle."
   
 
But one wanted to eliminate all concerns during battle.
 
But one wanted to eliminate all concerns during battle.

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