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“Go! We are Schau Essen! If we hit them, we win!”
 
“Go! We are Schau Essen! If we hit them, we win!”
   
They aimed a counterattack clash at the enemy.
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“They aimed a counterattack clash at the enemy.
   
   
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She could not counterattack in time. Fukushima and some others had been out on the 2nd starboard ship to watch the Musashi pass by, but…
 
She could not counterattack in time. Fukushima and some others had been out on the 2nd starboard ship to watch the Musashi pass by, but…
   
'''Llaf:''' “If only I had thought to bring Ichinotani with me!”
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''Llaf:''' “If only I had thought to bring Ichinotani with me!”
   
 
''She’s useless then,'' decided Koroku as she instantly accepted the state of affairs.
 
''She’s useless then,'' decided Koroku as she instantly accepted the state of affairs.
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The final attack aimed for him had failed because those ahead of him had all targeted the bridges.
 
The final attack aimed for him had failed because those ahead of him had all targeted the bridges.
   
Their true target was the rear central ship’s primary thruster.
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Their true targets was the rear central ship’s primary thruster.
   
 
But none of the others had thought they could get an attack in on the rear thrusters.
 
But none of the others had thought they could get an attack in on the rear thrusters.
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Nabeshima’s charge had shot out from behind the ship and circled up into the sky.
 
Nabeshima’s charge had shot out from behind the ship and circled up into the sky.
   
The enemy mechanical dragon should not have been able to detect her ether reading thanks to the explosive blast from the Azuchi’s main cannon.
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The enemy mechanical dragon should not have been able to detect her ether reading thanks to explosive blast from the Azuchi’s main cannon.
   
 
The attack came from a complete blind spot just as the enemy was preparing their dragon cannon.
 
The attack came from a complete blind spot just as the enemy was preparing their dragon cannon.
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They were going to shoot themselves.
 
They were going to shoot themselves.
   
There was just one way of pulling this off: the Azuchi had opened all of the windows on the front of the bridge, in all the rooms and corridors within the bridge, and on the back of the bridge in order to reduce the shock of the hit as much as possible.
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There was just one way of pulling this off: the Azuchi had opened all of windows on the front of the bridge, in all the rooms and corridors within the bridge, and on the back of the bridge in order to reduce the shock of the hit as much as possible.
   
 
“Everyone, brace for impact! Over!”
 
“Everyone, brace for impact! Over!”

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