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She wished she could have summoned a bunch more of them further back.
 
She wished she could have summoned a bunch more of them further back.
   
Then enemies that slipped past could be taken out individually and the enemy’s advance could be slowed.
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Then enemy that slipped past could be taken out individually and the enemy’s advance could be slowed.
   
 
That had been her plan, but…
 
That had been her plan, but…
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After falling back to the east, Matthias all of a sudden noticed Mitsunari standing next to him.
 
After falling back to the east, Matthias all of a sudden noticed Mitsunari standing next to him.
   
The troops deep in the southwest forest, while keeping their distance from or approaching the split-up Bernard, saw Mitsunari standing behind a tree with a hand to her ear.
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The troops deep in the southwest forest while keeping their distance from or approaching the split-up Bernard saw Mitsunari standing behind a tree with a hand to her ear.
   
 
Unit 2 atop the hill saw her while they looked down at Unit 1 glaring at the enemy.
 
Unit 2 atop the hill saw her while they looked down at Unit 1 glaring at the enemy.

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