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It has been one year since Sekitani-senpai left us.
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It has been one year since Sekitani-sempai left us.
   
During this year, Senpai has fallen into legend and become a hero. As a result, the five day Cultural Festival will commence as usual.
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During this year, Sempai has fallen into legend and become a hero. As a result, the five day Cultural Festival will commence as usual.
   
However, as the legend spread, I went into deep thought. Would people ten years from now still remember the silent warrior and the kind hero? All Senpai has left behind is this anthology "Hyouka", for which he has provided the title.
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However, as the legend spread, I went into deep thought. Would people ten years from now still remember the silent warrior and the kind hero? All Sempai has left behind is this anthology "Hyouka", for which he has provided the title.
   
As a sacrifice of the conflict, even Senpai's smile would end up along the flow of time into eternity. <!--TL Note - DO NOT EDIT THIS SENTENCE-->
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As a sacrifice of the conflict, even Sempai's smile would end up along the flow of time into eternity. <!--TL Note - DO NOT EDIT THIS SENTENCE-->
   
 
No, perhaps it is better that we do not remember it. As it was not intended to be a heroic tale.
 
No, perhaps it is better that we do not remember it. As it was not intended to be a heroic tale.
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# "Senpai" had departed. (From where?)
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# "Sempai" had departed. (From where?)
# "Senpai" became a hero 33 years ago, and had become a legend by the following year
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# "Sempai" became a hero 33 years ago, and had become a legend by the following year
# "Senpai" was a "silent warrior" and "kind hero"
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# "Sempai" was a "silent warrior" and "kind hero"
# "Senpai" named this anthology "Hyouka"
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# "Sempai" named this anthology "Hyouka"
# A conflict happened and sacrifices were made ("Senpai" = sacrifice?)
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# A conflict happened and sacrifices were made ("Sempai" = sacrifice?)
   
   
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After making sure everyone had read through the note, Chitanda continued with her explanation.
 
After making sure everyone had read through the note, Chitanda continued with her explanation.
   
"First of all, this 'Senpai', in other words my uncle, had dropped out of Kamiyama High School. His final academic level was Junior High. I hope you're all following me."
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"First of all, this 'Sempai', in other words my uncle, had dropped out of Kamiyama High School. His final academic level was Junior High. I hope you're all following me."
   
While this was the first time I heard Chitanda mention Sekitani Jun had dropped out of Kamiyama High School, I wasn't particularly surprised. After all, it was not hard to guess from the opening sentence of the foreword: "since Sekitani-senpai left us".
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While this was the first time I heard Chitanda mention Sekitani Jun had dropped out of Kamiyama High School, I wasn't particularly surprised. After all, it was not hard to guess from the opening sentence of the foreword: "since Sekitani-sempai left us".
   
 
But then, Chitanda probably doesn't know the reason why her uncle dropped out... No, she definitely doesn't know. If she did, she would have mentioned it already. Come to think of it, back at the Cafe Pineapple Sandwich, she did mention that the Sekitanis and Chitandas have become estranged.
 
But then, Chitanda probably doesn't know the reason why her uncle dropped out... No, she definitely doesn't know. If she did, she would have mentioned it already. Come to think of it, back at the Cafe Pineapple Sandwich, she did mention that the Sekitanis and Chitandas have become estranged.
   
"Second, the foreword makes a big issue out of how time has passed. The third point is interesting; besides mentioning 'Senpai' as kind and silent, he's also described as a 'warrior' and 'hero'. What was he fighting for? The fifth point merely affirms that 'Senpai' fought in some conflict and became a hero, and was sacrificed as a result. As for the fourth point... while I'm curious about it, it's irrelevant to the current problem for now. This concludes my report, are there any questions?"
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"Second, the foreword makes a big issue out of how time has passed. The third point is interesting; besides mentioning 'Sempai' as kind and silent, he's also described as a 'warrior' and 'hero'. What was he fighting for? The fifth point merely affirms that 'Sempai' fought in some conflict and became a hero, and was sacrificed as a result. As for the fourth point... while I'm curious about it, it's irrelevant to the current problem for now. This concludes my report, are there any questions?"
   
 
As it wasn't particularly offbeat, I didn't have much to ask.
 
As it wasn't particularly offbeat, I didn't have much to ask.
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Chitanda nodded.
 
Chitanda nodded.
   
"Good. Anyway, first, 'when'. We know it happened 33 years ago, but we don't know whether it's June or October. If the 'Unity and Salutations' is right, then it's June, while based on the description on 'Hyouka', it feels more like October. However, as both sources are quite reliable, I would say the incident occurred in June while 'Senpai's' dropping out happened in October."
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"Good. Anyway, first, 'when'. We know it happened 33 years ago, but we don't know whether it's June or October. If the 'Unity and Salutations' is right, then it's June, while based on the description on 'Hyouka', it feels more like October. However, as both sources are quite reliable, I would say the incident occurred in June while 'Sempai's' dropping out happened in October."
   
 
Looking disgruntled, Ibara raised her brows, as it was just a while ago that I pointed out the contradictions in her theory. I ignored her and continued, "Next, 'where'. There's no problem answering that: At Kamiyama High School. 'Who', according to the 'Unity and Salutations', we know the main character is Sekitani Jun, the Classics Club president. Allow me to extend this a bit here, the main character is actually the entire student body, Sekitani is just one of the many protagonists."
 
Looking disgruntled, Ibara raised her brows, as it was just a while ago that I pointed out the contradictions in her theory. I ignored her and continued, "Next, 'where'. There's no problem answering that: At Kamiyama High School. 'Who', according to the 'Unity and Salutations', we know the main character is Sekitani Jun, the Classics Club president. Allow me to extend this a bit here, the main character is actually the entire student body, Sekitani is just one of the many protagonists."
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I took a ball pen and underlined a few lines.
 
I took a ball pen and underlined a few lines.
   
"Here, 'During this year, Senpai has fallen into legend and become a hero. As a result, the five day Cultural Festival will commence as usual.' Don't you find something strange with this line?"
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"Here, 'During this year, Sempai has fallen into legend and become a hero. As a result, the five day Cultural Festival will commence as usual.' Don't you find something strange with this line?"
   
 
As nobody said anything, I continued, "We knew the Cultural Festival would commence as usual, yet why would the author add something so trivial? This means our attention should not be on 'commence as usual', but on the words 'five days'."
 
As nobody said anything, I continued, "We knew the Cultural Festival would commence as usual, yet why would the author add something so trivial? This means our attention should not be on 'commence as usual', but on the words 'five days'."
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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