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On the other hand, Akane was really motivated, inexplicably wiping an imaginary window with exaggerated movements like she was practicing boxing. Although, even if she was wiping a window, it was more like ‘Wax on! Wax off!’<ref> The thing they did in ‘‘The Karate Kid’’ to practice martial arts.</ref>
 
On the other hand, Akane was really motivated, inexplicably wiping an imaginary window with exaggerated movements like she was practicing boxing. Although, even if she was wiping a window, it was more like ‘Wax on! Wax off!’<ref> The thing they did in ‘‘The Karate Kid’’ to practice martial arts.</ref>
   
“Huh?! Huh?! Souta and Akane, why did you suddenly become so close without the consent of Onee-chan?!”
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“Huh?! Huh?! Souta and Akane, why did you suddenly become so close without the consent of Big Sis?!”
   
 
Kikuno, who didn’t know what happened during the lunch break, protested with a weeping expression and blamed Souta with an appearance a little like they were at odds with each other.
 
Kikuno, who didn’t know what happened during the lunch break, protested with a weeping expression and blamed Souta with an appearance a little like they were at odds with each other.
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After listening to Souta’s explanation, Kikuno nodded with a slight smile, seemingly understanding but not actually understanding.
 
After listening to Souta’s explanation, Kikuno nodded with a slight smile, seemingly understanding but not actually understanding.
   
“Really? Akane is a really good kid, Onee-chan strongly agrees that you should be friends!”
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“Really? Akane is a really good kid, Big Sis strongly agrees that you should be friends!”
   
 
It seems consent has been acquired.
 
It seems consent has been acquired.
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“Yeah, Kikuno-senpai, I’m not an outsider.”
 
“Yeah, Kikuno-senpai, I’m not an outsider.”
   
“Huh?! You’re already family?! Sou-kun, why didn’t you talk with Onee-chan first?! Onee-chan feels lonely!!”
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“Huh?! You’re already family?! Sou-kun, why didn’t you talk with Big Sis first?! Big Sis feels lonely!!”
   
 
It seems consent hasn’t been fully acquired.
 
It seems consent hasn’t been fully acquired.
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“Huh, what do you mean…?”
 
“Huh, what do you mean…?”
   
The Onee-chan’s logic was too unpredictable and Souta was at a loss, but Akane, at the topic’s center, was smiling.
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Big Sis’s logic was too unpredictable and Souta was at a loss, but Akane, at the topic’s center, was smiling.
   
 
“... Speaking of which, Akane just referred to Okiku-nee as ‘senpai’, right?” Although Kikuno was supposed to be a year older than them, it’s still strange to call a classmate ‘senpai’.
 
“... Speaking of which, Akane just referred to Okiku-nee as ‘senpai’, right?” Although Kikuno was supposed to be a year older than them, it’s still strange to call a classmate ‘senpai’.
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“... Did she approve?”
 
“... Did she approve?”
   
“Onee-chan also wants to go! Mm-hmm!”
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“Big Sis also wants to go! Mm-hmm!”
   
 
Doing things her own way at a level higher than Akane, Kikuno raised her hands with this declaration, blocking Souta’s question.
 
Doing things her own way at a level higher than Akane, Kikuno raised her hands with this declaration, blocking Souta’s question.
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“Mm-hmm!! I can take the chance to show my skills! It’s the first time in my life that I get to clean a boy’s room!!”
 
“Mm-hmm!! I can take the chance to show my skills! It’s the first time in my life that I get to clean a boy’s room!!”
   
“O, Onee-chan also wants to clean!!”
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“Big, Big Sis also wants to clean!!”
   
 
“Let’s team up!! Team up to attack!”
 
“Let’s team up!! Team up to attack!”
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Souta, who originally had a sad smile, didn’t have any malicious intent when he said this, but Kikuno, facing the wrong direction, felt her super-sensitive Sisterly Love Radar receive the wrong radio wave at the moment and rushed over to Souta.
 
Souta, who originally had a sad smile, didn’t have any malicious intent when he said this, but Kikuno, facing the wrong direction, felt her super-sensitive Sisterly Love Radar receive the wrong radio wave at the moment and rushed over to Souta.
   
“R-rest assured, Sou-kun! Onee-chan will help you ask Akane to be your friend! You don’t have to feel lonely!”
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“R-rest assured, Sou-kun! Big Sis will help you ask Akane to be your friend! You don’t have to feel lonely!”
   
 
“Eh…? No… Okiku-nee, what are you…!”
 
“Eh…? No… Okiku-nee, what are you…!”
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Souta was scared silly.
 
Souta was scared silly.
   
“Rest assured, Sou-kun! Onee-chan will be scolded on your behalf!
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“Rest assured, Sou-kun! Big Sis will be scolded on your behalf!
   
 
“How can you be spoiled like this…!”
 
“How can you be spoiled like this…!”
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Reprimanded by the two girls, the young man lost his foothold.
 
Reprimanded by the two girls, the young man lost his foothold.
   
“Sou-kun, do you want Onee-chan to help you beg?”
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“Sou-kun, do you want Big Sis to help you beg?”
   
 
With this said by the doting sister, even getting a tip-of-the-toe-hold was unthinkable, not to mention a foothold.
 
With this said by the doting sister, even getting a tip-of-the-toe-hold was unthinkable, not to mention a foothold.
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Souta was hit hard, hugging his thighs on the bench and shouting at his knees.
 
Souta was hit hard, hugging his thighs on the bench and shouting at his knees.
   
“Onee-chan knows, Onee-chan’s Sou-kun is not that kind of child!”
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“Big Sis knows, Big Sis’s Sou-kun is not that kind of child!”
   
 
The doting sister’s trust was pointlessly heavy.
 
The doting sister’s trust was pointlessly heavy.
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Although, Akane just seemed like the uncommonly used phrase ‘food’, so she really wanted to use it.
 
Although, Akane just seemed like the uncommonly used phrase ‘food’, so she really wanted to use it.
   
“There’s also Onee-chan too, Sou-kun!”
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“There’s also Big Sis too, Sou-kun!”
   
 
What the sister would do afterwards was unclear.
 
What the sister would do afterwards was unclear.
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“Thank you, Okiku-nee.”
 
“Thank you, Okiku-nee.”
   
“Why so formal? For Sou-kun, it’s expected that Onee-chan helps!”
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“Why so formal? For Sou-kun, it’s expected that Big Sis helps!”
   
 
But, those who knew the truth smiled wryly. The only person at the scene who wasn’t smiling wryly but still smiling was Akane.
 
But, those who knew the truth smiled wryly. The only person at the scene who wasn’t smiling wryly but still smiling was Akane.

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