Editing Iris on Rainy Days: Dismantling- 3 Days Before

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Outside, it already sank into the total darkness of night time.
 
Outside, it already sank into the total darkness of night time.
   
I walk to the arch door, seeing a black car parked on the road in front of the door.
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I walk to the arch door, seeing a black door parked on the road in front of the door.
   
 
Outside the driver’s seat, a man wearing a suit and a pained expression on his face is standing there. The man is still young, but his face is a sickly white, and his cheeks are sunken like an old man.
 
Outside the driver’s seat, a man wearing a suit and a pained expression on his face is standing there. The man is still young, but his face is a sickly white, and his cheeks are sunken like an old man.

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