Editing Iris on Rainy Days: My Homework
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“Can you hear me?” |
“Can you hear me?” |
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− | She |
+ | She was a young female, with long black hair, a white face, and an artificial product on her face—glasses. |
“Yes, I can hear you.” |
“Yes, I can hear you.” |
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“That’s great.” |
“That’s great.” |
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− | Professor throws herself on the chair. Her black hair covers part of her face, some coiling around her glasses. On her face |
+ | Professor throws herself on the chair. Her black hair covers part of her face, some coiling around her glasses. On her face was apparent fatigue. |
“You have been sleeping for twelve hours.” |
“You have been sleeping for twelve hours.” |
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“I still want to be with Professor!” |
“I still want to be with Professor!” |
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− | I cry and sob like a child. My visual device |
+ | I cry and sob like a child. My visual device was broken, tears overflowing along my cheeks. |
I understand. |
I understand. |