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One day in the spring holidays, a client suddenly appeared at the NEET Detective Agency, an odd Thai girl who was always unusually excited.
 
One day in the spring holidays, a client suddenly appeared at the NEET Detective Agency, an odd Thai girl who was always unusually excited.
   
The bag that her father left behind after disappearing was filled with a hefty sum of money— two hundred million yen.
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In the bag that her father left behind after disappearing, it was filled with a hefty sum of money— two hundred million yen.
   
 
The girl’s request was— “Please save my dad.”
 
The girl’s request was— “Please save my dad.”
   
The young NEET detective, Alice, who wore pajamas and wouldn’t take a step out of her room and I, as her assistant, borrowed the power of Tetsu-senpai, Major and Hiro of the NEET Detective Squad to start our investigation. Even the leader of the juvenile delinquents, Yondaime was dragged into it, the matter developed into an unexpected direction—
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The young NEET detective, Alice, who wore pajamas and wouldn’t take a step out of her room and me as her assistant, borrowed the power of Tetsu-senpai, Major and Hiro of the NEET Detective Squad to start our investigation. Even the leader of the juvenile delinquents, Yondaime was dragged into it, the matter developed into an unexpected direction—
   
 
This is the second episode youthful NEET- Teen Story that was somewhat unbearable, somewhat funny but also with a hint of courage.
 
This is the second episode youthful NEET- Teen Story that was somewhat unbearable, somewhat funny but also with a hint of courage.
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She’s a hikikomori that almost never went out, so her way of ordering people around is quite impolite.
 
She’s a hikikomori that almost never went out, so her way of ordering people around is quite impolite.
   
She thinks that a detective’s assistant (me) is just a useful vacuum machine that can talk.
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She thinks that a detective’s assistant (me) is just a useful vacuum machine that could talk.
   
Being physically weak, she can’t live by herself but she is good at arguing; whenever I complain even a bit, she immediately gives me a five thousand times scolding.
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Being physically weak, can’t live by herself but is good at arguing, whenever I complain even a bit, she would immediately give me a five thousand times scolding.
   
 
Really, why must I do things for this fellow?
 
Really, why must I do things for this fellow?
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Surrounding Alice’s side, the group of people at the boundary of society who would not lose to Alice.
 
Surrounding Alice’s side, the group of people at the boundary of society who would not lose to Alice.
   
No matter what difficulties they encountered, they still wouldn’t give up, wouldn’t turn back and wouldn’t work; those are their principles. Sigh~ I really can’t stand this.
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No matter what difficulties they encounter, they still wouldn’t give up, wouldn’t turn back and wouldn’t work, those are their principles. Sigh~ I really can’t stand this.
   
 
''Tetsu-senpai''
 
''Tetsu-senpai''
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He studied at my school a few years ago and dropped out, and is now an unbeatable pachinko master.
 
He studied at my school a few years ago and dropped out, and is now an unbeatable pachinko master.
   
He learned boxing before and has acute vision like a superman but it is only used to bet on slot machines.
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He learned boxing before, has acute vision like a superman, but it was only used used to bet on slot machines.
   
 
Although he’s quite reliable sometimes, his view of money is absolutely terrible.
 
Although he’s quite reliable sometimes, his view of money is absolutely terrible.
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Although he looked like that, he is definitely a university student, and an unbelievable military otaku.
 
Although he looked like that, he is definitely a university student, and an unbelievable military otaku.
   
Has programming skills that even university professors admire, but it is only used on wire tapping and taking photos secretly.
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Having programming skills that even university professors admire, but it was only used on wire tapping and taking photos secretly.
   
 
''Hiro''
 
''Hiro''
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Though he is often mistaken as a model, he’s actually just a gigolo who stays at women’s houses.
 
Though he is often mistaken as a model, he’s actually just a gigolo who stays at women’s houses.
   
Has an appearance that makes people want to look twice at him and speaking skills that are like mellow wine, but they are only used to hit on girls.
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Having an appearance that made people want to look twice at him and speaking skills that are like mellow wine, but they were only used to hit on girls.
   
 
He made many women cry for him before, and really might be stabbed somewhere some day.
 
He made many women cry for him before, and really might be stabbed somewhere some day.
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He’s very foul-mouthed and impatient, but I’ve heard that he’s very good at taking care of people, even better than the guys in the detective squad.
 
He’s very foul-mouthed and impatient, but I’ve heard that he’s very good at taking care of people, even better than the guys in the detective squad.
   
His hobby is sewing, and he has professional-level skill. I might be killed by him if I accidentally said that out, so I dare not mention it to anyone.
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His hobby is sewing, and he has a professional-level skill. I might be killed by him if I accidentally said that out, so I dare not mention it to anyone.
   
 
''Meo''
 
''Meo''

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