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I wasn’t sure how I stopped spacing out at first. There wasn’t even a shadow of a person on the screens, so I hurriedly looked through the telescope to observe in more detail. A few people could be seen moving in the range of the shop, two workers were squashing a large amount of cardboard boxes behind the vegetable area, while another worker was behind the counter. And also—
 
I wasn’t sure how I stopped spacing out at first. There wasn’t even a shadow of a person on the screens, so I hurriedly looked through the telescope to observe in more detail. A few people could be seen moving in the range of the shop, two workers were squashing a large amount of cardboard boxes behind the vegetable area, while another worker was behind the counter. And also—
   
No, it’s impossible. I focused my whole attention to look at the face of the man who was paying his bill at the counter, from the side. The man in the photo I saw was not wearing glasses, unlike this man, and he was wearing a baseball cap too, making him look even younger. What is he buying? I increased the magnification of the telescope to the max— So it’s a kitchen knife, and…… hair gel? No, is it deodorant? Envelopes, a small item placed in a plastic box, and a lot more odds and ends.
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No, it’s impossible. I focused y whole attention to look at the face of the man who was paying his bill at the counter, from the side. The man in the photo I saw was not wearing glasses, unlike this man, and he was wearing a baseball cap too, making him look even younger. What is he buying? I increased the magnification of the telescope to the max— So it’s a kitchen knife, and…… hair gel? No, is it a deodorant? Envelopes, a small item placed in a plastic box, and a lot more odds and ends.
   
 
Seeing the man walk out of the door after paying his bill, I felt even more certain of it. Other people would not notice it even if they put in more effort to see, but I was very sure of it.
 
Seeing the man walk out of the door after paying his bill, I felt even more certain of it. Other people would not notice it even if they put in more effort to see, but I was very sure of it.
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Sprinting out of the door and running down the stairs of the building, I couldn’t see Kusakabe Masaya’s silhouette by the time I reached the junction. I ignored the red light of the traffic light, rushing in a slanted path to the slope. As the lights of the store could not shine on here, the streets were suddenly plunged into darkness. I saw a silhouette with the corner of my eye, and I immediately chased the person to the alley after running through the road. The sounds of exhaust engines became fainter and fainter. I quickened my steps, going forward on the cold asphalt road. Did he really walk towards this direction? Actually, the silhouette of the man was long gone, so I could only chase him by intuition.
 
Sprinting out of the door and running down the stairs of the building, I couldn’t see Kusakabe Masaya’s silhouette by the time I reached the junction. I ignored the red light of the traffic light, rushing in a slanted path to the slope. As the lights of the store could not shine on here, the streets were suddenly plunged into darkness. I saw a silhouette with the corner of my eye, and I immediately chased the person to the alley after running through the road. The sounds of exhaust engines became fainter and fainter. I quickened my steps, going forward on the cold asphalt road. Did he really walk towards this direction? Actually, the silhouette of the man was long gone, so I could only chase him by intuition.
   
Turning left after going past a few corners, a bone-colored wall appeared in the darkness. It was the sound insulating wall of a construction site; the folding door opened merely thirty centimeters or so.
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Turning left after going past a few corners, a bone-colored wall appeared in the darkness. It was the sound insulating wall of a construction site; the folding door open merely thirty centimeters or so.
   
I tried to have a closer look, and saw that the signboard that should have the names of the construction unit and project had rusted long ago, while the words on it were indiscernible.
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I tried to have a closer look, and saw that the signboard that should have the names of the construction unit and project had rusted long ago, while the words on in was indiscernible.
   
I stealthily poked my head to the other side of the wall. I couldn’t have a good look as it was too dark, only the uneven ground could be seen. There wasn't any large machinery in the construction site, and only a temporarily built hut made of steel plates was at the right corner of the site. It looks like there was some movement at the other side of the window.
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I stealthily poked my head to the other side of the wall. I couldn’t have a good look as it was too dark, only the uneven ground could be seen. There weren’t any large machinery in the construction site, and only a temporarily built hut made of steel plates was at the right corner of the site. It looks like there was some movement at the other side of the window.
   
 
Is it there? Though it looks like it’s suitable to be used as a hideout…… But if that’s just my imagination, what should I do? Besides, is that man really Kusakabe Masaya? I was getting more and more uncertain.
 
Is it there? Though it looks like it’s suitable to be used as a hideout…… But if that’s just my imagination, what should I do? Besides, is that man really Kusakabe Masaya? I was getting more and more uncertain.
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Right at that moment— a faint noise drifted over.
 
Right at that moment— a faint noise drifted over.
   
Originally planning to leave, I stopped. The sound came from the construction site, and it seemed like it came from the hut.
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Originally planning to leave, I stopped. The sound came from the construction site, and it seems like it came from the hut.
   
 
I silently stared at the windows of the hut that was shrouded in darkness. A silhouette was moving in it.
 
I silently stared at the windows of the hut that was shrouded in darkness. A silhouette was moving in it.
   
There was someone inside.
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There’s someone inside.
   
 
I gulped, and stepped into the construction site. The feeling of the sticky mud felt like a swamp that accumulated soft darkness. I lowered my body and went closer to the hut.
 
I gulped, and stepped into the construction site. The feeling of the sticky mud felt like a swamp that accumulated soft darkness. I lowered my body and went closer to the hut.
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It was Kusakabe Masaya. I found him. I actually found him!
 
It was Kusakabe Masaya. I found him. I actually found him!
   
Indeed, he hasn’t left here yet, but why? I listened closely to the contents of the conversation with bated breath. He’s probably on the phone, huh?
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Indeed, he haven’t left here yet, but why? I listened closely to the contents of the conversation with bated breath. He’s probably on the phone, huh?
   
 
“…… No, it’s the flight this weekend. Can’t you help out with that….. Yeah. No, it’s me who’s asking too much from you. Sorry for bothering you at this time.”
 
“…… No, it’s the flight this weekend. Can’t you help out with that….. Yeah. No, it’s me who’s asking too much from you. Sorry for bothering you at this time.”
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Why didn’t I turn back and inform him even though I saw those people?
 
Why didn’t I turn back and inform him even though I saw those people?
   
It was I who abandoned Kusakabe Masaya but it can’t be helped, right? The opposing party is yakuza. What if the guy in the purple shirt remembers me? If I hurried back while Kusakabe Masaya had already escaped, and I was caught instead, wouldn’t that be ironic? So it is better like this, that is—
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It was I who abandoned Kusakabe Masaya But it can’t be helped, right? The opposing party is yakuza. What if the guy in the purple shirt remembers me? If I hurried back while Kusakabe Masaya had already escaped, and I was caught instead, wouldn’t that be ironic? So it is better like this, that is—
   
 
I swallowed my bitter saliva, unsteadily walking past the junction while staring at my feet. The cars that drove on the road horned loudly, driving past my back while brushing against the back of my hair.
 
I swallowed my bitter saliva, unsteadily walking past the junction while staring at my feet. The cars that drove on the road horned loudly, driving past my back while brushing against the back of my hair.
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“…… What are you doing? Why aren’t you answering?”
 
“…… What are you doing? Why aren’t you answering?”
   
“Err…… I never thought that Alice was so worried about me.”
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“Err…… I never thought that Alice was so worried of me.”
   
“Who says that I’m worried about you?” A pillow flew over. “Do you really think that I would be worried for your safety!”
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“Who says that I’m worried of you?” A pillow flew over. “Do you really think that I would be worried of your safety!”
   
 
“Well, didn’t you say that you were worried for my safety yesterday?”
 
“Well, didn’t you say that you were worried for my safety yesterday?”
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“I had enough! You’re a guy who’s so stupid that it’s unforgivable!”
 
“I had enough! You’re a guy who’s so stupid that it’s unforgivable!”
   
As there wasn’t anything else near her that she could throw, Alice could only whack the mat repeatedly while her black hair swayed around.
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As there weren’t anything else near her that she could throw, Alice could only whack the mat repeatedly while her black hair swayed around.
   
 
“I’m really sorry……”
 
“I’m really sorry……”
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Did Kusakabe Masaya really got caught? Major went to his hiding spot to have a look, but it was deserted, as expected. I should’ve at least confirmed if he got away successfully, then we could plan our next actions quickly.
 
Did Kusakabe Masaya really got caught? Major went to his hiding spot to have a look, but it was deserted, as expected. I should’ve at least confirmed if he got away successfully, then we could plan our next actions quickly.
   
“I requested Hirasaka-gumi to monitor Tabara-gumi’s office, and we have Major’s spying devices. If Kusakabe Masaya has really been caught, we would know immediately.”
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“I requested Hirasaka-gumi to monitor Tabara-gumi’s office, and we have Major’s spying devices. If Kusakabe Masaya have really been caught, we would know immediately.”
   
 
Even though she had her back to me, she knew perfectly what I was thinking of.
 
Even though she had her back to me, she knew perfectly what I was thinking of.
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“…… Eh?”
 
“…… Eh?”
   
I even thought that I heard wrongly. But a familiar, fragile light could be seen from her eyes when Alice looked at the bookshelf that was almost flat because of the weight of the machines on it.
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I even thought that I heard wrongly. But a familiar, fragile light could be seem from her eyes when Alice looked at the bookshelf that was almost flat because of the weight of the machines on it.
   
 
“I’ve told you before, the detective that I meant is actually a representative for the deceased. As for Meo, she doesn’t need that at all. Though there aren’t any deaths yet, my fingers have already started to search for the words that would be lost. I detest myself like this, and I don’t want to do that either. Actually, just thinking of the people who are alive would be enough— but I have no choice, my soul is constantly drawn by death. Protecting a person or saving a person, a NEET detective could never do that.”
 
“I’ve told you before, the detective that I meant is actually a representative for the deceased. As for Meo, she doesn’t need that at all. Though there aren’t any deaths yet, my fingers have already started to search for the words that would be lost. I detest myself like this, and I don’t want to do that either. Actually, just thinking of the people who are alive would be enough— but I have no choice, my soul is constantly drawn by death. Protecting a person or saving a person, a NEET detective could never do that.”
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“Are you thinking: Why don’t we just ask Kusakabe Masaya after we successfully rescue him? I really think that it’d be better if I could think like that, but the fate of a NEET detective is to connect with the world through death. So I could only frantically collect information, trying to reconstruct his words, guessing what he is thinking about.”
 
“Are you thinking: Why don’t we just ask Kusakabe Masaya after we successfully rescue him? I really think that it’d be better if I could think like that, but the fate of a NEET detective is to connect with the world through death. So I could only frantically collect information, trying to reconstruct his words, guessing what he is thinking about.”
   
I should really interrupt, or Alice would continue to split hairs. So I tried to think of something to say—
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I should really interrupt, or Alice would continue to split hairs. So I tried to think of something so say—
   
 
“…… Then did you find out?”
 
“…… Then did you find out?”
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Please don’t say that! You’ll cause a misunderstanding.
 
Please don’t say that! You’ll cause a misunderstanding.
   
I was frantically thinking of other topics that didn’t involve Kusakabe Masaya when I suddenly saw the clothes and towels in the paper bag Meo was holding.
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I was frantically thinking of other topics that didn’t involve Kusakaabe Masaya when I suddenly saw the clothes and towels in the paper bag Meo was holding.
   
 
“Having a bath again?”
 
“Having a bath again?”
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“What……!?”
 
“What……!?”
   
Would that be fine? Though I might not be able to marry and have kids, even if I got married somehow, I wouldn’t want children like Alice. They’d hate eating and be fussy, so it would be hard to raise them.
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Would that be fine? Though I might not be able to marry and have kids, even if I got married somehow, I wouldn’t want children like Alice. They’d hate eating and be fussy, so it’ll be hard to raise them.
   
 
“That girl is in a terrible mood right now, so she’ll go on a rampage if you ask her to take a bath. It’s better if you wait for about ten minutes! She’s really a troublesome kid……”
 
“That girl is in a terrible mood right now, so she’ll go on a rampage if you ask her to take a bath. It’s better if you wait for about ten minutes! She’s really a troublesome kid……”
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I could not imagine Kusakabe Masaya’s life as well. Predicting his thought would not only be unbeneficial, it made me more and more confused instead.
 
I could not imagine Kusakabe Masaya’s life as well. Predicting his thought would not only be unbeneficial, it made me more and more confused instead.
   
“So he brought me, who’s about five at that time, to Japan. I think Dad wants more family members, including a wife and kids; he’d feel happy if only he can stay with his family.”
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“So brought me, who’s about five at that time, to Japan. I think Dad wants more family members, including a wife and kids; he’d feel happy if only he can stay with his family.”
   
 
Is that really so?
 
Is that really so?
   
If he really values his family, then why did he run away while not letting Meo contact him? In the end, he should never have let his daughter get involved in such a dangerous matter. Is the two hundred million that important? Isn’t that the pressure of money that he hated the most?
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If he really values his family, then why did he run away while not letting Meo contact him? In the end, he should never have let his daughter to be involved in such a dangerous matter. Is the two hundred million that important? Isn’t that the pressure of money that he hated the most?
   
 
And there’s another thing that I don’t understand.
 
And there’s another thing that I don’t understand.
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“I don’t mean that, I meant a passport for going overseas. For instance to Singapore.”
 
“I don’t mean that, I meant a passport for going overseas. For instance to Singapore.”
   
“Why? I don’t have any plans to go overseas, I've never been there.”
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“Why? I don’t have any plans to go overseas, I never been there.”
   
 
She’s right.
 
She’s right.
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I glanced upwards, only to see Meo cocking her head.
 
I glanced upwards, only to see Meo cocking her head.
   
“He mentioned something like that on the phone, so he probably wants to ask someone he knows to clear things up. And he didn’t contact you.”
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“He mentioned something like that in the phone, so he probably wants to ask someone he knows to clear things up. And he didn’t contact you.”
   
 
“So?”
 
“So?”
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“Tetsu-san, did the Kishiwada-kai take any action? Their place is quite big, so there are probably a lot of places to imprison a person.”
 
“Tetsu-san, did the Kishiwada-kai take any action? Their place is quite big, so there are probably a lot of places to imprison a person.”
   
“No. Though they know about this, the one taking actual action are only the people from Tabara-gumi. We just don’t know their relationship with Hello Corporation, since not many people know of the internal matters about other gangs. If I had known this earlier, I should’ve got acquainted with more members of Kishiwada-kai.”
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“No. Though they know about this, the one taking actual action are only the people from Tabara-gumi. We just don’t know their relationship with Hello Corporation, since not many people knows of the internal matters about other gangs. If I had known this earlier, I should’ve get acquainted with more members of Kishiwada-kai.”
   
 
“But Tetsu-san, don’t you hate those enterprising yakuza?”
 
“But Tetsu-san, don’t you hate those enterprising yakuza?”
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I gave the seat of the large steel bucket to Hiro, while I sat beside Tetsu-senpai on the stairs.
 
I gave the seat of the large steel bucket to Hiro, while I sat beside Tetsu-senpai on the stairs.
   
“There isn’t any news from the office. How about you? Have you seen the secretary?”
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“There aren’t any news from the office. How about you? Have you seen the secretary?”
   
 
Secretary?
 
Secretary?
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‘It’s possible. Why don’t you be a NEET like me? Then we’ll go have a trip for two weeks.’
 
‘It’s possible. Why don’t you be a NEET like me? Then we’ll go have a trip for two weeks.’
   
‘Haha, that doesn’t seem bad. Ah, look at that, there’s a trip to Italy, and it says here that it’s a twelve day trip.’
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‘Haha, that doesn’t seem bad. Ah, look at that, there’s a trip to Italy, and it says here that it’s a twelve days trip.’
   
 
The sound of someone rummaging papers could be heard aside from the conversation, maybe they’re reading magazines?
 
The sound of someone rummaging papers could be heard aside from the conversation, maybe they’re reading magazines?
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"Missed calls log. What a dutiful daughter, calling him so many times."
 
"Missed calls log. What a dutiful daughter, calling him so many times."
   
Meo said that she called her father a lot of times, but nobody answered-- and she used the phone in the shop as well. Why? Why didn't I notice? Why didn't I realize this? My feeling right now is like the part of my body below my waist is buried in snow, while the blood flow to my brain is gradually lost.
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Meo said that she called her father a lot of times, but nobody answered-- and she used the phone in the shop as well. Why? Why didnt' I notice? Why didn't I realize this? My feeling right now is like the part of my body below my waist is buried in snow, while the blood flow to my brain is gradually lost.
   
 
Kusakabe Masaya was indeed caught by these people.
 
Kusakabe Masaya was indeed caught by these people.
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"It's not your fault, so it won't help things even if we blame you."
 
"It's not your fault, so it won't help things even if we blame you."
   
Min-san said to Meo coolly. It was like my heart had frozen over. Is this all my fault? Talking to Meo so many times, I should've noticed it earlier.
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Min-san said to Meo coolly. It was like my heart have frozen over. Is this all my fault? Talking to Meo so many times, I should've noticed it earlier.
   
 
"Why didn't you tell me that even yakuza are involved in this?"
 
"Why didn't you tell me that even yakuza are involved in this?"
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"Bu- But if I stay here......"
 
"Bu- But if I stay here......"
   
"Those guys don't dare to do anything. Didn't one of them hit his partner just now? That is a threat so that their opposing party would know that there's no difference even if they call the police. Because of the yakuza prevention laws, the yakuza wouldn't dare to take action in broad daylight, which is why they did that."
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"Those guys don't dare to do anything. Didn't one of them hit his partner justnow? That is a threat so that their opposing party would know that there's no difference even if they call the police. Because of the yakuza prevention laws, the yakuza wouldn't dare to take action in broad daylight, which is why they did that."
   
 
Min-san petted Meo's head. Meo was going to say something, but was stopped.
 
Min-san petted Meo's head. Meo was going to say something, but was stopped.
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The yakuza took action very quickly, and started to harass the shop from the evening that day. Four or five delinquents gathered outside the entrance of the store. Though the two from the afternoon weren't present, you could see what type of people they were from their appearance and hairstyle.
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The yakuza took action very quickly, and started to harass the shop from the evening that day. Four or five delinquents gathered outside the entrance of the store. Though the two from the afternoon weren't present, you could see what type of people are they from their appearance and hairstyle.
   
 
They're so old-fashioned, really......"
 
They're so old-fashioned, really......"
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Though Min-san said that, she didn't really seem to mind it. They didn't enter the shop or cause trouble, after all. They just sat on the beer crates outside of the shop, sending messages on their phone or glaring at the pedestrians. It's quite thoughtfully planned business obstructing operation, and the effect is quite good, as the customers were too intimidated to enter.
 
Though Min-san said that, she didn't really seem to mind it. They didn't enter the shop or cause trouble, after all. They just sat on the beer crates outside of the shop, sending messages on their phone or glaring at the pedestrians. It's quite thoughtfully planned business obstructing operation, and the effect is quite good, as the customers were too intimidated to enter.
   
Tetsu-senpai and I stayed outside the kitchen backdoor, but we could only look at their actions helplessly. It seemed to me that senpai wanted to go out and KO them at once, but he's just restraining himself. If he really did so, he would fall into their trap.
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Tetsu-senpai and I stayed outside the kitchen backdoor, but we could only look at their actions helplessly. It seemed to me that senpai wanted to go out and KO them at once, but he's just restraining himself. If he really did so, he would fall into their frap.
   
 
"Blast, these guys, these guys, these guys......"
 
"Blast, these guys, these guys, these guys......"

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