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“— Wh- what is it, Fujishima-kun?”
 
“— Wh- what is it, Fujishima-kun?”
   
“I- Ichinomiya? Does that mean Ichinomiya Tetsuo-senpai?”
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“I- Ichinomiya? Does that mean Ichinomiya Testuo-senpai?”
   
A middle-aged teacher with streaks of white hair among his otherwise black hair had a rather awkward expression on his face, it seems that he’s the one who spoke to Hirabayashi-sensei just now. Perhaps he thought that letting other people hear what he said just now isn’t that good, he tried to smooth things over.
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A middle-aged teacher with streaks of white hair among his otherwise black hair had a rather awkward expression on his face, it seems that he’s the one who spoke to Hibayashi-sensei just now. Perhaps he thought that letting other people hear what he said just now isn’t that good, he tried to smooth things over.
   
 
“So you know him? Mnn, it seems that he’s rather well known. He was like a mad dog, lashing out first before anything else whenever he does anything. His grades were terrible as well, and I’ve heard that he’s a rogue up till now.”
 
“So you know him? Mnn, it seems that he’s rather well known. He was like a mad dog, lashing out first before anything else whenever he does anything. His grades were terrible as well, and I’ve heard that he’s a rogue up till now.”
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“It was said that he wasn’t caught because there were no evidence. Since he chose to drop out himself, it shows that he’s really in the wrong. That means Hayano was killed by these people.”
 
“It was said that he wasn’t caught because there were no evidence. Since he chose to drop out himself, it shows that he’s really in the wrong. That means Hayano was killed by these people.”
   
“Tetsu… senpai…… Bu—”
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“Tetsu senpai…… Bu—”
   
I nearly blurted something out in agitation, but immediately swallowed it back again. Hirabayashi-sensei and the other teacher looked rather shocked. I immediately turned around and left, escaping the staff’s office.
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I nearly blurted something out in agitation, but immediately swallowed it back again. Hibayashi-sensei and the other teacher looked rather shocked. I immediately turned around and left, escaping the staff’s office.
   
 
The person who killed Kaoruko-senpai’s brother was actually Tetsu-senpai?
 
The person who killed Kaoruko-senpai’s brother was actually Tetsu-senpai?
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“There’s nothing that you can help with now. That point is the same as usual.”
 
“There’s nothing that you can help with now. That point is the same as usual.”
   
Alice turned over to the monitor in a huff. I knelt on the cold floor, and had no other choice but to retract my arm that I extended towards Alice.
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Alice turned over to the monitor in a huff. I kneeled on the cold floor, and had no other choice but to retract my arm that I extended towards Alice.
   
 
Isn’t it at these times— an assistant detective has to help from the side?
 
Isn’t it at these times— an assistant detective has to help from the side?
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But I couldn’t just say that directly. What should I say first? I finally said after pondering for some time:
 
But I couldn’t just say that directly. What should I say first? I finally said after pondering for some time:
   
“…… Do you know about the Gardening Committee?”
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“…… Do you know about the Guardening Committee?”
   
 
Ayaka shook her head. She doesn’t know? Or was the memory just sunk in her swamp of memories?
 
Ayaka shook her head. She doesn’t know? Or was the memory just sunk in her swamp of memories?
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But…...
 
But…...
   
I raised my head, and coincidentally met Ayaka’s uneasy gaze as she was tightly holding onto the kitchen backdoor.
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I raised my head, and coincidentally met Akaya’s uneasy gaze as she was tightly holding onto the kitchen backdoor.
   
 
To me, there’s something that I have to protect as well. Even if Ayaka had long forgotten how important those things are, even if it’s only a mirage that exists only in my heart.
 
To me, there’s something that I have to protect as well. Even if Ayaka had long forgotten how important those things are, even if it’s only a mirage that exists only in my heart.
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‘That isn’t wrong. I feel rather happy about this. Okay, relax. Though Ayaka is a hundred million times more considerate about small details than you, she doesn’t have the talent to do a manzai, so she can’t have the job of an assistant.’
 
‘That isn’t wrong. I feel rather happy about this. Okay, relax. Though Ayaka is a hundred million times more considerate about small details than you, she doesn’t have the talent to do a manzai, so she can’t have the job of an assistant.’
   
“So an assistant’s job is to do tsukkomis with the boss……?”
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“So an assistant’s job is to do tsukomis with the boss……?”
   
 
‘Don’t you think so?’
 
‘Don’t you think so?’
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The other man who once set the base for the gang, who was also Yondaime’s inseparable friend— disappeared not long after that. The reason for that wasn’t clear, and only his name was left on the signboard of the gang.
 
The other man who once set the base for the gang, who was also Yondaime’s inseparable friend— disappeared not long after that. The reason for that wasn’t clear, and only his name was left on the signboard of the gang.
   
The nameplate on the letterbox of the first floor had ‘Hirasaka’ written on it. I closely observed Hirasaka-gumi’s emblem that was exactly the same as the family emblem of the prestigious family during the olden times of Japan, ‘Heishi’, which was a swallowtail butterfly as well…… The reason that I’m thinking about these is just because the elevator still hadn’t come down. Did it break down again?
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The nameplate on the letterbox of the first floor had ‘Hirasaka’ written on it. I closely observed Hirasaka-gumi’s emblem that was exactly the same as the family emblem of the prestiged family during the olden times of Japan, ‘Heishi’, which was a swallowtail butterfly as well…… The reason that I’m thinking about these is just because the elevator still hadn’t come down. Did it break down again?
   
 
It really can’t be helped, I think it’s better if I just use the emergency stairs. As I was about to walk out, I met a man in a black T-shirt on the streets.
 
It really can’t be helped, I think it’s better if I just use the emergency stairs. As I was about to walk out, I met a man in a black T-shirt on the streets.
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“How would Tetsu-ojiki do such a thing!?”
 
“How would Tetsu-ojiki do such a thing!?”
   
The tip of Miyabe-senpai’s feet were raised about two centimeters from the floor. Seeing senpai suffocating because of his neck being throttled, legs flailing non-stop, I hurriedly went forward to halt him.
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The tip of Hayabe-senpai’s feet were raised about two centimeters from the floor. Seeing senpai suffocating because of his neck being throttled, legs flailing non-stop, I hurriedly went forward to halt him.
   
 
“P- please don’t do that!”
 
“P- please don’t do that!”
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“I recall that I’ve seen the name of the Head Inspector before this.”
 
“I recall that I’ve seen the name of the Head Inspector before this.”
   
Alice remembers this person? Would that be because Tetsu-senpai told her that? As Ayaka was still combing Alice’s hair, Alice pulled the moveable table by her computer desk to her side, then typed on the computer to bring out a the window of a search engine on one of her monitors. Sounds of typing that were like machine guns rang in the room.
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Alice remembers this person? Would that be because Tetsu-senpai told her that? As Ayaka was still combing Alice’s hair, Alice pulled the moveable table by her computer dest to her side, then typed on the computer to bring out a the window of a search engine on one of her monitors. Sounds of typing that were like machine guns rang in the room.
   
 
“According to the student handbook of your school, opening a new club must pass the Inspector’s trials. As for the rude and puzzling process of the opening of the Gardening Club, the involvement of the Head Inspector is quite probable. It’s like he’s looking at a club that he’s already decided to open. If this happens nowadays, it would be a huge joke.”
 
“According to the student handbook of your school, opening a new club must pass the Inspector’s trials. As for the rude and puzzling process of the opening of the Gardening Club, the involvement of the Head Inspector is quite probable. It’s like he’s looking at a club that he’s already decided to open. If this happens nowadays, it would be a huge joke.”

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