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A handful of people coming out from the station, and a handful walking from the station to the shopping district. Everything was usual, advancing quickly.
 
A handful of people coming out from the station, and a handful walking from the station to the shopping district. Everything was usual, advancing quickly.
   
Among these people, Yuichi Aizawa looked like a strange visitor. He pulled the scarf over his nose, shoved his hands into his pockets, and sat on the damp wooden bench.
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Among these people, Yuichi Aizawa looked like a strange visitor. He pulled the scarf over his nose, shoved his hands into his pocket, and sat on the damp wooden bench.
   
 
It wasn’t his first time here, but it had been long since his last visit.
 
It wasn’t his first time here, but it had been long since his last visit.
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He thought he would at last settle down in these years, yet things happened otherwise.
 
He thought he would at last settle down in these years, yet things happened otherwise.
   
“I heard it’s during spring, but after a year, probably he’ll need to move again.”
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“I heard it’s at spring, but after a year, probably he’ll need to move again.”
   
 
“Okay.”
 
“Okay.”
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His mother answered a town of the north.
 
His mother answered a town of the north.
   
“Do you still remember? That town you always went to at the summer break when you were in primary school.”
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“Do you still remember? That town you always went to at the summer break when you’re at primary school.”
   
 
“Oh.”
 
“Oh.”
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Is it that town? But, that town…
 
Is it that town? But, that town…
   
“When you were there the first time, you must have thought snow peculiar. We always paid a visit to the Minase family. They have a daughter…what was she called again? Don’t you get along quite well with that cousin of yours?”
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“When you’re there the first time, you must have thought snow peculiar. We always paid a visit to the Minase family. They have a daughter…what was she called again? Don’t you get along quite well with that cousin of yours?”
   
 
“Is that so?”
 
“Is that so?”
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''I didn’t know for sure what the reason was.''
 
''I didn’t know for sure what the reason was.''
   
''I do remember I had gone to the town several times. But what I did or what happened was long lost.''
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''I do remember I had went to the town several times. But what I did or what happened was long lost.''
   
 
Lost were such memories, as if they had turned white.
 
Lost were such memories, as if they had turned white.
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Yuichi had a strong reluctance, but he couldn’t explain since he couldn’t remember the reason.
 
Yuichi had a strong reluctance, but he couldn’t explain since he couldn’t remember the reason.
   
The matters with the Minase family went pretty quick. At first, the whole family planned to move together in spring, but since they had to deal with the paperwork for transferring to the school, Yuichi had to go first.
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The matters with the Minase family went pretty quick. At first, the whole family planned to move together at spring, but since they had to deal with the homework for transferring to the school, Yuichi had to go first.
   
 
And the day had come.
 
And the day had come.
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Yuichi continued to sit without twitching, as if protesting against the cold, white air, as well as the person who made him suffer by making him wait.
 
Yuichi continued to sit without twitching, as if protesting against the cold, white air, as well as the person who made him suffer by making him wait.
   
The longest time he could put up with this town was until his graduation, he asserted himself. Although it wasn’t a pleasant idea for his mum, he had to live by himself and go off one day anyway. If he kept living in this cold and dull town, he was certain he would become cold and dull himself.
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The longest time he could put up with this town was until his graduation, he asserted himself. Although it wasn’t a pleasant idea to his mum, he had to live by himself and go off one day anyway. If he kept living in this cold and dull town, he was certain he would become cold and dull himself.
   
 
Suddenly, the cold air calmed.
 
Suddenly, the cold air calmed.
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The snow was piling up, even the wind was raging…yet…
 
The snow was piling up, even the wind was raging…yet…
   
Beside Yuichi appeared a pair of brown female shoes. Along the shoes, he glanced, were two slim legs, a uniform he had never seen, and long and straight hair.
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Beside Yuichi appeared a pair of brown female shoes. Along the shoes, he glanced, were two slim legs, uniform he had never seen, and long and straight hair.
   
 
Under the snowing sky, the girl looked at Yuichi.
 
Under the snowing sky, the girl looked at Yuichi.
   
Gentle eyes with a dip of dreamy slumber called forth his memories. It was more feminine than the one in primary school, but they were the same eyes.
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Gentle eyes with a dip of dreamy slumber called forth his memories. It was more feminine than the one at primary school, but they were the same eyes.
   
 
“The snow…is piling up.”
 
“The snow…is piling up.”
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“Woah. What.”
 
“Woah. What.”
   
She spoke with a leisurely tone, in contrast with her words.
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She spoke with a leisure tone, in contrast with her words.
   
 
“I thought it was just around two.”
 
“I thought it was just around two.”
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He didn’t make it again.
 
He didn’t make it again.
   
Yuichi plucked the ring of the can and drank the coffee in one gulp. The warm sensation spread out from his stomach to his whole body. Making a light sound, he stood up, patted off the snow, and flexed his muscles.
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Yuichi plucked the ring of the can and drank the coffee in one gulp. The warm sensation spread off from his stomach to his whole body. Making a light sound, he stood up, patted off the snow, and flexed his muscles.
   
 
“So, let’s go?”
 
“So, let’s go?”
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Yuichi glanced at the streets again.
 
Yuichi glanced at the streets again.
   
The tall building in front of the station, the car terminal, and the shopping district. If there wasn't any snow, it could have been just any other street Yuichi had lived in before.
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The tall building in front of the station, the car terminal, and the shopping district. If there weren’t any snow, it was just any other street Yuichi had lived in originally.
   
 
Streets he hadn’t gone to for seven years.
 
Streets he hadn’t gone to for seven years.

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