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That day, I chose to take the main street home. |
That day, I chose to take the main street home. |
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| + | It was just on a whim; a very rare thing for me to do. |
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| + | Walking woodenly along the building street that I was tired of seeing, someone fell. |
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| − | It was just a whim, and a very rare thing for me to do. |
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| + | It was a squishing sound that you normally never hear. |
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| + | The person obviously died from falling off a building. |
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| − | Walking woodenly along the building-lined street that I was tired of seeing day in and day out, someone came crashing down. |
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| + | A crimson color spread across the pavement. |
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| + | The only features that remained were the dark, black hair and the thin, white fragile arms and legs. |
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| − | It was a squishing sound that isn't usually heard. |
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| − | The person lying on the pavement, broken, had obviously died from falling off a building. |
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| − | A crimson color slowly seeped onto the concrete. |
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| − | The only features that remained were the dark black hair and the pale, thin, fragile-looking limbs. |
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And that featureless, crushed face. |
And that featureless, crushed face. |
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| − | The whole scene reminded me of a |
+ | The whole scene reminded me of a flattened flower, tucked between the pages of an old book. |
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| − | Probably because the corpse, with only its neck bent like a fetus, looked like a broken lily to me. |
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| + | Probably because the corpse, with only the head deformed like a baby's, looked like a broken lily to me... |
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／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie- |
／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie- |
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