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It was raining on that day too. After my first murder, I washed myself off in the rain. After that, I was able to meet that person. That person who I met only once in middle school and with whom <!-- I'm bad at "who/whom" distinction, but I think in this case it's "who"; Georgi: whom is quite rare, usually after “with” or “to” --> I only talked for the briefest of moments.
 
It was raining on that day too. After my first murder, I washed myself off in the rain. After that, I was able to meet that person. That person who I met only once in middle school and with whom <!-- I'm bad at "who/whom" distinction, but I think in this case it's "who"; Georgi: whom is quite rare, usually after “with” or “to” --> I only talked for the briefest of moments.
   
... Yes, I remember. It was a time when the sun was setting. After an event at school, a Senpai from a different school talked to me, who was still on the field. I could not move because I had sprained my ankle. Since I am pain insensitive, I actually could move and even if I shouldn't move, it had no effect on me mentally. But my swollen ankle was telling me that it would get worse if I moved any more. All I could do was watch the sunset without feeling anything. At that time, I did not call for help. I did not want to call for help. If I did, everyone would tell me...
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... Yes, I remember. It was a time when the sun was setting. After an event at school, a Senpai from a different school talked to me, who was still on the field. I could not move because I had sprained my ankle. Since I am pain insensitive, I actually could move and even if I wdid move, it had no effect on me mentally. But my swollen ankle was telling me that it would get worse if I moved any more. All I could do was watch the sunset without feeling anything. At that time, I did not call for help. I did not want to call for help. If I did, everyone would tell me...
 
"You endured quite a bit of pain."
 
"You endured quite a bit of pain."
 
"Does it hurt?"
 
"Does it hurt?"

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