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No --- that wasn't all. She can't feel this man's presence although she is looking right at him, that fact steals away all of the composure she had maintained till then.<br>
 
No --- that wasn't all. She can't feel this man's presence although she is looking right at him, that fact steals away all of the composure she had maintained till then.<br>
   
"... This is an amusing turn of events. If all had gone according to plan this meeting should have come after this side was completed."<br>
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"... This is an amusing turn of events. If all had gone to plan this meeting should have come after this side was completed."<br>
   
Heavy, the mage speaks with a voice that sounds like it could bring a listener to their knees.<br>
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Heavy, the mage speaks with a voice sounds like it could bring a listener to their knees.<br>
   
 
One step, the man comes forward.<br>
 
One step, the man comes forward.<br>
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Narrowly escaping to a place untouched by the triple circle around the mage, Shiki kneels with one leg on the floor.<br>
 
Narrowly escaping to a place untouched by the triple circle around the mage, Shiki kneels with one leg on the floor.<br>
   
Whether it was because of the pain from having her face squeezed, or because she had focused her awareness to look for the mage's faint lines of death. Shiki's breathing is ragged as she looks at the floor she is kneeling upon.<br>
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Whether it was because of the pain from having her face squeezed, or because she had focussed her awareness to look for the mage's faint lines of death. Shiki's breathing is ragged as she looks at the floor she is kneeling upon.<br>
   
 
The distance between the two, once again it has widened.<br>
 
The distance between the two, once again it has widened.<br>
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Shiki says that with the knife reversed in her grip.<br>
 
Shiki says that with the knife reversed in her grip.<br>
   
"I know wards too. At a testing ground you lay out a ward to prevent a woman from entering holy ground. There are stories of how women who enter turn to stone, but a ward is only a boundary. The inside of the circle isn't the ward. That boundary is a sorcerous wall that stops others.<br>
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"I know wards too. At a testing ground you lay out a ward to prevent a woman from entering holy ground. There are stories of how woman who enter turn to stone, but a ward is only a boundary. The inside of the circle isn't the ward. That boundary is a sorcerous wall that stops others.<br>
   
 
In that case --- if the line disappears, that power is lost."<br>
 
In that case --- if the line disappears, that power is lost."<br>

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