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The mage's discourse continues.<br>
 
The mage's discourse continues.<br>
   
"As a reference, I do not die. My origin is 'suspension'. Someone who has woken to their origin becomes ruled by that origin itself. Someone who has already stopped - how can you kill him?"<br>
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"As a reference, I do not die. My origin is 'suspension'. Someone who has woken to their origin, gets ruled by that origin itself. Someone who has already stopped, how can you kill him."<br>
   
 
Shiki doesn't reply.<br>
 
Shiki doesn't reply.<br>
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She threw away all her emotions, and bent all her energies to finding those faint lines upon the man's body.<br>
 
She threw away all her emotions, and bent all her energies to finding those faint lines upon the man's body.<br>
   
Ignoring both the paralysing despair running riot in her body and the pain crushing her face, she tries to find that one breach.<br>
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Ignoring both the paralysing despair running riot in her body, and the pain crushing her face, she tries to find that one breach.<br>
   
 
But before she could.<br>
 
But before she could.<br>
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"--- That's right. The face is useless."<br>
 
"--- That's right. The face is useless."<br>
   
An emotionless voice. The mage puts strength into his arm for the first time.<br>
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An emotionless voice, the mage puts strength into his arm for the first time.<br>
   
 
Crackle, the sound of bone breaking can be heard.<br>
 
Crackle, the sound of bone breaking can be heard.<br>
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Having cut off the mage's arm at the elbow while still in that floating position, Shiki pulled off the hand clinging to her face and quickly pulled back.<br>
 
Having cut off the mage's arm at the elbow while still in that floating position, Shiki pulled off the hand clinging to her face and quickly pulled back.<br>
   
Thwock. The black arm falls to the floor.<br>
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Thwock, the black arm falls to the floor.<br>
   
 
Narrowly escaping to a place untouched by the triple circle around the mage, Shiki kneels with one leg on the floor.<br>
 
Narrowly escaping to a place untouched by the triple circle around the mage, Shiki kneels with one leg on the floor.<br>

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