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... In the centre of his body, she can see a hole in the middle of his chest.<br>
 
... In the centre of his body, she can see a hole in the middle of his chest.<br>
   
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The line went round and round like a child's doodling, tracing a circle at the same place. The result was what looked like a hole.<br>
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Going round and round like some child's scribbling the line is drawing a circle at one point. That might explain why it looks like a dot.<br>
   
 
"--- I know you, you bastard."<br>
 
"--- I know you, you bastard."<br>

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