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-At the very least, for a few more seconds.
 
-At the very least, for a few more seconds.
   
“………Ua!?”
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“………ua!?”
   
 
Before 10 minutes had passed since leaving, Alta (Alter?) Ayano received a strong hit from the side. She immediately retreated a few steps in order to subdue the impact. Although she somehow avoided falling down, the paper bags she was holding hit the ground.
 
Before 10 minutes had passed since leaving, Alta (Alter?) Ayano received a strong hit from the side. She immediately retreated a few steps in order to subdue the impact. Although she somehow avoided falling down, the paper bags she was holding hit the ground.
   
“What are you doing – uh!?”
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“what are you doing – uh!?”
   
 
The instant she started shouting at the aggressor, her face became stiff. Before her eyes was a smiling, beautiful woman in the middle of her twenties she had met a few times before. Her thoughts stopped by an ominous premonition, Ayano could only stare dumbly at the woman.
 
The instant she started shouting at the aggressor, her face became stiff. Before her eyes was a smiling, beautiful woman in the middle of her twenties she had met a few times before. Her thoughts stopped by an ominous premonition, Ayano could only stare dumbly at the woman.
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Facing a petrified Ayano the woman greeted her with an out of place cheerful salute.
 
Facing a petrified Ayano the woman greeted her with an out of place cheerful salute.
   
“This may be sudden, but I’m leaving it to you.”
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“This may be sudden, but I’m leaving it to you”
   
 
The white finger indicated something behind Ayano. The three running men she saw instinctively turned her head around – every one of them were two meters tall.
 
The white finger indicated something behind Ayano. The three running men she saw instinctively turned her head around – every one of them were two meters tall.
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Simultaneously, the sound of the defeated men getting up can be heard.
 
Simultaneously, the sound of the defeated men getting up can be heard.
   
“...............Hm!?”
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“...............hm!?”
   
 
Astonished, Ayano looks over her shoulder. It was an impossible thing. The degree of damage can’t be compensated by something like durability or will-power.
 
Astonished, Ayano looks over her shoulder. It was an impossible thing. The degree of damage can’t be compensated by something like durability or will-power.
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Starring at the decomposing body clad in worn-out armor, Ayano mutters in blank amazement.
 
Starring at the decomposing body clad in worn-out armor, Ayano mutters in blank amazement.
   
“These guys they’re possessed......you!!”
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“These guys there’re possessed......you!!”
   
 
Unintentionally forgetting about the crisis right in front of her, she turns around. She shouts, letting anger take its natural course:
 
Unintentionally forgetting about the crisis right in front of her, she turns around. She shouts, letting anger take its natural course:
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“A public servant using a civilian to do her work!”
 
“A public servant using a civilian to do her work!”
   
“Well – don’t say that. Look look! They’re coming from behind.”
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“Well – don’t say that. Look look! they’re coming from behind.”
   
 
Certainly this was not the place for carefree quarrels. The men, possessed by the spirits of the dead, drew near for a second time.
 
Certainly this was not the place for carefree quarrels. The men, possessed by the spirits of the dead, drew near for a second time.
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She repeated the process twice again.
 
She repeated the process twice again.
   
“............Fuuuu”
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“............fuuuu”
   
 
After cleansing the three spirits through fire, Ayano took a light breath.
 
After cleansing the three spirits through fire, Ayano took a light breath.
   
From behind indifferent applause can be heard.
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From behind indifferent applauses can be heard.
   
 
“<<Well done!>> it’s what I’d like to say now but you really took your time. Weren’t purification flames supposed to destroy only evil?”
 
“<<Well done!>> it’s what I’d like to say now but you really took your time. Weren’t purification flames supposed to destroy only evil?”
   
“I’m sorry for being so inexperienced.”
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“I’m sorry for being so inexperienced”
   
 
Turning her body the other way, Ayano replied with a very threatening tone.
 
Turning her body the other way, Ayano replied with a very threatening tone.
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Therefore, her plan consisted of the following: before materializing her power as flames she is releasing it as a “heat” that won’t damage the human body, continually knocking out the departed souls that try to escape.
 
Therefore, her plan consisted of the following: before materializing her power as flames she is releasing it as a “heat” that won’t damage the human body, continually knocking out the departed souls that try to escape.
   
As a matter of course, this is a reckless and difficult operation. Taking as much time for the likes of departed souls, it can’t be helped that the famous Kannagi name could be distrusted, on account of such rumors.
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As a matter of course, this is a reckless and difficult operation. Taking s much time for the likes of departed souls, it can’t be helped that the famous Kannagi name could be distrusted, on account of such rumors.
   
 
However, Ayano has no intention of taking such criticism obediently. She thought so from the bottom of her heart: “this woman” has no right to complain.
 
However, Ayano has no intention of taking such criticism obediently. She thought so from the bottom of her heart: “this woman” has no right to complain.
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Calling her especially by the overlong job title, as a matter of course this is a form of harassment. The Chief of the country’s one and only government organization for vanquishing evil, the person on the position of protecting the nation from spiritual disasters, isn’t it absurd to drag civilians in her troubles? This is why.
 
Calling her especially by the overlong job title, as a matter of course this is a form of harassment. The Chief of the country’s one and only government organization for vanquishing evil, the person on the position of protecting the nation from spiritual disasters, isn’t it absurd to drag civilians in her troubles? This is why.
   
“Well – don’t say that. You’re not someone unrelated.”
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“Well – don’t say that. You’re not someone unrelated”
   
 
But the woman, Kirika was very composed. Being spoken to by this beautiful woman so over familiarly, Ayano answers in a freezing tone:
 
But the woman, Kirika was very composed. Being spoken to by this beautiful woman so over familiarly, Ayano answers in a freezing tone:
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“If I were to tell you that’s not all, would you get angry?”
 
“If I were to tell you that’s not all, would you get angry?”
   
“........Tch!”
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“........tch!”
   
 
Forcefully turning around, Ayano observes. Drawing near unnoticed, a crowd of men and women of all ages undoubtedly possessed by the spirits of the dead. There were roughly thirty of them. In the middle of this bizarre atmosphere the pedestrians that happened to be present by chance become noisy.
 
Forcefully turning around, Ayano observes. Drawing near unnoticed, a crowd of men and women of all ages undoubtedly possessed by the spirits of the dead. There were roughly thirty of them. In the middle of this bizarre atmosphere the pedestrians that happened to be present by chance become noisy.
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“Can you exorcise them all like you did earlier?”
 
“Can you exorcise them all like you did earlier?”
   
“Absolutely impossible,” stated Ayano without hesitating for a moment.
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“Absolutely impossible” stated Ayano without hesitating for a moment.
   
 
“The sensitivity required for tuning the necessary caloric value is preposterous and for so many opponents gathered, I should burn half of them.”
 
“The sensitivity required for tuning the necessary caloric value is preposterous and for so many opponents gathered, I should burn half of them.”
   
“That’s dreadful.”
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“That’s dreadful”
   
 
Imagining the gruesome spectacle, Kirika murmured in a monotonous tone.
 
Imagining the gruesome spectacle, Kirika murmured in a monotonous tone.
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“Well then, should we run away?”
 
“Well then, should we run away?”
   
“Do your best then.”
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“Do your best then”
   
 
Kirika is suspiciously watching over Ayano’s “this is none of my business” reply.
 
Kirika is suspiciously watching over Ayano’s “this is none of my business” reply.
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“Will you not help me?”
 
“Will you not help me?”
   
“I didn’t receive such a commission. If you live through it, call me later and explain the situation.”
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“I didn’t receive such a commission. If you live through it, call me later and explain the situation”
   
 
With those words Ayano tries to leave but watching the crowd blocking her path, she scowls.
 
With those words Ayano tries to leave but watching the crowd blocking her path, she scowls.
   
“Hey! The one you’re aiming at is right there.”
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“Hey! The one you’re aiming at is right there”
   
 
Of course the spirits don’t answer. The possessed flesh moves with a somewhat supernatural ability, wiggling, and with no hesitation and killing intent faces Ayano.
 
Of course the spirits don’t answer. The possessed flesh moves with a somewhat supernatural ability, wiggling, and with no hesitation and killing intent faces Ayano.
   
“.........What is this?” a doubtful Ayano. The answer comes from the back.
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“.........what is this?” a doubtful Ayano. The answer comes from the back.
   
 
“Ah, as I thought”
 
“Ah, as I thought”
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“Be silent for a little bit, you public servant failure!”
 
“Be silent for a little bit, you public servant failure!”
   
Leaving behind boos somewhat filled with anguish, both of them managed a speedy flight.
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Leaving behind boos somewhat filled with anguish both of them managed a speedy flight.
   
 
“Ha...ha...for the time being we’ve done it right?”
 
“Ha...ha...for the time being we’ve done it right?”
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“So it seems...”
 
“So it seems...”
   
Hiding themselves in a deserted, empty building, Ayano and Kirika muttered so, greedily devouring oxygen. As one would expect, a thirty minute sprint at full power was very demanding. Both of them were short of breath.
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Hiding themselves in a deserted, empty building, Ayano and Kirika muttered so, greedily devouring oxygen. As one would expect a thirty minutes sprint at full power was very demanding. Both of them were short of breath.
   
“By the way, I think it’s time you start explaining these circumstances.”
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“By the way, I think it’s time you start explaining these circumstances”
   
“Ah that’s right. I forgot.”
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“Ah that’s right. I forgot”
   
 
Seeing Kirika clap her hands, truly having forgotten to explain, Ayano sends her way a somewhat cynical, bitter smile.
 
Seeing Kirika clap her hands, truly having forgotten to explain, Ayano sends her way a somewhat cynical, bitter smile.
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“Settling scores?”
 
“Settling scores?”
   
“Yes. In this business, it’s only natural to incur various people’s enmity. Particularly some puny organization like the Special Data Arrangement who does whatever it wants with the power of the State. The criticism can be severe, in various ways.”
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“Yes. In this business, it’s only natural to incur various people’s enmity. Particularly some puny organization like the Special Data Arrangement who does whatever it wants with the power of the State. The criticism can be severe, in various ways”
   
“Hmmm...well, that may be true...” Ayano nodded vaguely.
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“Hmmm...Well, that may be true...” Ayano nodded vaguely.
   
 
The girl’s family can be considered the industry’s leader so she doesn’t really get the sorrows of this type of puny organization.
 
The girl’s family can be considered the industry’s leader so she doesn’t really get the sorrows of this type of puny organization.
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Ayano tried to remember, but it didn’t come out easily.
 
Ayano tried to remember, but it didn’t come out easily.
   
“If it’s Ayano-chan I’m sure that you heard about him before. He’s a celebrity.”
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“If it’s Ayano-chan I’m sure that you heard about him before. He’s a celebrity”
   
 
“That so? ... well it’s impossible for a necromancer who can simultaneously manipulate thirty spirits of the dead to be nameless.”
 
“That so? ... well it’s impossible for a necromancer who can simultaneously manipulate thirty spirits of the dead to be nameless.”
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“What about you? You can’t perform spirit exorcism is spite of being an Onmyoji?”
 
“What about you? You can’t perform spirit exorcism is spite of being an Onmyoji?”
   
“Of course I can. I’ve done it for thirty bodies or so but then I ran out of charms.”
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“Of course I can. I’ve done it for thirty bodies or so but then I ran out of charms”
   
 
“That so...”
 
“That so...”
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“Charmless Onmyoji, ordinary man, right?” Ayano hums spontaneously, Kirika retorts with coolness:
 
“Charmless Onmyoji, ordinary man, right?” Ayano hums spontaneously, Kirika retorts with coolness:
   
“It doesn’t rhyme.”
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“It doesn’t rime”
   
 
“You’re noisy!”
 
“You’re noisy!”
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“Well...” Kirika slowly opens her mouth:
 
“Well...” Kirika slowly opens her mouth:
   
“If it’s just the two of us, we can’t win in this situation. If that’s the case, we have no choice but to call for reinforcement.”
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“If it’s just the two of us, we can’t win in this situation. If that’s the case, we have no choice but to call reinforcement”
   
 
“Who? One of your subordinates?”
 
“Who? One of your subordinates?”
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Certainly, ability wise he was the most reliable man. '''Ability wise'''
 
Certainly, ability wise he was the most reliable man. '''Ability wise'''
   
“........Fine, will you call him?”
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“........fine, will you call him?”
   
 
To Ayano who reluctantly agreed, Kirika sends a meaningful smile.
 
To Ayano who reluctantly agreed, Kirika sends a meaningful smile.
   
“.......What?”
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“.......what?”
   
“Err, nothing in particular. Then, please get in touch with him.”
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“Err, nothing in particular. Then, please get in touch with him”
   
 
“Why me!?” Ayano unintentionally shouted. “It’s better if you call him, right? Because you two have a much more ''friendlier'' relationship!”
 
“Why me!?” Ayano unintentionally shouted. “It’s better if you call him, right? Because you two have a much more ''friendlier'' relationship!”
 
The first time Ayano met Kirika, she and Kazuma were leaving the red-light district, arms linked. That’s why Ayano firmly believes these two have “that kind of relationship.”
 
The first time Ayano met Kirika, she and Kazuma were leaving the red-light district, arms linked. That’s why Ayano firmly believes these two have “that kind of relationship.”
   
“That’s not true. If it’s Ayano-chan, he’ll answer the phone. So, please?”
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“That’s not true. It it’s Ayano-chan, he’ll answer the phone. So, please?”
   
 
“............................”
 
“............................”
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Maybe because he knows it was Ayano, or maybe he does it for everyone – anyway, the voice reaching Ayano’s ears is excessively self-important.
 
Maybe because he knows it was Ayano, or maybe he does it for everyone – anyway, the voice reaching Ayano’s ears is excessively self-important.
   
“Ah, Kazuma? I have a favor –”
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“Ah, Kazuma? I have a favor – ”
   
“I refuse.”
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“I refuse”
   
 
The answer comes back lightning fast. For a short while Ayano is silenced but she corrects herself in a low voice:
 
The answer comes back lightning fast. For a short while Ayano is silenced but she corrects herself in a low voice:
   
“I have a job request.”
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“I have a job request”
   
“Say it.”
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“Say it”
   
 
“................”
 
“................”
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She tried to be as lovely as possible. But – it was useless.
 
She tried to be as lovely as possible. But – it was useless.
   
“Haaaaaaaaaaaaa, an endless, deep sigh reached her ears. And then.....
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“Haaaaaaaaaaaaa”, an endless, deep sigh reached her ears. And then.....
   
 
“Did your brains go bad or something!!”
 
“Did your brains go bad or something!!”
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“As I thought it turned out well because you did the talking, right?”
 
“As I thought it turned out well because you did the talking, right?”
   
“I wonder...” Kirika responds to Ayano, who looks displeased, with a mature smile full of composure.
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“I wonder...”, Kirika responds to Ayano, who looks displeased, with a mature smile full of composure.
   
 
For some reason or another, feeling she is losing the mental battle, Ayano changes the subject.
 
For some reason or another, feeling she is losing the mental battle, Ayano changes the subject.
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“It would have been ideal...”
 
“It would have been ideal...”
   
“Your everyday behavior must be very sinful, am I right?”
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“You’re everyday behavior must be very sinful, am I right?”
   
 
Standing up Ayano is brushing off the dust from her skirt.
 
Standing up Ayano is brushing off the dust from her skirt.
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Lightly kicking the floor, Ayano’s silhouette vanished in a blur. Swiftly rushing in, her high speed movement is like she can leap over time restrains. Instantly plunging into the man’s chest she thrusts her elbow, using the force of the rush. Through the blow, purification power is pumped into his face. The golden radiance doesn’t allow any escape and the spirit dwelling on the man is burned to nothing.
 
Lightly kicking the floor, Ayano’s silhouette vanished in a blur. Swiftly rushing in, her high speed movement is like she can leap over time restrains. Instantly plunging into the man’s chest she thrusts her elbow, using the force of the rush. Through the blow, purification power is pumped into his face. The golden radiance doesn’t allow any escape and the spirit dwelling on the man is burned to nothing.
   
“Oh, that did the trick.”
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“Oh, that did the trick”
   
“That so? He’s kind of burning.”
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“That so? He’s kind of burning”
   
 
Overlooking the man emitting fumes from here and there, Kirika says a touching, silent prayer.
 
Overlooking the man emitting fumes from here and there, Kirika says a touching, silent prayer.
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There is just one flaw. Following Ronald’s will manipulating the spirits and finding his location. The only way is to strike at him. But –
 
There is just one flaw. Following Ronald’s will manipulating the spirits and finding his location. The only way is to strike at him. But –
   
“The Enjutsushi whose only merit are combat abilities and the Onmyoji trying to escape with all her might, can you do it...?
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“The Enjutsushi whose only merit are combat abilities and the Onmyoji trying to escape with all her might, can you do it?.....”
   
 
With absolute confidence, Ronald sneered. Even the Enjutsushi’s flames are not scary if the person can avoid them. Departed souls and the like are after all pieces who have no choice but to do his work as a substitution.
 
With absolute confidence, Ronald sneered. Even the Enjutsushi’s flames are not scary if the person can avoid them. Departed souls and the like are after all pieces who have no choice but to do his work as a substitution.
   
“Perhaps capturing the Enjutsushi’s soul could be fun. If it retains even a small portion of the power it has alive, maybe I can use it.”
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“Perhaps capturing the Enjutsushi’s soul could be fun. If it retains even a small portion of the power it has alive, maybe I can use it.
   
“Stop it. That one’s is probably really hard to manipulate.”
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“Stop it. That one’s is probably really hard to manipulate”
   
 
That answer reached his ears much too naturally. Searching for the rebuttal words, Ronald turned around in terror.
 
That answer reached his ears much too naturally. Searching for the rebuttal words, Ronald turned around in terror.
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Ayano and Kirika were trapped in a desperate crisis. It is evening in the Imperial Garden of Shinjuku. The surroundings are flocked with more than a hundred possessed bodies. There is no way to escape.
 
Ayano and Kirika were trapped in a desperate crisis. It is evening in the Imperial Garden of Shinjuku. The surroundings are flocked with more than a hundred possessed bodies. There is no way to escape.
   
“.......What are we going to do?” Ayano groans in a worn-out voice but Kirika either has no way out.
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“.......what are we going to do?” Ayano groans in a worn-out voice but Kirika either has no way out.
   
 
At such a troubled time, almost like aiming for it, the cell phone’s ringtone can be heard. Kirika fetched it really fast and stated shouting.
 
At such a troubled time, almost like aiming for it, the cell phone’s ringtone can be heard. Kirika fetched it really fast and stated shouting.
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A contrastive, hatefully calm voice can be heard.
 
A contrastive, hatefully calm voice can be heard.
   
“It’s over. Everything.”
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“It’s over. Everything”
   
 
“No it’s not! Right now we are in the middle of being attacked by nearly a hundred spirits!”
 
“No it’s not! Right now we are in the middle of being attacked by nearly a hundred spirits!”
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“I’m so glad you cleared the puzzle. So, how do you get here?”
 
“I’m so glad you cleared the puzzle. So, how do you get here?”
   
“How, you ask...where are you now? Shinjukugyouen? That’s impossible. It’s totally outside my range. I’ll get there in twenty, thirty minutes so wait there.”
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“How, you ask...where are you now? Shinjukugyouen? That’s impossible. It’s totally outside m range. I’ll get there in twenty, thirty minutes so wait there”
   
 
“We can’t wait that long! We’re already under pressure. It’s fine with you if Ayano-chan becomes a mass murderer?”
 
“We can’t wait that long! We’re already under pressure. It’s fine with you if Ayano-chan becomes a mass murderer?”
   
“Tell her this. If she dares to die, she can choose her favorite method for when HER PARTNER is going to kill her............Ah, that’s right. She’s there. Get her on the phone.”
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“Tell her this. If she dares to die, she can choose her favorite method for when HER PARTNER is going to kill her............Ah, that’s right. She’s there. Get her on the phone”
   
 
“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
   
“Put Ayano on the phone,” Kazuma plainly repeated.
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“Put Ayano on the phone” Kazuma plainly repeated.
   
 
Kirika peeked at Ayano’s situation. She has already started the fight. For the time being, even if she is adjusting to the non-fatal amount, in reality it seems she has no choice but to minimally go easy on them, because the sound of blows is pretty severe.
 
Kirika peeked at Ayano’s situation. She has already started the fight. For the time being, even if she is adjusting to the non-fatal amount, in reality it seems she has no choice but to minimally go easy on them, because the sound of blows is pretty severe.
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“I’m busy now!” Ayano shouted without taking it.
 
“I’m busy now!” Ayano shouted without taking it.
   
“Although I can see that wouldn’t it be better to take it? We’re not getting anywhere this way.”
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“Although I can see that wouldn’t it be better to take it? We’re not getting anywhere this way”
   
 
“...................”
 
“...................”
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Because there is no feedback Ayano regains her cool very quickly. Remembering the current state of affairs, she sobers up in one breath, informing him:
 
Because there is no feedback Ayano regains her cool very quickly. Remembering the current state of affairs, she sobers up in one breath, informing him:
   
“Although I believe you know, I’m extremely busy right now. If you have no business with me, I’m hanging up.”
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“Although I believe you know, I’m extremely busy right now. If you have no business with me, I’m hanging up”
   
“W – Wait. Let’s talk a bit more.”
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“W – Wait. Let’s talk a bit more”
   
 
Surprisingly, Kazuma wanted to continue the telephone call. Without understanding his intention, Ayano looks into it, perplexed.
 
Surprisingly, Kazuma wanted to continue the telephone call. Without understanding his intention, Ayano looks into it, perplexed.
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“Y ....You low life rascal....! I hate you the most! You should try and learn something from Ren’s charm, even if it’s just a little.”
 
“Y ....You low life rascal....! I hate you the most! You should try and learn something from Ren’s charm, even if it’s just a little.”
   
“Yeah yeah, is that so......fine, I caught you.”
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“Yeah yeah, is that so......fine, I caught you”
   
 
“What?”
 
“What?”
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“.......No..... this is......”
 
“.......No..... this is......”
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Resistance and the like, there wasn’t any from the beginning. The thoughts raised by the departed souls were shots of joy, congratulations on their liberation. The spirits, released from the Ghost Tamer’s curse, by their own will dissolved the possession and accepted the power of purification.
 
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esistance and the like, there wasn’t any from the beginning. The thoughts raised by the departed souls were shots of joy, congratulations on their liberation. The spirits released from the Ghost Tamer’s curse, by their own will dissolved the possession and accepted the power of purification.
   
 
The shapes of the dead spirits changed from the gruesomeness in the moment of death to those when they were alive. The healed spirits’ contours morphed, while floating with content smiles, being reduced to balls of light returning to Heaven.
 
The shapes of the dead spirits changed from the gruesomeness in the moment of death to those when they were alive. The healed spirits’ contours morphed, while floating with content smiles, being reduced to balls of light returning to Heaven.
   
The countless light balls, while dancing, ran beyond the sky. That fairytale-like spectacle, Ayano looks up at it, simply amazed.
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The countless light balls, while dancing, run beyond the sky. That fairytale-like spectacle, Ayano looks it up, simply amazed.
   
 
“Amazing....”
 
“Amazing....”
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A murmur from the back. When turning around, Kirika speaks with a bitter smile.
 
A murmur from the back. When turning around, Kirika speaks with a bitter smile.
   
“How to say this...a scene ridiculing the efforts of mediocre people. This doesn’t seem like the work of men.”
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“How to say this...a scene ridiculing the efforts of mediocre people. This doesn’t seem like the work of men”
   
 
“True. But that doesn’t mean he didn’t put great effort into it, don’t you think?”
 
“True. But that doesn’t mean he didn’t put great effort into it, don’t you think?”
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“..........Not particularly. What are you trying to say?”
 
“..........Not particularly. What are you trying to say?”
   
“Words of gratitude among other things.”
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“Words of gratitude among other things”
   
 
“Don’t joke around!” Ayano shouts, furiously grasping her fists tightly.
 
“Don’t joke around!” Ayano shouts, furiously grasping her fists tightly.
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“Why would I, to such a guy!? He is dismissing people just when they think of dismissing him, he is mocking them, doing as it pleases him, turning them into toys!”
 
“Why would I, to such a guy!? He is dismissing people just when they think of dismissing him, he is mocking them, doing as it pleases him, turning them into toys!”
   
“That’s all the same thing.”
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“That’s all the same thing”
   
 
“Next time I meet him, I’m definitely stabbing him with Enraiha.”
 
“Next time I meet him, I’m definitely stabbing him with Enraiha.”
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Without hearing Kirika’s retort, Ayano is thoroughly excited.
 
Without hearing Kirika’s retort, Ayano is thoroughly excited.
   
“You’re not honest with yourself,” mingled with a sigh, Kirika murmurs so.
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“you’re not honest with yourself” mingled with a sigh, Kirika murmurs so.
   
 
The girl in front of her eyes and the absent man – she is facing these two.
 
The girl in front of her eyes and the absent man – she is facing these two.
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It was true that he was outside range. But –
 
It was true that he was outside range. But –
“Because of Ayano’s voice, even if we’re separated by a hundred kilometers, I can get through, he continued.
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“Because of Ayano’s voice, even if we’re separated by a hundred kilometers, I can get through”, he continued.
   
 
''Good grief, he’s speaking so fondly of her.''
 
''Good grief, he’s speaking so fondly of her.''
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For a second time she is focusing in Ayano. Without knowing to what extent and how carefully she is being protected, she is shouting abusive words even now.
 
For a second time she is focusing in Ayano. Without knowing to what extent and how carefully she is being protected, she is shouting abusive words even now.
   
But surely to notice that warped and twisted love, it seems unreasonable. Nevertheless, she has no intention of helping her.
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But surely, to notice that warped, twisted love it seems unreasonable. Nevertheless, she has no intention of helping her.
   
“I’m not going to tell you. Realize it yourself, dumb bunny.”
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“I’m not going to tell you. Realize it yourself, dumb bunny”
   
 
Turning her back on the girl, with an ill-natured look, Kirika murmured so.
 
Turning her back on the girl, with an ill-natured look, Kirika murmured so.

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