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A low and gloomy voice echoed with resentment darker than darkness...
 
A low and gloomy voice echoed with resentment darker than darkness...
   
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''"U-uwaaaaaaaaaaaa! Wha-what, what are you doing-?!"''
 
''"U-uwaaaaaaaaaaaa! Wha-what, what are you doing-?!"''
   
Late at night on that same day, Shinji screamed out in terror. Nearby were two freshly severed heads, which had tumbled down onto the floor. Following them were two headless corpses. And standing before him, a human?
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Late at night on that same day, Shinji screamed out in terror. Nearby were two freshly severed heads, which tumbled down onto the floor. Following them were two headless corpses. And standing before him, a human?
   
 
Shinji was unable to say for certain. There was nothing different from a human by outward appearance, but it possessed an aura that a human could not possibly have.
 
Shinji was unable to say for certain. There was nothing different from a human by outward appearance, but it possessed an aura that a human could not possibly have.
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Silence remained even after severing those heads. The two blood-covered heads rolling on the ground seemed not to have noticed their own deaths as they still had their drunken, relaxed slack smiles.
 
Silence remained even after severing those heads. The two blood-covered heads rolling on the ground seemed not to have noticed their own deaths as they still had their drunken, relaxed slack smiles.
   
Shinji knew of only one person who could do what this ''thing'' had just done. He had just met that person yesterday. In addition, that person had a just motive to kill them.
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Shinji knew of only one person who could do what this ''thing'' had just done. He had just met that person yesterday. In addition, that person had a motive to kill them.
   
 
Shinji became frantic, begging the ''thing'' for forgiveness. His voice did a complete turn.
 
Shinji became frantic, begging the ''thing'' for forgiveness. His voice did a complete turn.
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"Y-yeah! I think I——"
 
"Y-yeah! I think I——"
   
Suddenly, ''that thing'', now a huge torch, began to move. Shinji's face, full of hope till now, froze.
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Suddenly, ''that thing'', now a huge torch, began to move. Shinji's face, full of hope, froze.
   
 
The ''thing'' stretched out a hand, taking hold of the golden flame, ''and in one movement, tore it from its body.'' <!-- There is an exclamation mark, even though it seems strange to me. -->
 
The ''thing'' stretched out a hand, taking hold of the golden flame, ''and in one movement, tore it from its body.'' <!-- There is an exclamation mark, even though it seems strange to me. -->
   
The ''thing'' emerged from the flame's restraints, completely uninjured. Its body, and even its clothes, remained undamaged without any sign of having been engulfed by fire.
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The ''thing'' emerged from the flame's restraints completely uninjured. Its body, and even its clothes, remained undamaged without any sign of having been engulfed by fire.
   
 
The ''thing'' slowly turned to Shinji and began walking. Underneath the freezing moonlight, without a sound, it came closer, an ominous shadow.
 
The ''thing'' slowly turned to Shinji and began walking. Underneath the freezing moonlight, without a sound, it came closer, an ominous shadow.
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As the raw stink of blood and meat drifted through the kekkai, the ''thing'' laughed cruelly and vanished as if melting into the air.
 
As the raw stink of blood and meat drifted through the kekkai, the ''thing'' laughed cruelly and vanished as if melting into the air.
   
However, the three severed heads remained. Though the bodies were in pieces, there was not a single injury on those heads.
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Afterwards, three severed heads remained. Though the bodies were in pieces, there was not one injury on those heads.
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Somehow, the three heads had ended up facing the gate in a straight line. Each had a strange smile, as if to say to anyone coming through that gate, "Welcome to a nightmare."
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Somehow, the three heads had ended up facing the gate in a straight line. Each had a strange smile, as if saying to anyone coming through that gate, "Welcome to a nightmare."
 
   
   

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