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“This was caused by Fuujutsu, and was created by a practitioner who is on a completely different level from my Fuuga clan. This practitioner trapped the three victims in a wind ''kekkai'' and then killed them.”
 
“This was caused by Fuujutsu, and was created by a practitioner who is on a completely different level from my Fuuga clan. This practitioner trapped the three victims in a wind ''kekkai'' and then killed them.”
   
Hyoue’s report was not in the least, beneficial. Any practitioner could have easily deduced that from the sight of the incident.
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Hyoue’s report was not in the least beneficial. Any practitioner could have easily deduced that from the sight of the incident.
   
 
“I understand that much. But, who did it?!”
 
“I understand that much. But, who did it?!”
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Hyoue bowed to Juugo’s words of gratitude<!-- Sounds too western -->.
 
Hyoue bowed to Juugo’s words of gratitude<!-- Sounds too western -->.
   
“Yes… Thank you very much. I will now give instructions to my subordinates….”
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“Yes… Thank you very much. I will give instructions to my subordinates as I will now retire….”
   
 
“Then please, I await your reply, Hyoue.”
 
“Then please, I await your reply, Hyoue.”
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The head of the Fuuga clan bowed silently and left.
 
The head of the Fuuga clan bowed silently and left.
   
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The enemy was a Fuujutsu practitioner who loathed the Kannagi clan. Naturally, everyone thought of a certain person who had—coincidentally—just returned to Japan.
 
The enemy was a Fuujutsu practitioner who loathed the Kannagi clan. Naturally, everyone thought of a certain person who had—coincidentally—just returned to Japan.
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“It’s Kazuma! He obtained strength for revenge and returned to Japan! My fellow clan members, let us destroy the traitor Kazuma. Find him without delay and kill him!”
 
“It’s Kazuma! He obtained strength for revenge and returned to Japan! My fellow clan members, let us destroy the traitor Kazuma. Find him without delay and kill him!”
   
The person who made such an aggressive comment was the previous Suzerain, Yorimichi. Even though he was retired, he still had the air of a Suzerain. The entire clan loathed him, though he was unaware of it.
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The person who made such an aggressive comment was the previous Suzerain, Yorimichi. Even though he was retired, he still had the air of a Suzerain. The entire clan loathed him, though he was unaware of this.
   
 
“[[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Chichiue|Chichiue]], please. We don’t have enough evidence to prove that Kazuma did this.” Juugo said in an attempt to stop Yorimichi's tirade.
 
“[[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Chichiue|Chichiue]], please. We don’t have enough evidence to prove that Kazuma did this.” Juugo said in an attempt to stop Yorimichi's tirade.

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