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“...Like hell. If I'm lucky, I might last maybe five minutes.”
 
“...Like hell. If I'm lucky, I might last maybe five minutes.”
   
After a slight pause, Kazuma replied honestly. He frequently used an objective self-evaluation method to assess himself. From experience, he had learned that overconfidence was extremely dangerous.
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After a slight pause, Kazuma replied honestly. He frequently uses an objective self-evaluation method to assess himself. From experience, he had learned that overconfidence is very dangerous.
   
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“Is that so...?” <!--------------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------------------>
“Is that so...?”
 
   
Juugo mentally compared the abilities of the following people: Ryuuya > Kazuma > Genma > Ayano. In other words, Ayano alone had no possibility of winning.
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Juugo mentally compared the abilities of the people: Ryuuya > Kazuma> Genma> Ayano, which means that Ayano alone would have no possibility of winning.
   
“Well, wherever they summoned such a high level youma from is beyond me. Hell, even the powerful youma ki of the 3000-year old vampire from the interior of China is nothing compared to that thing.”
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“Well well, where did they summon such a high level youma is beyond me. Hell, even a vampire of 3000 years in the interior of China with an extremely powerful youma ki was still incomparable with that thing.”
   
“You, you can even beat... something like that...?”
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“You, you can even beat… that kind of thing?”
   
Juugo was probably more confused than astonished.
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In Juugo’s expression there was probably more incomprehension than astonishment.
   
“Ha, yeah right! There's no way to fight against that either. I just patted my ass and tucked in my tail, then ran like the wind.”
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“Ha, yeah right! There was no way to fight against that thing. I just patted my ass and tucked in my tail, then ran far way.”
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Kazuma used a mischievous tone in order to avoid further questioning. Those were memories he did not want to recall, and so he diverted the topic back to the original discussion.
   
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“The problem with that guy is that the wind he uses is not normal.”
Kazuma mischievously avoided further questioning. Those were memories he did not want to recall, so he diverted the topic back to the original discussion,
 
   
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”…What does that mean?”
“The problem with that guy is that the wind he uses is not normal.”
 
   
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“It is so abnormal that I have no concept of how nature even developed that sort of thing. The spirits around that guy are all going crazy. Because of this, I can’t interfere with his spells; hell I can’t even sense it. If he chooses to hide himself, it will only be at a very close distance and right before he attacks that I will be able to sense anything.”
"...What does that mean?"
 
   
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“That’s quite… no, really bothersome!”
“It's so abnormal that I have no clue how nature even developed it. The spirits around that guy are all going crazy. Because of this, I can't interfere with his spells - I can't even sense it. If he chooses to hide himself, I won't be able to sense him until just before he comes at us at point blank range.”
 
 
“That's quite... no, that's really bothersome!”
 
   
 
Juugo worriedly mumbled.
 
Juugo worriedly mumbled.
   
Spirits have wisdom and ability, and although it is unknown how to differentiate them, they also have a will. Therefore, they can get agitated just like a human being.
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Spirits do have wisdom and ability, although it is not known how to differentiate them, they still have will. So, they will get agitated like human being.
   
Putting spirits in a situation that conflicts with its own characteristics for a long period of time, such as putting fire spirits in water or sealing wind spirits in the ground, will cause them to go crazy. This is a fact that has already been confirmed.
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Putting spirits in a situation that is completely opposite of its own characteristics for a long period of time— — such as putting fire spirits in water and sealing wind spirits in the ground — — will cause them to go crazy. This is something that is a fact and has already been confirmed
   
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But——
But...
 
   
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“That kind of thing, how would you control them?”
“How would you control that kind of thing?”
 
   
Because they have already lost their consciousness, they certainly would not be able to hear the words of a human... probably.
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Because they have already lost their consciousness, of course they would not be able to hear the words from a human —— well, probably.
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“Who the hell knows? There are no cases where this has happened before, so there aren’t any similar topics to discuss about!”
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Kazuma replied in very vague manner.
   
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“In order to do it…maybe Ayano’s attribute would work better compared to fighting wind against wind. With fire being the main attacking force, using the Enraiha from inside his body and then proceeding to burn him, no matter how strong his will is, he will still die.”
“Who the hell knows? Nothing like this has ever happened before, so there's nothing to compare this situation with!”
 
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“Then are you saying that you will not help?”
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“I only dislike working.”
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“I’ll pay 100 million!”
   
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“Thanks for the job ♥”
Kazuma replied vaguely, and continued,
 
   
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Without any hesitation, Kazuma agreed to the contract.
“To do that... maybe having Ayano fight would work better than trying to pit wind against wind. Since fire is the main attacking force, if she uses the Enraiha to stab him and burn him from the inside out, he'll die no matter how strong his will is.”
 
   
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This was not because the huge amount of money blurred his vision. To receive remunerations is to give him, an outsider, a reason to be involved. Of course, he would take what is his, but Kazuma joining the battle has already become an inevitable reality.
“Then, are you saying that you will not help?”
 
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“You’re terrible, without money you would have abandoned your brother?”
   
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Ayano’s words were full of despite, but Kazuma only grinned without replying to her.
“I don't like working.”
 
 
“I'll pay 100 million!”
 
 
“Thanks for the job ♥”
 
 
Kazuma instantly agreed to the contract.
 
 
This was not because the huge amount of money blurred his vision. As an outsider, he needed a reason, in the form of payment, to be involved. Of course, he would take what was his, but he had already become determined to join the battle.
 
 
“You're terrible! Without money, you would have abandoned your own brother?”
 
 
Ayano spat. Kazuma simply grinned without replying.
 
 
Rather than being considered a “good guy” who acts by his emotions, being known as a miser makes him feel a lot better. Ayano's scorn did not affect him in any way.
 
   
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Rather than being considered a “good guy” who acts by his emotions, being known as a miser makes him feel a lot better. Ayano’s scorn does not affect him in any way.
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“Then, please.”
 
“Then, please.”
   
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After glancing at Ayano, who looked like she was about to shoot lasers from her eyes, the two men shook hands in agreement.
 
After glancing at Ayano, who looked like she was about to shoot lasers from her eyes, the two men shook hands in agreement.
   
Juugo certainly understood Kazuma's intentions. In order for him to have a proper reason to fight, he needed compensation in the form of 100 million yen.
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Juugo certainly understood Kazuma’s purpose. In order for him to have a corresponding standpoint, using 100 million yen is needed in order to sustain this kind of cooperation.
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''(I really can't beat him...)''
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''(I really can’t beat him…)''
 
Juugo really felt that Kazuma's consideration was not the same as before.
 
   
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Juugo really felt that Kazuma’s consideration was not the same as before.
“Then, where exactly is this place?”
 
   
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“Then, where exactly is this place?”
By now there was no further need for discussion. Juugo simply replied,
 
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By now there was no further need for discussion. Faced with this kind of direct question, Juugo simply replied,
   
 
“Kyoto!”
 
“Kyoto!”
   
The ceremonial mountain of the fire god laid in northwestern Kyoto. It was a sacred place to the Kannagi clan, the contractual place where the earth held the flames of the burning heavens. At this place containing 300 years of gratitude and grudges, the two clans were gambling their existence - The place of the decisive battle was there.
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In the northwest of Kyoto, there lies the ceremonial mountain of the fire god. That location was a sacred place of the Kannagi clan, the contractual place where the earth had the fire of the heaven’s burning. Revolving around 300 years past of gratitude and grudges, and gambling the two clans’ existence — the place of the decisive battle is there.
   
   

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