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== Chapter Five - Rescue ==
 
== Chapter Five - Rescue ==
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=== 1 ===
 
=== Part 1 ===
 
   
 
Kazuma and Ayano sat on a wide seat within a side-room, quietly waiting for their arrival in Kyoto via the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shinkansen Shinkansen].
 
Kazuma and Ayano sat on a wide seat within a side-room, quietly waiting for their arrival in Kyoto via the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shinkansen Shinkansen].
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The unpleasant atmosphere around them made it difficult to stay in that room.
 
The unpleasant atmosphere around them made it difficult to stay in that room.
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Unable to verify her own feelings, Ayano locked her confused thoughts into the depths of her consciousness. She then forced herself to concentrate on sleeping. Within a few seconds, Ayano forgot all about her unhappiness and gave off peaceful breathing sounds.
 
Unable to verify her own feelings, Ayano locked her confused thoughts into the depths of her consciousness. She then forced herself to concentrate on sleeping. Within a few seconds, Ayano forgot all about her unhappiness and gave off peaceful breathing sounds.
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Her shout echoed throughout the empty mountains.
 
Her shout echoed throughout the empty mountains.
   
=== Part 2 ===
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=== 2 ===
   
 
At the same time, Kazuma was gliding thirty meters above the ground.
 
At the same time, Kazuma was gliding thirty meters above the ground.
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Kazuma leaped up with that shout.
 
Kazuma leaped up with that shout.
   
=== Part 3 ===
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=== 3 ===
   
 
The wind was very gentle, yet at the same time forcefully took them up to the skies. They overcame gravity easily, flying past tree branches to an even higher place......
 
The wind was very gentle, yet at the same time forcefully took them up to the skies. They overcame gravity easily, flying past tree branches to an even higher place......
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The characteristic of fire is “aggressive flames”. A strong rage is the key factor of synchronizing with flame spirits. They will never lend their full powers to a human who is usually calm and timid.
 
The characteristic of fire is “aggressive flames”. A strong rage is the key factor of synchronizing with flame spirits. They will never lend their full powers to a human who is usually calm and timid.
   
Only when one possesses great rage, and is able to control that rage, can one be a first rate Enjutsushi.
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Only when one possesses great rage, and is able to control that rage, can he be a first rate Enjutsushi.<!------------------------------------------------Mark----------------------------------------------------------------------->
   
Filling the area with stifling heat that felt like a metal smelting furnace, the flame spirits responded to Ren's rage and continued to gather.
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With a heat so hot it seemed like a metal smelting furnace surrounded the area, the flame spirits responded to Ren’s rage and continued to gather.
   
 
“Give me the medicine.”
 
“Give me the medicine.”
   
Ren ordered softly. He had no need to roar now, as he knew very well what he needed to do. If the opponent decided to resist, he would have to get the medicine even if he died in the process. Whether he succeeded or not was inconsequential - This was something he had to do.
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Ren ordered softly. He had no need to roar now, as he knew very well what he needed to do. If the opponent resists, he will have to get the medicine even if he might die in order to get it. Whether he succeeds or not is not a problem; this is something he must do.
   
“Okay...... I got it, don't threaten me anymore.”
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“OK------ I got it, don’t threaten me anymore.”
   
Kazuma raised his hands to surrender. He was unable to keep his smile. With a calm fighting spirit and the mental energy to control it, Ren had already began his journey to become a first class Jutsushi.
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Raising his hands to surrender, Kazuma was unable to keep the smile at his mouth. Calm fighting spirit and the mental energy to control it, Ren has already begun his journey to become a first class Jutsushi.
   
Kazuma walked past Ren and stopped by Ayano, who was now lying motionless on the floor. Looking down at her, he toyed with a bottle he took out from his hidden pocket.
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Going past Ren’s side, Kazuma walked to Ayano who was lying on the floor. Looking down at the motionless Ayano, he toyed with a bottle he took out from his hidden pocket.
   
To say that he did it without hesitation would most definitely be a lie. After all, it was an extremely rare and valuable medicine. But even so, as long as it was for Ren's growth, he did not mind paying such a price, especially since it did not cost him a single cent in the first place.
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To say that he did it without hesitation would definitely be a lie. This was an extremely rare and valuable medicine; even so, as long as it was for Ren’s growth, he did not mind paying such a price since this thing did not cost him a single cent in the first place.
   
He kneeled by Ayano's side and considered tipping the contents of the bottle into Ayano's pale lips, but gave up in the end. She did not seem to have the strength to even drink it, and spilling the medicine would really be a waste.
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He kneeled by Ayano’s side, and planned to place the mouth of the bottle right against the pale lips of Ayano------ but gave up in the end. She did not seem to have the strength to even drink it, and to spill the medicine would really be a waste.
   
Kazuma stretched his hand under Ayano and lifted her upper body. He drank the medicine himself, then closed his lips onto Ayano's as if throwing his entire body onto her.
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Kazuma stretched his hand behind Ayano, and lifted her upper body straight up. He drank the medicine himself, and their lips closed together as though his whole body fell on Ayano.
   
 
“Wah!”
 
“Wah!”
   
From the corner of his eyes, Kazuma could see Ren, who was at his side, flushing red yet staring, mesmerized, as Kazuma poured the medicine into Ayano's lips by mouth-to-mouth.
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From the excess light at the edge of his eyes he could see Ren who was by the side, with his face flushed red yet mesmerized at the same time, as Kazuma poured the medicine into Ayano’s mouth by the mouth-to-mouth method.
   
   
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[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 219.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 219.jpg|thumb]]
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(Hmmm…………)
(Hmmm............)
 
   
Ayano first felt warmth. Something seemed to be quickly removing the youki that was invading her body. Heat, or rather, life, came back bit by bit.
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Ayano first felt warmth; something seems to be removing the youki that has invaded her body quickly. Heat------life came back bit by bit.
   
She slowly began to detect the situation around her. She knew she was being surrounded by a powerful force, and that a warm, healing spiritual energy was coming in from her lips.
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She slowly began to be able to detect the situation outside her. She knew she was being surrounded by a powerful force and that a warm healing spiritual energy was coming in from her lips.
   
Ayano felt as if someone had just pulled her back from the gates of death gently, yet powerfully.
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Ayano felt that this was someone who had just pulled her back from the gates of death lightly, yet strongly at the same time.
   
She opened her eyes slowly, and, at the close distance that her eyes instantly focused on, the one before her was......
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She opened her eyes slowly, and at such a close distance that her focal point was about to focus, the one who appeared before her eyes was------
   
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"<nowiki>~~~~~</nowiki>!"
"......!!!"
 
   
Ayano's consciousness became awake in an instant and she used all of her strength to push Kazuma away.
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Her consciousness became awake in an instant and Ayano used all her strength to push Kazuma away.
   
Kazuma moved away lazily, as if he saw through Ayano's cute reactions out of nervousness, and steadily stood up.
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Kazuma moved away unhurriedly, as if he saw through the cute reaction that Ayano gives when she is nervous, and stood up in a steady manner.
   
(I...... I was kissed......? Why......?)
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(I……I was kissed……? Why……?)
   
Ayano pressed her lips with her left hand. Her right hand was tightly hugging her own body. Like a weak girl who had just been assaulted by a rapist, she closed her legs tightly and contracted her body.
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Ayano used her left hand to press on her lips. Her right hand was tightly hugging her own body, and just like a weak girl who had just been assaulted by a rapist, she closed her legs tightly and contracted her body.
   
(What's going on......?)
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(What’s going on……?)
   
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Not knowing what was going on, it was impossible to understand the situation.
It was impossible to understand the situation, as she did not know what was going on.
 
   
Maybe due to the youki that had invaded her, her memories did not seem to add up. Not just how she wanted to cut Kazuma with her sword - She could not even remember how they met up in the first place.
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Maybe it was due to the youki that invaded her, as her memories did not seem to be able to link up. Not only the situation of how she wanted to cut Kazuma with her sword, she could not even remember how they met up in the first place.
   
She lifted her head to look at Kazuma suspiciously, who stared back calmly as though he was observing some animal in an experiment. Actually, he was observing how effective the medicine was, but it was impossible for Ayano to know that.
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She lifted her head to look at Kazuma suspiciously, who, in turn looked back with a calm stare as though he was observing some animal in an experiment. Actually, he was observing how efficient the medicine was, but it was impossible for Ayano to know that.
   
Anger began to grow within her. After taking away a girl's kiss, and her first kiss at that, the other party did not even seem to have a shred of guilt. She could not accept this at all.
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Anger began to grow within her. After taking a girl’s kiss----a first kiss at that------ away, the other party did not even seem to have a shred of guilt. She could not accept this kind of thing happening at all.
   
“What the hell were you doing......!!!”
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“What the hell were you doing------!!”
   
 
“Is that how you talk to your benefactor?”
 
“Is that how you talk to your benefactor?”
   
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“Huh……”
“Huh......?”
 
   
The cold reply weakened Ayano's attitude. Ren ran over with wet eyes and raised his head to look at Ayano, fighting back tears.
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The cold reply weakened Ayano’s attitude. Ren ran over at this time with wet eyes and raised his head to look at Ayano, fighting back his tears.
   
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“Nee……Nee-sama……”
“Nee...... Nee-sama......”
 
   
It was hard to imagine that the now revived Ayano, who was brimming with energy, was about to die just now. Even her wounds and blood had disappeared.
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The revived Ayano with her body brimming with energy makes it hard to imagine the way she looked when she was about to die earlier. Even her wounds and blood traces disappeared.
   
 
“Nee-sama! Nee-sama! Nee-sama!”
 
“Nee-sama! Nee-sama! Nee-sama!”
   
Ren was happily hugging his beloved "sister" tightly as he began to cry. As if trying to confirm that this was not a dream, he continued to hug Ayano with all his might and continued to call her name.
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Ren was very happy. He was tightly hugging his beloved “sister” as his tears began to fall. As if he was trying to confirm that this was not a dream, he hugged Ayano with all his might and kept on calling her.
   
Even though he was just a kid, a twelve year old still has some arm power. Though Ayano was uncomfortable, she still insisted on rubbing Ren's head gently.
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Even if he is just a kid, a twelve year old still has some arm power. Even though she felt uncomfortable, Ayano still insisted on rubbing Ren’s head gently.
   
“Ren, calm down...... Everything's fine. I will protect you, so don't be afraid......”
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“Ren, calm down…… Everything is fine, I will protect you, so don’t be afraid……”
   
 
“Idiot.”
 
“Idiot.”
   
Kazuma mercilessly shot down Ayano. Ignoring her murderous intent, he continued,
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Hearing Ayano’s big mistake, Kazuma rebutted without mercy. He ignored the murderous intent that was shot at him and continued to say.
   
“Ren was worried about you. You were totally thrashed by Ryuuya earlier and almost died. By the way, the one who saved you is me, so be grateful.”
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“Ren is worried about you. You were totally thrashed by Ryuya earlier, and almost died. By the way, the one who saved you is me, so be grateful.”
   
This speech, made by someone who claimed to be her benefactor, made Ayano's temple entangle together. Ren stopped his tears and immediately froze once he felt the strong atmosphere that could silence a crying child.
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This speech made by someone who claims to be her benefactor made Ayano’s temple entangle together. Faced with a strong atmosphere that could make a crying child become quiet, Ren stopped his tears and his expression froze instantly.
   
Ayano suddenly lowered her head and looked at Ren. She grabbed him, who was subconsciously trying to run away, and pressed his shoulder, asking with a scary face,
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Ayano suddenly lowered her head and looked at Ren. She grabbed Ren, who sub-consciously decided to run away and pressed on his shoulder, asking with a scary expression,
   
 
“Is that true?”
 
“Is that true?”
   
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“Huh…… Huh……”
“Huh...... Huh......”
 
   
Ren looked troubled, unsure of what she meant by the question. Ayano moved closer and repeated once more,
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Ren felt troubled, unsure of what was the meaning of the question. Ayano closed in, and repeated once more.
   
“That guy said he saved me. Is that true?”
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“That guy said he saved me, is that true?”
   
Shivering, Ren answered in a soft and delicate voice,
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Ren answered in a soft and delicate voice as he shivered.
   
“It...... It is true. Nii-sama, he took the medicine...... then...... mouth-to-mouth......”
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“It…… It is true. Nii-sama, he took the medicine…… then…… mouth-to-mouth……”
   
“Forget this.”
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“Forget about this.”
   
Ayano stopped Ren's reply softly. The hand that was pressing his shoulder became more forceful, as if she was looking at Ren from above. Seeing her fake smile, Ren was so scared that his legs went limp.
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Ayano stopped Ren’s reply softly. The hand that was pressed on his shoulder became more forceful, as if she was looking at Ren from just above. Seeing that expression that only has her mouth smiling, Ren was so scared his legs went limp.
   
“You saw nothing, understand?”
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“You saw nothing, you understand?”
   
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Ren did not make a sound, only nodding continuously.
Ren silently nodded.
 
   
“Oh yeah, what did you make me drink? It's not something with weird side effects, right?”
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“Oh yeah, what did you make me drink? It is not something with some weird side effects right?”
   
Ayano asked suspiciously. She knew that she almost died just now, so she could not trust something that was able to completely cure her in just a few minutes.
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Ayano asked in a suspicious tone. She knew that she almost died just now, and towards something so suspicious as to be able to completely cure her in a few minutes, she could not trust it one bit.
   
 
“Elixir.”
 
“Elixir.”
   
Kazuma replied simply.
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Kazuma replied in a very simple and clear manner.
   
“Elixir? You don't mean that, what's it called, 'Water of Life'!?”
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“Elixir? You don’t mean that, what is it called, “Water of Life”!?”
   
“Ehhhhhhhhhh......!?”
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“Ehhhhhhhhhh------!?”
   
Ayano, and in fact even Ren, who was on the verge of tears, gave off sounds of surprise. This was normal, since the so-called "Water of Life" is a miracle drug with amazing effects, made with the essence of alchemy. It is said to even be able to revive the dead. It is uncertain if such a miracle drug, or even its formula, exists at all.
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Not just Ayano, but even Ren, who was about to cry, gave off sounds of surprise. This was normal, as what is known as the “Water of Life” is a miracle drug made with the essence of alchemy with tremendous effects. It is said to be able to even revive the dead. It is uncertain if this type of miracle drug, not to mention its production method, even exists.
   
"That kind of thing... Where did you get it......"
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“That kind of thing, where did you get it……”
   
“Before that, don't you have anything to say?”
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“Before that, don’t you have something to say?”
   
Kazuma seemed very calm since the beginning, in contrast to Ayano, who was shocked. Realizing what Kazuma meant, Ayano reluctantly thanked him,
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Compared to the shocked Ayano, Kazuma seemed very calm since the beginning. Noticing what Kazuma meant by his words, Ayano reluctantly thanked him…
   
“......Thank you.”
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“……Thank you.”
   
“Don't mention it. I'll just charge extra. Maybe another hundred million will do.”
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“Don’t mention it. I will just add extra charges to my service as necessary expenses. About a hundred million will do.”
   
“You...... You bastard! Can't you ignore some losses to help someone!? Isn't it too low for a human to measure everything in terms of money!?”
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“You……You bastard! Can’t you just ignore some losses and help someone!? Someone who measures everything with money, won’t that be too low for a human!?”
   
 
“You think this is something that can be bought with money!?”
 
“You think this is something that can be bought with money!?”
   
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“Argh…………”
“Argh............”
 
   
Kazuma raised his voice imposingly, making Ayano speechless. This was the first time Kazuma became so emotional. Apparently, his precious medicine being used made him feel very unhappy.
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Kazuma raised his voice and gave off an imposing presence and Ayano became speechless instantly. This was the first time Kazuma became so emotional, it seemed that his precious medicine being used has made him feel very unhappy.
   
Indeed, something like elixir cannot be bought with money. It is something that can even revive the dead. It's not hard to believe that many people would want it even if it made them bankrupt, and selling it for just a hundred million was simply outrageous.
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Indeed, something like an elixir cannot be bought with money. It is something that can even revive the dead. It is not hard to believe that many people would want to get it even if they would become bankrupt in the process and to sell this kind of thing for just a hundred million is more outrageous than a great sale.
   
Even so, Kazuma managed to change his mood with just one sigh.
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Even so, Kazuma was still able to change his mood with just one sigh.
   
“Never mind. Let's forget what happened in the past! Oh yeah, Ayano. So, why did you lose?”
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“Nevermind. Let’s forget what happened in the past! Oh yeah, Ayano, so why did you lose?”
   
“......Why are you asking such a thing?”
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“……Why are you asking such a thing?”
   
Ayano replied bitterly to the question that shattered her pride.
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Faced with a question that shattered her pride, Ayano could only put on a bitter expression.
   
“Of course I have to ask. I always thought of your Enraiha as the ultimate weapon. If it's useless, then I have to rethink the whole battle plan. Therefore, tell me, what's going on? Don't tell me Enraiha can't burn Ryuuya even if it cuts into him?”
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“Of course I must ask. I always thought of your Enraiha as the ultimate weapon. If it is of no use, the whole battle plan must be thought over once more. So tell me, what is going on? Is it that Enraiha cannot burn him even if it cuts into Ryuya?”
   
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“Huh……Errr…… That is……”
“Huh...... Errr...... That is......”
 
   
Kazuma's gaze at Ayano became colder and colder, sapping her ability to speak. She was too scared to make eye contact, so she shifted her eyes about randomly.
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Looking at the tongue-tied Ayano, Kazuma’s eyes began to lower its temperature. Ayano did not dare to look into those cold eyes; her eyes began to shift about randomly.
   
“You mean, you didn't even hit him once? All of your attacks were predicted?
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“That is to say, you did not even hit him once? All of your attacks were predicted.
   
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“Hmm…………”
“Hmm............”
 
   
“And you panicked, releasing Enjutsu that was completely repelled by his wind.”
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“And then, all of the En-Jutsu you released in anxiety was all blocked down by wind.”
   
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”Errm errr………….”
"Errm... errr............"
 
   
“After taking his onslaught of one-sided attacks, your injuries continued to increase.”
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“After suffering the enemy’s single sided vigorous attacks, your injuries kept on increasing.”
   
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“………………………..”
“..............................”
 
   
“In the end, you somehow managed to escape. Since this is too embarrassing for you to bear, should I praise you on your ability to run away?”
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“And you managed to escape somehow in the end. As this type of content is too embarrassing, perhaps I should praise you on your abilities to run away?”
   
“Wha...... What!? How can you say such a thing!?”
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“Wha……What! How can you say such a thing!?”
   
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After hearing such cruel and heartless comments, Ayano finally lost her temper.
Ayano finally lost her temper from listening to Kazuma's cruel and heartless comments.
 
   
“After telling me to trust you so proudly before, in the end you just ran off and left me behind with a few words! For someone who leaves the biggest problems to other people, what right do you have to say such a thing!?
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“After saying “trust me” so proudly earlier, in the end you just ran off and left me behind in a few words! And for someone who left the most problematic things to someone else, what rights does you have to say such a thing!!
   
“Oh, sorry.”
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“Oh, I am sorry.”
   
“......Huh?”
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“……Huh?”
   
Ayano widened her eyes at this unexpected reply. She had expected him to retaliate by mocking her vigorously, so it was unimaginable that he would apologize so honestly.
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Hearing this unexpected reply, Ayano widened her eyes. She had expected him to mock her back vigorously in return; it was unimaginable for him to apologize so honestly.
   
As if he could not let it go, Kazuma continued,
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As if he could not let it go, Kazuma continues to say,
   
 
“I never expected you to be that weak.”
 
“I never expected you to be that weak.”
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Ba-doom!!
 
Ba-doom!!
   
An explosive noise came from her heart. Crackling sounds began to surround Ayano. Ren quickly retreated away from Ayano as if bouncing off.
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An unusual noise came from her heart. The space around Ayano began to make crackling sounds. Ren quickly retreated from Ayano’s side as if he was bounced off.
   
“I thought that before I rescued Ren, you could at least buy some more time. Too bad, I guess I was too hard on you after all. Sorry.”
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“I thought that before I rescued Ren, you would at least be able to buy more time but it seems that it was too hard on you after all. I am so sorry.”
   
Ayano gripped Enraiha's hilt with all of her strength. Her fighting spirit spread throughout her body, and the fallen leaves by her feet started dancing in the air. In the night of autumn, the temperature quickly rose until it became hotter than a sunlit day. Ren tensely watched as he was roasted by the hot air.
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Gathering all of her strength, Ayano grabbed the handle of Enraiha tightly. Her fighting spirit went all over her body and the fallen leaves by her legs started dancing in the air. In the night of autumn, the temperature went up quickly; it was hotter than a sunny day, and while being roasted by the hot air Ren’s expression became tense.
   
“When you tried to cut me before...... Back then, I had thought that you were taking it easy on me, since I'm part of your family. I totally didn't realize that you were serious, sorr......”
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“The last time you tried to cut me with your blade…… Back then I thought that you were taking it easy on me, thinking that I am of your family after all, but I failed to notice that you were serious, I totally did not realize that, sor……”
   
Ayano moved her hand to shut Kazuma up. With all of her concentration, she mercilessly and unhesitatingly swung the Enraiha.
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Ayano moved her hand to make Kazuma shut up. She used a serious attitude without any other thoughts in mind and, without hesitation, began to mercilessly swing the Enraiha.
   
 
“Oh oh!”
 
“Oh oh!”
   
Kazuma easily shifted his body and avoided her initial swing. Following his movements, Ayano slashed diagonally upwards, but Kazuma escaped to the left.
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Her eyes went in pursuit of Kazuma who shifted his body with ease to dodge. Ayano swung the Enraiha upwards to cut him. Up against this slanted upward cut, Kazuma went toward the left side to escape.
   
(Don't even think about escaping!)
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(Don’t even think of escaping!)
   
Ayano twisted her hand and pulled Enraiha back. With the blade pointed at Kazuma, she stepped out forcefully, ready to lunge forward with a stab......
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Ayano twisted her hand, and pulled Enraiha back. The tip of the sword pointed at Kazuma, and she stepped out forcefully in preparation for a stab------
   
 
“Nee-sama!”
 
“Nee-sama!”
   
Since Ren rushed over and hugged Ayano's waist tightly, Enraiha missed its target.
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A guaranteed stab, but because Ren rushed over and hugged her waist tightly, it missed its target.
   
“What are you doing, Ren? Get away now!!”
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“What are you doing, Ren! Get away now!!”
   
 
“No! Now is not the time to be doing this, is it!?”
 
“No! Now is not the time to be doing this, is it!?”
   
Ayano was speechless at being reprimanded by a boy four years younger.
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To be pointed out by a boy four years younger than her, Ayano was speechless.
   
 
"Nii-sama too! Why did you do something so detestable!?"
 
"Nii-sama too! Why did you do something so detestable!?"
   
Ren directed the blame to Kazuma as well. The youth had finally gotten his responsibility up by now, realizing that nothing good would come out of leaving the two of them to do as they wish.
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Ren pointed the arrowhead to Kazuma at the same time. The youth had gotten his responsibility up by now, thinking that if he left these two people who are older than him to do as they wish, nothing good will come out from it.
   
“I didn't annoy her.”
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“I did not annoy her.”
   
“Then why did you say all of that?”
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“So, why did you say those words?”
   
Ren continued to ask Kazuma, who was replying randomly. A distrustful aura surrounded him.
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Ren continued to ask Kazuma who replied randomly. A feeling of mistrust came out from all over him.
   
“Just relieving some stress. That's all.”
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“Just relieving some stress that’s all.”
   
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“……………………………”
“.................................”
 
   
“The one who was supposed to be our final weapon turned out to be a little kitten. Anyone would want to complain, right?”
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“The one, who was expected to be the final weapon, is in fact like a little kitten. It would make anyone want to say something about it, wouldn’t it?”
   
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“Nee……Nee-sama……Calm down……”
“Nee...... Nee-sama...... Calm down......”
 
   
Ren tried his best to comfort Ayano, who seemed ready to explode.
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Ren tried his best to comfort Ayano who seemed ready to explode.
   
“......I know. I won't get angry anymore, so you can let go now.”
+
“……I know. I won’t be angry anymore, you can let go now.”
   
Ayano, weakened by Ren's face that was on the verge of tears, said that with some measure of calmness. She exhaled as if letting out all the air in her lungs, relaxing her rage in the process.
+
After being greatly weakened by Ren who seemed ready to cry, Ayano said that with some shades of calmness. She breathed out, as if letting all the air from her lungs go, while at the same time releasing her rage.
   
“By the way, did you take care of Hyoue?”
+
“By the way, you should have taken care of Hyoue haven’t you?”
   
 
“Nope, he escaped.”
 
“Nope, he escaped.”
   
  +
”……What?”
"......What?"
 
   
Ayano suddenly shouted back. No matter what she said, she had deep faith in Kazuma's powers. If Kazuma was actually unable to finish off someone like Hyoue......
+
Ayano suddenly shouted back. No matter what she says, she had deep faith in Kazuma’s capabilities. And this Kazuma was actually unable to finish someone like Hyoue off------
   
......What happened?”
+
------ What happened?”
   
“That old man summoned over a hundred youma at once. I was busy taking care of that when he took the chance to run off.”
+
“That old man summoned over a hundred youma at one go. I was busy taking care of that when he took the chance to slip off.”
   
 
“Over a hundred?”
 
“Over a hundred?”
   
Seeing the doubtful Ayano, Ren confirmed Kazuma's words.
+
Seeing the doubtful Ayano, Ren confirmed Kazuma’s words.
   
“It is true, Nee-sama. Youma that blocked all vision! Nii-sama used one move to get rid of all of them! The reason why we failed to catch Hyoue was......”
+
“It is true, Nee-sama. Youma that filled one’s vision, Nii-sama used almost one move to get rid of all of them. The reason why we failed to catch Hyoue was……”
   
(To save Nee-sama......)
+
(To save sister……)
   
Kazuma stopped Ren from completing that sentence. Kazuma pressed his fingertip onto Ren's lips, awkwardly silencing him.
+
Just as he was about to complete the sentence, Kazuma stopped him. Kazuma’s fingertip was pressed against his lips so Ren awkwardly became silent.
   
 
“What are you trying to hide?”
 
“What are you trying to hide?”
   
“Nothing important. Anyway, the biggest problem now is Ryuuya. If this happens again, we'll die for sure.”
+
“Nothing important, the biggest problem now is Ryuuya. The next time this happens we are sure to die.”
   
“......You still intend to fight?”
+
“…… You still intend to fight?”
   
  +
Seeing the cowardly Ayano, Kazuma placed judging eyes on her.
Hearing this, Kazuma proceeded to judge the cowering Ayano.
 
   
 
(I never expected her to be so weak mentally.)
 
(I never expected her to be so weak mentally.)
   
But now was definitely not the time to let her continue being depressed. He planned to fight against that monster alone, but the suffering and efforts had to be shared by everyone. That is Kazuma's belief.
+
But, now is definitely not the time to let her to continue to be down. He had intentions of fighting against that kind of monster alone, but the suffering and the efforts must be shared by everyone. That is Kazuma’s belief.
   
“What, are you scared? Well, I won't blame you, since you lost so miserably just now. The next time you're caught, I promise not to laugh.”
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“Why, are you scared? Well I won’t blame you; after all you lost so miserably earlier on. The next time you are caught by the enemy, I promise not to laugh at you again.”
   
After being completely humiliated in such a way, Ayano's cheeks became so red she put on blushers.
+
After being totally looked-down upon and being humiliated like this, Ayano’s cheeks were so red she put on blushers.
   
“Even if I can't win, at least I can commit [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seppuku seppuku] before the enemy catches me! I won't leave even a cell to those guys! I have that kind of determination, so don't look down on me!”
+
“Even if I cannot win, at least I can suicide before the enemy catches me! I won’t even leave a cell to those guys. I have that kind of determination, don’t look down on me!”
   
She rebutted angrily. Her spirit was plenty, but the content was unacceptable.
+
She rebutted angrily. This spirit was enough, but the content was unacceptable.
   
Unsure of how to respond, Kazuma's eyebrows creased together as Ayano continued,
+
Not sure how to take that line, Kazuma’s eyebrows creased together and Ayano continued to say,
   
“What I meant was that we should head back and reorganize our fighting force. Since Ren is already rescued, there shouldn't be any risk of the seal breaking, so......”
+
“What I meant was whether we should head back and reorganize our fighting force. Since Ren is already rescued, there should be no risk that the seal will be broken, so……”
   
 
“Rejected.”
 
“Rejected.”
   
Kazuma bluntly refused Ayano's suggestion.
+
Kazuma refused Ayano’s suggestion very simply.
   
“It won't work out if we're attacked while moving. If the entire transport vehicle is destroyed, are you sure you can escape?”
+
“To be attacked while on the move, that situation is very bad. In the case of the whole transport vehicle being destroyed, are you confident of escaping?”
   
“But they won't be stupid enough to kill Ren, would they? If they do that, they can't break the seal.”
+
“But, they won’t be so dumb as to even kill Ren, would they? If they do that, they cannot break the seal.”
   
“Hyoue's goal is to destroy the Kannagi clan. From the looks of it, he hates the Kannagi clan to the core. Releasing the seal placed upon their god was probably just one of the ways he planned to do it.”
+
“Hyoue’s goal is to destroy the Kannagi clan. From the looks of it, he hates the Kannagi clan to the core. To release the seal placed upon their god, is probably just one method of doing so.”
   
Even though he used the word "probably", Kazuma was actually very certain. If Ayano saw that insane hatred with her own eyes, perhaps she would be able to understand!
+
Even though he used the word “probably”, Kazuma was actually very certain. If she saw that insane hatred with her own eyes, perhaps Ayano would be able to understand!
   
To Hyoue, God or Devil is nothing but power. In his heart, he only thinks about how he can use them. Since he had Ryuuya, who could be used to destroy the Kannagi clan, he did not need to obsessed over breaking the seal of their god.
+
To Hyoue, God or Devil is nothing but “power”. In his heart, he only thinks about how to use them. Now, Hyoue has gotten Ryuuya, who could be used to destroy the Kannagi clan. So in this case, he does not need to be so obsessed with breaking the seal of their god.
   
"Besides, they'd win if they kill us. My old man is now heavy with injuries......"
+
“Besides, in this situation, killing us would mean they have won. Because my old man is now with heavy injuries------“
   
“That was your fault!”
+
“That was done by you!”
   
“Don't talk about that right now. No matter how powerful the clan chief may be, his body can't fight. The branch family is completely useless. In other words, if we die, it means the end of the Kannagi clan. Got it?”
+
“Don’t talk about that for now. No matter how powerful the clan chief may be, his body is unable to fight. Those in the branch family are all useless. In other words, if we die, it means the end of the Kannagi clan. Got it?”
   
After hearing his logical analysis, Ayano had no way of rebutting. Even though she knew that Kazuma was right, her body naturally rejected the fact that she would have to fight against Ryuuya once more.
+
After hearing the logical analysis, Ayano had no way of rebutting. Even though she knew that Kazuma was right, but for her to have to fight with Ryuya once more, her body naturally rejected the idea.
   
But before she could recollect herself, Kazuma raised his head to look into the sky.
+
But before Ayano could get into the right mindset, the situation changed. Kazuma raised his head to look into the sky suddenly.
   
“No time to think...... We've been found.”
+
“No time to hesitate------ We have been spotted.”
   
......? Didn't you set up a kekkai?”
+
------? Didn’t you set up a kekkai?”
   
“Yeah, but after what the two of you did, I doubt it'll last.”
+
“Yeah, but after the thing the two of you did, I doubt it would last long.”
   
“......I'm so sorry.”
+
“……I am so sorry.”
   
“It's okay...... By the way, Ren.”
+
“It is okay------ by the way, Ren.”
   
 
“Ah, yes?”
 
“Ah, yes?”
   
Ren, who was called suddenly, replied in a rising voice.
+
Ren was called upon suddenly and replied in a rising voice. Kazuma then made a cruel declaration.
   
  +
“Hyoue is sure to make you his target because to be able to get the power of a God as well is most desirable. But since we will be struggling just to take care of Ryuya, we have no capabilities to protect you as well, so you must handle your own problems yourself.”
Kazuma then made a cruel declaration,
 
   
  +
This sentence seemed to have the hidden meaning of “you might as well go die if you are a nuisance”, so Ren’s expression grew tense. But he recovered in a while, and looked back at his brother with determined eyes.
“Hyoue will definitely target you, because he'd still want the power of a God. But we'll be struggling with just Ryuuya, so there's no way we can protect you. Therefore, handle your own problems by yourself.”
 
   
  +
“I…… I got it. Against someone like Hyoue, I alone can handle him. If I lose, I shall kill myself before I get caught, I won’t cause any trouble for Nii-sama, will that do?”
This sentence seemed to imply "you might as well die if you're a nuisance", so Ren became tense upon hearing it. But he recovered in a while, and looked back at his brother with determined eyes.
 
   
  +
Ren said abruptly with a pale face.
“I...... I got it. I can handle someone like Hyoue by myself. If I lose, I shall commit seppuku before I get caught, so I won't cause any trouble for Nii-sama. Will that do?”
 
   
  +
Kazuma, unsure whether to laugh or cry, looked at Ren and then turned his head to Ayano.
Ren said, with a pale face.
 
   
  +
“What to do, because you said such dumb words, now even Ren does not know what he is fighting so hard for.”
Kazuma, unsure whether to laugh or cry, stared at Ren, and then turned his head to Ayano.
 
   
  +
“What idiotic words? As the main family of the Kannagi clan, this kind of determination is only natural!”
“Man, because you said such stupid things, now Ren has no clue what he's fighting so hard for.”
 
   
  +
Kazuma no longer talked to Ayano, but instead turned his head to Ren. Then he grabbed the tiny head that stood before his chest.
“What stupid things? As the main family of the Kannagi clan, this kind of determination is only natural!”
 
   
  +
“Wha……What’s the matter, Nii-sama?”
Kazuma, rather than concerning himself with Ayano, turned to Ren instead. He grabbed the tiny head that stood before his chest.
 
   
  +
“Ren, let me tell you the rules of this game. “The winner is the one who lives”. Simple?”
“Wha...... What's the matter, Nii-sama?”
 
   
  +
Ren was at a loss due to the sudden rough actions, but Kazuma continues to talk without caring.
“Ren, let me tell you the rules of this game. 'The survivor always wins'. Simple enough?”
 
   
  +
“Someone without the will to live is sure to lose. This is a rule that will never change in a fight. Remember that.
Ren was at a loss due to the sudden roughness, but Kazuma continued without caring.
 
   
  +
Listen well. You are just a kid, just a newbie; no one thinks that you are of much use. So, just doing what you can do will be enough.”
“Someone without the will to live will lose for sure. This is a rule that will never change, so remember that.
 
   
  +
“What I can do……?”
Listen well. You're just a kid - No one thinks you're of much use, so just doing what you can will be enough.”
 
   
  +
“That is “to live”. Don’t try to beautify death with terms like self-sacrifice.
“Doing what I can......?”
 
   
“That'd be 'to live'. Don't try to beautify death with terms like 'self-sacrifice'. Death is the end of everything. You'll lose your past, present and future in an instant. There is no way to start over. It is the absolute end.”
+
Death is the end of everything. Anything in the past, present and future will lose their meaning in an instant. That is death. There is no way to start over. It is the absolute end.”
   
Unable to lose nor sacrifice, Kazuma could not accept exchanging the future of a twelve year old for peace.
+
Unable to lose, unable to sacrifice, he could not accept using the future of a twelve year old in exchange for peace.
   
He did not want to lose anything important anymore.
+
Kazuma did not want to lose anything important anymore.
   
“But as long as you're still alive, there will be a chance to turn the tables around. So, even if your teeth are knocked out, you have to swallow them back along with your blood. No matter how pathetic or shameful it seems, never give up on surviving. Even if you must struggle to the very last moment, that is your battle. Can you do it?”
+
“But as long as you are still alive, there will be a chance to turn the tables around; so, even if your teeth are broken off, you must swallow them back with your blood, no matter how pathetic, how shameful it seems, never give up on surviving. Even if you must struggle to the very last moment, this is your battle, can you do it?”
   
Kazuma looked at Ren closely, and Ren returned his gaze in the same way.
+
Kazuma looked at Ren closely, and Ren looked back at Kazuma just the same way.
   
Never give up, never throw hope away - That is what is required to win. That is what Ren learned from Kazuma. His pale face regained its natural color, and the dread of being pushed to a dead-end faded from his eyes.
+
Never give up, never throw hope away, these are the determinations required to win. Ren learned this from Kazuma. His pale face regained its natural color; the light of being pushed to a dead-end in his eyes seems to be fading away.
   
(I am not alone.
+
(I am not alone.)
   
There are people who protect me, people who support me, so all I need to do is finish whatever I can. Because this is the best way to make the current me, who is still immature, useful.)
+
There are people who protect me, people who support me, so all I need to do is to finish whatever I can. Because this is the best way to make the me, who is still immature, now useful.
   
 
“Yes!”
 
“Yes!”
   
Hearing such an energetic reply, Kazuma gave off a gentle smile. Ren was comfortable with having his head rubbed so roughly.
+
Hearing such an energetic reply, Kazuma gave off a gentle smile. The feeling of his head being rubbed in a rough manner was making Ren feel very comfortable.
   
 
“So then...”
 
“So then...”
   
Kazuma pushed Ren backwards lightly and told Ayano, without shifting his eyes,
+
Kazuma pushed Ren backwards lightly and told Ayano without shifting his eyes,
   
......He's here.”
+
------He’s here.”
   
Ayano raised her head to look into the sky. As if slicing open the blue sky, a black shadow darker than darkness itself emerged from a point in the sky. Following that, the shadow expanded quickly, clearly revealing its face.
+
Ayano raised her head to look into the sky. As if the blue sky was sliced open, a black shadow even darker than darkness itself was pasted on one point of the sky. Following that, the shadow expanded quickly, and its face could be seen more clearly.
   
“So he's here......”
+
“So he is here……”
   
Ayano mumbled in a trembling voice after seeing a human shadow form.
+
Ayano mumbled in a trembling voice after seeing a clear human shadow being formed.
   
The black shadow, who seemed to be able absorb all light just by opening its arms like wings, landed on the ground. Kazuma smiled evilly at the demonic opponent that stood there silently.
+
The black shadow that seems to absorb all light by opening its arms like wings, landed on the ground. Up against a demonic opponent that stood there silently, Kazuma’s face showed an evil smile.
 
"Now, let round two begin......"
 
   
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“Come on, let round two begin------“
   
   
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