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So hot – there was no room in his mind for anything but the heat, all thought being stolen by the crimson flame.
 
So hot – there was no room in his mind for anything but the heat, all thought being stolen by the crimson flame.
   
He continuously rolled on the ground, attempting to extinguish the flame. Nearby, some children observed his pitiable state.
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He continuously rolled on the floor, attempting to extinguish the flame. Nearby, some children observed his pitiable state.
   
 
I say children, but that belies the range of their ages. The smallest were young children of only four or five while the oldest were full-grown teenagers of fifteen or sixteen.
 
I say children, but that belies the range of their ages. The smallest were young children of only four or five while the oldest were full-grown teenagers of fifteen or sixteen.
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“You... You foolish idiot!”
 
“You... You foolish idiot!”
   
The head that Toru had forcefully stepped on was now slowly lifting itself upward. The youth used his hands as support against the ground and stared intently at Toru from below.
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The head that Toru had forcefully stepped on was now slowly lifting itself upward. The youth used his hands as support against the floor and stared intently at Toru from below.
   
 
“You... What are you trying to do...?”
 
“You... What are you trying to do...?”

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