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(Wh–Wh–Wha?!)
 
(Wh–Wh–Wha?!)
   
This smile, that was not a smile, caught Ren like a deer caught in headlights, unable to run or even look away.
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This smile that was not a smile caught Ren like a deer caught in headlights, unable to run or even look away.
   
 
“Ah... Ah...”
 
“Ah... Ah...”
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On the other hand, Misao wore a smile, watching as Kazuma was blown away. She slowly retreated without ever looking away.
 
On the other hand, Misao wore a smile, watching as Kazuma was blown away. She slowly retreated without ever looking away.
   
As if swapping positions, as Misao retreated, ten men appeared from the shadows of the surrounding buildings. They wore Western suits, seemingly businessmen at first glance, but though their ethnicity and ages were all different, their teamwork was at a very high level.
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As if swapping positions, as Misao retreated, ten men appeared from the shadows of the surrounding buildings. They wore Western suits, seemingly businessmen at first glance, but though their ethnicities and ages were all different, their teamwork was at a very high level.
   
 
They spread out in a fan-shaped formation and surrounded Kazuma – who now lay on the ground – extracting the contents of their cases in swift, practiced motions.
 
They spread out in a fan-shaped formation and surrounded Kazuma – who now lay on the ground – extracting the contents of their cases in swift, practiced motions.
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“Fi–Fire!”
 
“Fi–Fire!”
   
It was a command shouted in a voice that no longer radiated calm. Driven by fear and the voice, the men reflexively pulled the trigger.
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It was a command shouted in a voice that no longer radiated calm. Driven by fear, and the voice, the men reflexively pulled the trigger.
   
 
The erupting gunfire, loud enough to cause deafness, echoed through the alley. After being hit by several hundred more bullets, the black shadow fell once more.
 
The erupting gunfire, loud enough to cause deafness, echoed through the alley. After being hit by several hundred more bullets, the black shadow fell once more.
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In addition to the first sniper, over one kilometer away, Misao had prepared a second sniper as a trump card. They had been placed across from each other, two kilometers apart, with Kazuma in the center.
 
In addition to the first sniper, over one kilometer away, Misao had prepared a second sniper as a trump card. They had been placed across from each other, two kilometers apart, with Kazuma in the center.
   
Despite this, Kazuma had killed them. This meant that while defending against such a savage attack, he had calmly been scanning an area with a radius of at least one kilometer without missing a beat.
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And yet Kazuma had killed them. This meant that while defending against such a savage attack, he had calmly been scanning an area with a radius of at least one kilometer without missing a beat.
   
 
Though what he said was unbelievable, the radio had yet to respond. Misao offered a bitter smile and discarded her radio.
 
Though what he said was unbelievable, the radio had yet to respond. Misao offered a bitter smile and discarded her radio.

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