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“Dammit! I'm not sure if I'll make it in time.”
 
“Dammit! I'm not sure if I'll make it in time.”
   
A teenager rushed towards the station in order to catch the last train.
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A teenager rushed towards the station in order to catch the last train,
   
Takahashi Shuuji was a 20 year-old university student.
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Takahashi Shuuji. A 20 year-old university student.
   
 
As a formal participant of the Kendo club, his slender-seeming body was actually very well trained—there was no fat on it at all.
 
As a formal participant of the Kendo club, his slender-seeming body was actually very well trained—there was no fat on it at all.
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He changed his direction once more and continued in the direction in which he had first been going. The scene reflected in his eyes made Shuuji stare, his eyes wide open.
 
He changed his direction once more and continued in the direction in which he had first been going. The scene reflected in his eyes made Shuuji stare, his eyes wide open.
   
The same as the way behind him—there was only one tunnel that stretched until it vanished as far as he can see. Of course, there were no stairs or crossroads there either.
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The same as the way behind him—there was only one tunnel that stretched until it vanished as far as he can see. Of course, there were no stairs nor crossroads there either.
   
 
Shuuji was stranded in the middle of a tunnel that stretched endlessly—alone.
 
Shuuji was stranded in the middle of a tunnel that stretched endlessly—alone.
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It was a semi-transparent substance with a glue-like texture. It was originally the size of a ping-pong ball, then, it grew to the size of a baseball in a moment, and, after not too long, it was the size of a soccer ball.
 
It was a semi-transparent substance with a glue-like texture. It was originally the size of a ping-pong ball, then, it grew to the size of a baseball in a moment, and, after not too long, it was the size of a soccer ball.
   
The glue-like substance shone with a rainbow-colored glow. If this thing was seen in a photo, maybe it would give a clear, lustrous, and refreshing feeling.
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The glue-like substance shone with a rainbow-coloured glow. If this thing was seen in a photo, maybe it would give a clear, lustrous, and refreshing feeling.
   
But, the actual substance floating before his eyes could only be described as ugly. It was just like a tumor, vomit, or a filthy gooey piece of the two condensed to the maximum limit.
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But, the actual substance floating before his eyes could only be described as ugly. It was just like a tumour, vomit, or a filthy gooey piece of the two condensed to the maximum limit.
   
 
Instinctively, Shuuji hurriedly jumped backwards, reacting to his disgust. He jumped with force, landing two meters behind where he was, and the sound of his steps spreads across the entire underground passage.
 
Instinctively, Shuuji hurriedly jumped backwards, reacting to his disgust. He jumped with force, landing two meters behind where he was, and the sound of his steps spreads across the entire underground passage.
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Unable to withstand such a chilling experience, sending shivers down his spine, Shuuji's consciousness was consumed by darkness.
 
Unable to withstand such a chilling experience, sending shivers down his spine, Shuuji's consciousness was consumed by darkness.
   
And— He never woke up again.
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And— He never woke up ever again.
   
 
“The way you manipulated them left me speechless, but—“
 
“The way you manipulated them left me speechless, but—“

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