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Ayano did not have anything else on her mind, focusing solely on waving the Enraiha.
 
Ayano did not have anything else on her mind, focusing solely on waving the Enraiha.
   
Not thinking about anything at all, not hesitating, just focusing on fighting alone. She had had thoughts of showing some mercy, but she forgot about that instantly. Besides, if she goes easy against Vritra which possesses superb fire resistance, she won’t be able to do so much as to scratch it.
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Not thinking about anything at all, not hesitating, just focusing on fighting alone. She had had thoughts of showing some mercy, but she forgot about that instantly. Besides, if she goes easy against Vritra which possesses superb fire resistance, she won’t be able to so much as scratch it.
   
 
Wielding the divine blade that is shining with brilliance, Ayano became a weapon.
 
Wielding the divine blade that is shining with brilliance, Ayano became a weapon.
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Her accelerated senses can already feel this gradually stretching tentacle, its distance is less than one meter away.
 
Her accelerated senses can already feel this gradually stretching tentacle, its distance is less than one meter away.
   
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(------Unavoidable.)
(...It's unavoidable.)
 
   
 
Ayano calmly admits this fact.
 
Ayano calmly admits this fact.
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Ayano closes her eyes gently, quietly accepting the unavoidable “death”.
 
Ayano closes her eyes gently, quietly accepting the unavoidable “death”.
   
...Ugh!?”
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------Ugh!?”
   
 
Padong!
 
Padong!
   
This is definitely not the feeling of a murderous weapon stabbing into the body. It felt just like someone’s body come crashing into her---
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This is definitely not the feeling of a murderous weapon stabbing into the body. It felt just like someone’s body come crashing into her------
   
“Are ya still sleeping!? Wake up! You dumb girl!”
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“Still sleeping!? Wake up! You dumb girl!”
   
 
“Ahh!?”
 
“Ahh!?”
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“Ka……Kazuma!?”
 
“Ka……Kazuma!?”
   
The negative feelings she had ten seconds ago vanished without a trace.
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The unrealistic feelings she had ten seconds ago vanished without a trace.
   
 
This is the shocking reality, her conscience was drawn in by the glow in those eyes before her, the throbbing in her heart cannot be suppressed.
 
This is the shocking reality, her conscience was drawn in by the glow in those eyes before her, the throbbing in her heart cannot be suppressed.
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“Who…… Who said I was sleeping!”
 
“Who…… Who said I was sleeping!”
   
Ayano flings that hand away, but did not let go of the hand that Kazuma is hugging tightly. Their bodies are flying several tens of meters in the air. In the sky that is even higher and further up than Vritra’s head.
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Ayano flings that hand away, but did not let go of the hand that Kazuma is hugging tightly. Their bodies are flying several tens of meters in the air like this------ in the sky that is even higher up than Vritra’s head.
   
 
(I don't have a choice.)
 
(I don't have a choice.)
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Ayano finds an excuse for herself, and then hugs Kazuma’s body even more tightly. She subconsciously look towards Kazuma’s back.
 
Ayano finds an excuse for herself, and then hugs Kazuma’s body even more tightly. She subconsciously look towards Kazuma’s back.
   
...Behind you!”
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------Behind you!”
   
 
Before Ayano shouted, Kazuma had already turned his body agilely in mid-air. Following that, he saw countless tentacles stretching towards the two of them from all over Vritra’s body.
 
Before Ayano shouted, Kazuma had already turned his body agilely in mid-air. Following that, he saw countless tentacles stretching towards the two of them from all over Vritra’s body.
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She raises her hand hurriedly. Just as she thought, her entire palm is stained red.
 
She raises her hand hurriedly. Just as she thought, her entire palm is stained red.
   
“Wait…… Wait a minute, you're injured……”
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“Wait…… Wait a minute, you are injured……”
   
“I'm fine, this is nothing.”
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“I am fine, this is nothing.”
   
 
Kazuma uses his hand to press against the wound, then says with a calm expression on his face.
 
Kazuma uses his hand to press against the wound, then says with a calm expression on his face.
   
But Ayano does not believe one bit of what he just said. If it is just a minor wound, it would be impossible that Kazuma failed to control the wind, and it would make even less sense that he is unable to even support Ayano's weight.
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But Ayano does not believe one bit of what he just said. If it is just a minor wound, it would be impossible that Kazuma failed to control the wind, and it would make even less sense that he is unable to even support the weight of Ayano.
   
 
With his back facing Ayano who seems to still want to ask some questions, Kazuma confronts Vritra. Obviously, he shows no signs of backing off. His determined resolve to “definitely save Misao” can be seen from the shadow emitted by his back.
 
With his back facing Ayano who seems to still want to ask some questions, Kazuma confronts Vritra. Obviously, he shows no signs of backing off. His determined resolve to “definitely save Misao” can be seen from the shadow emitted by his back.
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Up to this point, Ayano finally realized that she has misunderstood completely. But Kazuma has yet to finish what he wants to say.
 
Up to this point, Ayano finally realized that she has misunderstood completely. But Kazuma has yet to finish what he wants to say.
   
“It is not because I am chosen that I was given power! But to not lose again, to not let others take everything away------ I have already decided on that! I will not give up on anyone! I will save Misao! And I won't let you and Ren die either! I'm gonna kill that arrogant kid! Total perfection! That is the only result I will accept! You got a problem with that?!”
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“It is not because I am chosen that I was given power! But to not lose again, to not let others take everything away------ I have already decided on that! I will not give up on anyone! I will save Misao! And I will not let you and Ren die either! Then kill that arrogant kid! That is the only result I will accept! You got a problem with that!”
   
 
“Ah…… No…… Not at all.”
 
“Ah…… No…… Not at all.”
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“Kazuma?”
 
“Kazuma?”
   
“I'm fine.”
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“I am fine.”
   
 
“What do you mean by fine------”
 
“What do you mean by fine------”
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Kazuma seems to feel impatient towards the motionless Ayano, and began to take action. He grabs Ayano by her shoulder, wanting to force her aside------ Yet that strength is pathetically weak.
 
Kazuma seems to feel impatient towards the motionless Ayano, and began to take action. He grabs Ayano by her shoulder, wanting to force her aside------ Yet that strength is pathetically weak.
   
Ayano breathes out lightly, and then gently removes the hand pressing against her shoulder. Instead she grabs Kazuma by his arm, who’s about to collapse, and pulls him to her side.
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Ayano breathes out lightly, and then gently removes the hand pressing against her shoulder. Instead she grabs Kazuma, who’s about to collapse, by his arm, and pulls him to her side.
   
 
“You------”
 
“You------”
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“……You sure are talkative for a dying man.”
 
“……You sure are talkative for a dying man.”
   
Kazuma smiles against that weak rebuttal, and makes a declaration:
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Kazuma smiles against that weak rebut, and makes a declaration:
   
 
“Five minutes.”
 
“Five minutes.”
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“------Huh?”
 
“------Huh?”
   
“Five minutes, buy me some time.”
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“Five minutes, bear with it.”
   
 
“Is five minutes enough? Ten minutes, or maybe twenty would be easier------”
 
“Is five minutes enough? Ten minutes, or maybe twenty would be easier------”
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Kazuma holds his ground, repeating himself once more. This is not the minimum time required, but probably that the maximum amount of time he is willing to suppress his pride is five minutes?
 
Kazuma holds his ground, repeating himself once more. This is not the minimum time required, but probably that the maximum amount of time he is willing to suppress his pride is five minutes?
   
“Fine, fine.”
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“Fine fine.”
   
 
Ayano replies simply, as if hoaxing a child, and then stands up. She walks straight at Vritra, but turns around again after a few steps.
 
Ayano replies simply, as if hoaxing a child, and then stands up. She walks straight at Vritra, but turns around again after a few steps.

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