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With a sharp exclamation, Ayano swung Enraiha down. The divine sword granted by the king of the flame spirits to conquer the devil, burned and exorcized in a single stroke the revengeful ghost haunting the construction site.
 
With a sharp exclamation, Ayano swung Enraiha down. The divine sword granted by the king of the flame spirits to conquer the devil, burned and exorcized in a single stroke the revengeful ghost haunting the construction site.
   
“.............Fuuu”
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“.............fuuu”
   
Confirming the ghost’s annihilation, Ayano restored Enraiha back to its scabbard – her own body. Immediately from behind, a vapid sound can be heard:
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Confirming the ghost’s annihilation, Ayano restored Enraiha back to its scabbard – her own body. Immediately, from behind a vapid sound can be heard:
   
 
'''Bu, bu, bu'''
 
'''Bu, bu, bu'''
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Looking over the shoulder at the sad sight, sproing, she faced the source of the noise with a villainous discernment. That gaze, with no exaggeration, contains several times more killing intent than when facing the vengeful ghost.
 
Looking over the shoulder at the sad sight, sproing, she faced the source of the noise with a villainous discernment. That gaze, with no exaggeration, contains several times more killing intent than when facing the vengeful ghost.
   
Basking in those murderous eyes, Kazuma finally stopped the act – clapping hands – giving such a dull sound. But as evidence he wasn’t particularly sorry, his predatory smile didn’t disappear.
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Basking in those murderous eyes, Kazuma finally stopped the act – clapping hands – giving such a dull sound. But as evidence he wasn’t particularly sorry, his predatory, his predatory smile didn’t disappear.
   
 
“.................”
 
“.................”
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With a challenging look that could kill people by sight, Ayano stared at Kazuma very long. The usually sloppy facial expression. A slack attitude from which you couldn’t feel a trace of tension. That was acceptable. Even if he appears relaxed, it’s impossible for this man to be less than prepared before a battle.
 
With a challenging look that could kill people by sight, Ayano stared at Kazuma very long. The usually sloppy facial expression. A slack attitude from which you couldn’t feel a trace of tension. That was acceptable. Even if he appears relaxed, it’s impossible for this man to be less than prepared before a battle.
   
But even so, around his head, or to be more accurate, from around his jaw and below, there was a thing, as one would expect, she cannot stomach. The width of Kazuma's body increased by 20%. He did not get fat, much less put on muscle. He was bundling up in layers of clothes.
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But even so, around his head, or to be more accurate, from around his jaw and lower, there was a thing, as one would expect, she cannot stomach. The width of Kazuma's body increased by 20%. Nor did he get fat, much less put on muscle. He was bundling up in layers of clothes.
   
 
At the topmost he was wearing a fluffy down jacket. Stuffed with lots and lots of feathers. He seemed to be extremely warm. Also, how many extra clothes is he wearing underneath to appear to have doubled the thickness of his arms? Furthermore, a scarf is rolled around his head; he wears gloves – the origin of those dull applause.
 
At the topmost he was wearing a fluffy down jacket. Stuffed with lots and lots of feathers. He seemed to be extremely warm. Also, how many extra clothes is he wearing underneath to appear to have doubled the thickness of his arms? Furthermore, a scarf is rolled around his head; he wears gloves – the origin of those dull applause.
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"I agree. The suzerain favors me so!”
 
"I agree. The suzerain favors me so!”
   
Toward Kazuma's frivolous, sneering response, Ayano felt a fairly serious killing intent. She shouted, letting anger take it’s natural course.
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Toward Kazuma's frivolous, sneering response, Ayano felt a fairly serious killing intent. She shouted, leaving anger take it’s natural course.
   
“I’m sick of it! Why does Father hire you for this kind of job!?”
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“I’m sick of it! Why does Father hires you for this kind of job!?”
   
 
“Don’t ask me that”
 
“Don’t ask me that”
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Of course, he was being paid.
 
Of course, he was being paid.
   
No matter how nasty his personality was, Kazuma is a top class practitioner. His remuneration is by no means inexpensive. In spite of this, Juugo, even on these trifling ghost extermination jobs, obstinately continues to employ Kazuma.
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No matter how nasty his personality was, Kazuma is top class practitioner. His remuneration is by no means inexpensive. In spite of this, Juugo, even on these trifling ghost extermination jobs, obstinately continues to employ Kazuma.
On jobs like these, Kazuma literally doesn’t lift a finger. Ayano does all the work by herself. This man stands before her eyes for the sake of profit.
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On jobs like there, Kazuma literally doesn’t lift a finger. Ayano does all the work by herself. This man stands before her eyes for the sake of profit.
   
 
''You’re just a pimp!''
 
''You’re just a pimp!''
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Irritating but inevitable, Ayano decided to allow herself a modest recreation. Staring at that hateful, frivolously laughing man, she says in a tone that allows no objection:
 
Irritating but inevitable, Ayano decided to allow herself a modest recreation. Staring at that hateful, frivolously laughing man, she says in a tone that allows no objection:
   
“I’m hungry. We’re going to dinner.”
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“I’m hungry. We’re going to dinner”
   
 
Kazuma scowled slightly.
 
Kazuma scowled slightly.
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“Do you want to extort money from me again?”
 
“Do you want to extort money from me again?”
   
“Why are you complaining? They’re easy money at best”
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“Why are you complaining? There’re easy money at best”
   
 
“That’s different. If I were to name it, my job is like insurance. There is no need to move until an opponent you cannot manage alone appears.”
 
“That’s different. If I were to name it, my job is like insurance. There is no need to move until an opponent you cannot manage alone appears.”
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“In case of insurance, isn’t there supposed to be a refund?”
 
“In case of insurance, isn’t there supposed to be a refund?”
   
“If he were to refund every time, the insurance man would immediately go bankrupt.”
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“If he were to refund every time, the insurance man would immediately go bankrupt”
   
“You’re safe. Because you still make a lot of profit.”
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“You’re safe. Because you still make a lot of profit”
   
 
Obstinately, Ayano strongly insisted. Even Kazuma became generous after securing such a comfortable job and wasn’t in the mood to unconditionally refuse her. Even his rebuttal lost their usual severity, containing sweetness similar in some respects to a pre-established harmony.
 
Obstinately, Ayano strongly insisted. Even Kazuma became generous after securing such a comfortable job and wasn’t in the mood to unconditionally refuse her. Even his rebuttal lost their usual severity, containing sweetness similar in some respects to a pre-established harmony.
   
“Well, fine. If it’s just food.”
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“Well, fine. If it’s just food”
   
 
In the end Kazuma gave in. Ayano stiffened her mouth already turning into a broad smile, proudly nodding.
 
In the end Kazuma gave in. Ayano stiffened her mouth already turning into a broad smile, proudly nodding.
   
“Very well. Let’s go then. Yukari told me about a delicious French restaurant.”
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“Very well. Let’s go then. Yukari told me about a delicious French restaurant”
   
 
“...........French, huh?”
 
“...........French, huh?”
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“Why don’t you dress properly?”
 
“Why don’t you dress properly?”
   
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“Fool”
“Fool.”
 
   
With a single word Kazuma cut down and threw away Ayano’s criticism.
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With a single word Kazuma cut down and thrown away Ayano’s criticism.
   
 
“Why do I have to dress up in the exorcism business?”
 
“Why do I have to dress up in the exorcism business?”
   
“That wouldn’t be too bad. Perhaps you will become better looking.”
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“That wouldn’t be too bad. Perhaps you will become better looking”
   
 
“Leave me alone. It can’t be helped if my partner is not worthy enough to dress up for, right?”
 
“Leave me alone. It can’t be helped if my partner is not worthy enough to dress up for, right?”
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“Do you hear me? From now on, during the job wear a necktie. Do you understand?”
 
“Do you hear me? From now on, during the job wear a necktie. Do you understand?”
   
“I refuse,” Kazuma answered instantly.
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“I refuse” Kazuma answered instantly.
   
 
That quick reaction clearly denoted that there is no place for negotiation.
 
That quick reaction clearly denoted that there is no place for negotiation.
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Eventually both were admitted in, even without neckties, settling down after searching for the most expensive (this is essential) restaurant.
 
Eventually both were admitted in, even without neckties, settling down after searching for the most expensive (this is essential) restaurant.
   
“Well, something like this.”
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“Well, something like this”
   
 
“Don’t <<something like this>> me! You always order the most expensive thing on the menu! Do you bear some grudge against me?”
 
“Don’t <<something like this>> me! You always order the most expensive thing on the menu! Do you bear some grudge against me?”
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Harassment for the sake of diminishing, even if just a little, Kazuma’s profits obtained without working at all. Ayano explained her actions like this and she herself truly believed so – at the very least, at a superficial level.
 
Harassment for the sake of diminishing, even if just a little, Kazuma’s profits obtained without working at all. Ayano explained her actions like this and she herself truly believed so – at the very least, at a superficial level.
   
“Before I met you I didn’t know.”
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“Before I met you I didn’t know”
   
Hands joined before her chest, like a dreaming maiden, Ayano whispered with a voice shaking with delight:
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Hands joined before her chest, like a dreaming maiden, Ayano whispered with a voice shaking with delight.
   
 
"The meal other people treat me to could be so delicious.”
 
"The meal other people treat me to could be so delicious.”

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