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One man, like a servant, followed her, leaving between them several steps.
 
One man, like a servant, followed her, leaving between them several steps.
   
Because of the back lighting he saw only outlines but even from those shadows it was impossible not to recognize the proud atmosphere drifting around the woman. The glance overlooking them was more suited for stray dogs than humans.
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Because of the back lighting he sees only outlines but even from those shadows it was impossible not to recognize the proud atmosphere drifting around the woman. The glance overlooking them was more suited for stray dogs than humans.
   
 
Leaving a distance of five meters between them, the woman faced Ren and Ayumi.
 
Leaving a distance of five meters between them, the woman faced Ren and Ayumi.
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Glaring at Ren as if he was her archenemy, she squeezed out a stifled to death voice from the gap between her clenched teeth. Her well regulated, elegant features, changed into the face of a demonic warrior.
 
Glaring at Ren as if he was her archenemy, she squeezed out a stifled to death voice from the gap between her clenched teeth. Her well regulated, elegant features, changed into the face of a demonic warrior.
   
"Don't mess around with me."
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"Don't mess around with me"
   
 
Mayumi's angry roar shrunk Ayumi's body with a start. After staring with much discord at the frightened girl, she turned an identical glance at Ren.
 
Mayumi's angry roar shrunk Ayumi's body with a start. After staring with much discord at the frightened girl, she turned an identical glance at Ren.
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"................."
 
"................."
   
Without even using words, Mayumi carelessly beckoned her as if calling her pet dog or something.
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Without even using words, Mayumi carelessly beckoned her. as if calling her pet dog or something.
   
 
Ayumi started walking obediently.
 
Ayumi started walking obediently.
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"I had...no intention...."
 
"I had...no intention...."
   
Staring at Ayumi, protesting in a trembling voice, with the look a carnivorous animal has before its feed, Mayumi let go of her jaw.
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Staring at Ayumi, protesting in a trembling voice, wit the look a carnivorous animal has before its feed, Mayumi let go of her jaw.
   
 
And then - she pulled her hand backwards and swung with all her strength.
 
And then - she pulled her hand backwards and swung with all her strength.
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"What have you done?"
 
"What have you done?"
   
But Mayumi didn't even look at Ren. As she already stated "your turn is already over" she disregarded his existence itself.
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But Mayumi didn't even looked at Ren. As she already stated "your turn is already over" she disregarded his existence itself.
   
 
Instead, the man who followed behind her moved. With body movement that had no openings he stepped forward and got on his knee before Ayumi.
 
Instead, the man who followed behind her moved. With body movement that had no openings he stepped forward and got on his knee before Ayumi.
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''Inside the sea?''
 
''Inside the sea?''
   
It was out of the question. Ren being an Enjutsushi water was nothing more but a thing to be avoided. There was no point for Ren's power to be weakened beyond what Yuuji could accomplish.
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It was out of the question. Ren being an Enjutsushi water was nothing more but a thing to be avoided. There was no point for Ren's power to weakened beyond what Yuuji could accomplish.
   
 
To Ren, stuck in a defensive battle, Yuuji turned words of ridicule.
 
To Ren, stuck in a defensive battle, Yuuji turned words of ridicule.
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"Kuu- "
 
"Kuu- "
   
Because of Yuuji's carelessness, recognizing he became long separated from Ayumi, Ren grinds his teeth. If it goes like this, Ayumi will really be taken away.
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Because of Yuuji's carelessness, recognizing he became long separated from Ayumi, Ren grinds his teeth. if it goes like this, Ayumi will really be taken away.
   
''What should I do? What should I -''
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''What should I do? what should I -''
   
 
The problem was that he had no technique to defend against the blows. He can use flames to cover the surroundings but the bottom of his feet are perfectly defenseless. When fighting against Chijutsushi, that became a lethal weakness. A foothold was necessary. Separated from Yuuji's control, a scaffold made of <Earth> he cannot control.
 
The problem was that he had no technique to defend against the blows. He can use flames to cover the surroundings but the bottom of his feet are perfectly defenseless. When fighting against Chijutsushi, that became a lethal weakness. A foothold was necessary. Separated from Yuuji's control, a scaffold made of <Earth> he cannot control.
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"You brat - you changed the burning sand to magma!"
 
"You brat - you changed the burning sand to magma!"
   
"I gave it a try."
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"I gave it a try"
   
 
Receiving Yuuji's angry roar, Ren laughed triumphantly. It does not mean he had a positive proof. If a Suijutsushi can stand atop water he tried to stand atop magma, that could also be called fluid flame. He simply tried out that idea.
 
Receiving Yuuji's angry roar, Ren laughed triumphantly. It does not mean he had a positive proof. If a Suijutsushi can stand atop water he tried to stand atop magma, that could also be called fluid flame. He simply tried out that idea.
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In the space between the two bedrocks Yuuji was in anguish. And there, the last blow came.
 
In the space between the two bedrocks Yuuji was in anguish. And there, the last blow came.
   
"Next is up."
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"Next is up"
   
 
" -!?"
 
" -!?"

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