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Decide by yourself the path you want to follow - that kind of thinking was a foreign concept for Ayumi.
 
Decide by yourself the path you want to follow - that kind of thinking was a foreign concept for Ayumi.
   
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From the moment she was made, a fixed road with no place for divergence was pointed out for her. She never thought of getting off it.
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From the moment she was made, a fixed road with no place for divergence was pointed out for her.She never thought of getting off it.
   
 
The self that will become a sacrifice no matter what. Imagining that, Ayumi remembered she was reminded of an uneasy feeling close to horror. A dread that shook the very root of the meaning of her existence. Comparing it to the fear of loosing her life in the ceremony, that's not even close. Because the concept called death is nothing more than the proof of accomplishing the task bestowed upon her.
 
The self that will become a sacrifice no matter what. Imagining that, Ayumi remembered she was reminded of an uneasy feeling close to horror. A dread that shook the very root of the meaning of her existence. Comparing it to the fear of loosing her life in the ceremony, that's not even close. Because the concept called death is nothing more than the proof of accomplishing the task bestowed upon her.
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"Is that wrong?"
 
"Is that wrong?"
   
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Ren immediately tried to suppress his struggling heart. Returning the grip to the hand that held his, he looked straight into Ayumi's eyes.
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Ren immediately tried to suppress his struggling heart. Returning the grip to the hand that held his, he looked straight into Mayumi's eyes.
   
 
"No it's not.", he declared.
 
"No it's not.", he declared.
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In a state he couldn't even hear his beloved daughter's voice, Iwao tried to get up. With a sublime expression, as if he was seeing death, Mayumi could do nothing but look at him in a daze.
 
In a state he couldn't even hear his beloved daughter's voice, Iwao tried to get up. With a sublime expression, as if he was seeing death, Mayumi could do nothing but look at him in a daze.
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===

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