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".........................."
 
".........................."
   
Maybe because she didn't really have time to think about it, Ayumi didn't instantly take Ren's hand.
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Maybe because she didn't really have time to think about it, Ayumi didn't instantly took Ren's hand.
   
 
"Why?"
 
"Why?"
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Kazuma nodded, turned his eyes on one the Chijutsushi standing there petrified and arrogantly commanded him.
 
Kazuma nodded, turned his eyes on one the Chijutsushi standing there petrified and arrogantly commanded him.
   
"Do it. If you obey I won't 80% kill you, I'll drop it to 50%."
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"Do it. If you obey I won't 80% kill you, I'll drop it to 50% percent."
   
 
"Do- don't screw arou- kyaa!"
 
"Do- don't screw arou- kyaa!"
   
The man could't finish those courageous words of resistance. The atmosphere turned rigid as the man's face was hit and his nose sunk ten centimeters into his cranium.
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The man could't finish those courageous words of resistance. The atmosphere turned rigid hit the man's face and his nose sunk ten centimeters into his cranium.
   
 
"........is this an 80% kill?"
 
"........is this an 80% kill?"
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The crystal mass slipped off in accordance with the diagonal cross-section. Furthermore, Kazuma cut that too.
 
The crystal mass slipped off in accordance with the diagonal cross-section. Furthermore, Kazuma cut that too.
   
Without injuring the body inside, the wind blades scrapped off only the crystal. By the time she fell to the ground, there wasn't even a fragment of crystal sticking to Mayumi's body.
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Without injuring the body inside, the wind blades scrapped off only the crystal. By the time she fell to the ground, there wasn't even a fragment of crystal sticking to Ayumi's body.
   
 
"As expected of Nii-sama! This was amazing, righ- "
 
"As expected of Nii-sama! This was amazing, righ- "
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"......was there a need to go so far?"
 
"......was there a need to go so far?"
   
"I wonder. First of all, this was the quickest and easiest way.", Kazuma stated calmly without showing a particle of introspection.
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"I wonder. First of all, this was the quickest and easier way.", Kazuma stated calmly without showing a particle of introspection.
   
"Let's get out already. There's no more fun to be here."
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"Let's get out already. There's no more fun to be had here."
   
 
"......that so?"
 
"......that so?"

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