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"As if I know. Maybe it teleported."
 
"As if I know. Maybe it teleported."
   
Kazuma casually answered Ayano's question. It seems that even by using his power of perception this man couldn't capture its movement process. The question on how it really crossed over the space was recurrent.
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Kazuma casually answered Ayano's question. It seems that this even by using his power of perception this man couldn't capture its movement process. The question on how it really crossed over the space was recurrent.
   
 
"Please stop it.......making that stupid appearance....."
 
"Please stop it.......making that stupid appearance....."
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Obeying Kazuma's direction, Ayano speedily retreated. There was no pursuit.
 
Obeying Kazuma's direction, Ayano speedily retreated. There was no pursuit.
   
"Wait a second, that's absurdly hard! How did you manage to smash its head?"
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"Wait a second, that's absurdly hard! How did you managed to smash its head?"
   
 
"No, it would turn bad if I would attempt it a second time."
 
"No, it would turn bad if I would attempt it a second time."
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Ayano looked up at Kazuma with a pale complexion.
 
Ayano looked up at Kazuma with a pale complexion.
   
"Does that mean it's evolving?"
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"Does that means it's evolving?"
   
 
"Instead of evolving maybe adapting oneself would be more appropriate - well, it's the same no matter what we call it....this is bad."
 
"Instead of evolving maybe adapting oneself would be more appropriate - well, it's the same no matter what we call it....this is bad."
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Coincident with the shout, Kazuma grabbed Ren and jumped with all his strength. Ayano too, left that place with all her energy.
 
Coincident with the shout, Kazuma grabbed Ren and jumped with all his strength. Ayano too, left that place with all her energy.
   
Immediately following that, something invisible ran through the place the trio stood. That something drilled the thick sea of trees opening a straight road in it.
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Immediately following that, something invisible run through the place the trio stood. That something drilled the thick sea of trees opening a straight road in it.
   
 
The Tsuwabuki mansion placed up ahead in a straight line was annihilated without trace. Without using an explosion or blaze - literally annihilated.
 
The Tsuwabuki mansion placed up ahead in a straight line was annihilated without trace. Without using an explosion or blaze - literally annihilated.
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Ayumi drew near, completely overturning the power relationship.
 
Ayumi drew near, completely overturning the power relationship.
   
"If you were to go now and gather the remaining Chijutsushi do you think that this newly set free Zenon will let you do it? If you want to do it, now is the time! If there's the two of us surely - "
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"If you were to go now and gather the remaining Chijutsushi do you that this newly set free Zenon will let you do it? If yo want to do it, now is the time! If there's the two of us surely - "
   
 
"No! I don't want to die!"
 
"No! I don't want to die!"
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They were not done yet. Chopping down rock snakes, they even managed to injure Zenon. But that was immediately healed.
 
They were not done yet. Chopping down rock snakes, they even managed to injure Zenon. But that was immediately healed.
   
It was as if swinging their fists at the ground. Because the opponent was too large, there wasn't a meaning in attacking it. Even with a meaning there was no result from attacking it.
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It was as if swinging their fists at the ground.Because the opponent was too large, there wasn't a meaning in attacking it. Even with a meaning there was result from attacking it.
   
They didn't even had a match. The current status doesn't allow for a competition. One-sidedly scraping off their physical strength, it's only waiting for a chance to annihilate them - they were in the midst of such a hopeless situation. When Ayumi started participating in the war.
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They didn't even had a match. The current status doesn't allow for a competition. One-sidedly scraping off their physical strength, its only waiting for a chance to annihilate them - they were in the midst of such a hopeless situation. When Ayumi started participating in the war.
   
 
"Ayumi-chan?"
 
"Ayumi-chan?"
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"Ok."
 
"Ok."
   
Nodding deeply, Kazuma closed his eyes. Several seconds after - the pair of eyes that showed a second time were dyed in a transparent blue. That was the carved seal engraved by the spirit Lord of the Wind. The wind spirits playing in the sky were the evidence that he was allowed to control everything.
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Nodding deeply, Kazuma closed his eyes. Several seconds after - the pair of eyes that showed a second time were dyeied in a transparent blue. That was the carved seal engraved by the spirit Lord of the Wind. The wind spirits playing in the sky was the evidence that he was allowed to control everything.
   
 
Holding a power that tremendously magnified in his hands, the supreme ruler of the sky fearlessly laughed.
 
Holding a power that tremendously magnified in his hands, the supreme ruler of the sky fearlessly laughed.
   
 
"So, let's go - the spirit of reincarnation from just one mountain, smash it to pieces until there's nothing left!"
 
"So, let's go - the spirit of reincarnation from just one mountain, smash it to pieces until there's nothing left!"
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=== Part 5 ===
 
=== Part 5 ===

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