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=== Part 1 ===
 
=== Part 1 ===
   
"Ugh, why are you always like that?"
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"Uugh, why are you always like that?"
   
 
"Don't say vague words such as ''like that''. Was there a problem?"
 
"Don't say vague words such as ''like that''. Was there a problem?"
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"Ah."
 
"Ah."
   
Belatedly realizing she became the target of attention, the girl's face became colored with shame.
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Belatedly realizing the became the target of attention, the girl's face became colored with shame.
   
 
"You're the center of attention."
 
"You're the center of attention."
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Being too serious and having pride towards herself as a practitioner, Ayano couldn't forgive Kazuma's attitude.
 
Being too serious and having pride towards herself as a practitioner, Ayano couldn't forgive Kazuma's attitude.
   
"J- just stop it already you low-life scoundrel!!!"
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"J- just stop it already you you low-life scoundrel!!!"
   
Which means her anger exploded in the already familiar way.
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Which means her anger exploded in the in the already familiar way.
   
 
What happened until now can be called an ordinary scene. But -
 
What happened until now can be called an ordinary scene. But -
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Called out from an unexpected direction, Ayano frowned with a twitch. Turning her face around, a strange man before his twenties, with a sloppy smile, approached grinning.
 
Called out from an unexpected direction, Ayano frowned with a twitch. Turning her face around, a strange man before his twenties, with a sloppy smile, approached grinning.
   
"Forget about that useless man and come with me. I'll make you happy."
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"ForgeT about that useless man and come with me. I'll make you happy."
   
 
''.....What, a flirt.....''
 
''.....What, a flirt.....''
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Watching around even more, the ''useless man'' was putting a coin into a vending machine.
 
Watching around even more, the ''useless man'' was putting a coin into a vending machine.
   
"Hey.", said Ayano in a crushed to death tone.
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"Hey", said Ayano in a crushed to death tone.
   
 
But even so, without changing his facial expression Kazuma took a sip of the Oolong tea, enjoyed the cold liquid reaching his neck, sampled its flavor in full and finally answered.
 
But even so, without changing his facial expression Kazuma took a sip of the Oolong tea, enjoyed the cold liquid reaching his neck, sampled its flavor in full and finally answered.
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"Don't say that. The job is already finished, so I don't think I have any obligation to protect you."
 
"Don't say that. The job is already finished, so I don't think I have any obligation to protect you."
   
In spite of absolutely not protecting her during the job, Kazuma said so, shamelessly.
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In spite on absolutely not protecting her during the job, Kazuma said so, shamelessly.
   
 
Of course, Ayano can't be deceived with those words.
 
Of course, Ayano can't be deceived with those words.
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Completely made fun of, the man's face flushed bright red. Of course, not being ashamed because he doesn't know his standing.
 
Completely made fun of, the man's face flushed bright red. Of course, not being ashamed because he doesn't know his standing.
   
Gripping his fists, the man drew closer with a rough gait. No matter how you look at it, he wasn't in the disposition to flirt with Ayano anymore.
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Gripping his fists, the man drew closer with a rough gait. No matter who you look at it, he wasn't in the disposition to flirt with Ayano anymore.
   
 
"Really......"
 
"Really......"
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The man's fist and then his body slipped through the space between those two.
 
The man's fist and then his body slipped through the space between those two.
   
First his fist and then his upper body and then the lower half of his body went through.
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First his fist and then his upper body and then his lower half of the body went through.
   
 
Nonchalantly, with his foot left in place, Kazuma swiped the man's feet.
 
Nonchalantly, with his foot left in place, Kazuma swiped the man's feet.
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"Ah, yeah," nodding obediently Ayano took the can.
 
"Ah, yeah," nodding obediently Ayano took the can.
   
Fleetingly looking at the can in her hand, for some reason her cheeks were dyed red.
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Fleetingly looking t the can in her hand, for some reason her cheeks were dyed red.
   
 
"Y- You....u...."
 
"Y- You....u...."
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Only by that movement, the man's body flew in mid-air. And then, with no sign of effort put into it, he was blown off with extreme force.
 
Only by that movement, the man's body flew in mid-air. And then, with no sign of effort put into it, he was blown off with extreme force.
   
By seizing a linear motion thrust with a circular one is swallowed up and the center of gravity crumbles.
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By seizing a linear motion thrust with a circular one it's swallowed up and the center of gravity crumbles.
   
This is a technique that is called Aiki in Japan and China or Hapki in Korea.
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This is a technique that is called Aiki in Japan and Kakei(???) in China.
   
 
By utilizing the opponent's power, a larger amount of power can be controlled with a smaller one - that is the advantage of this power but -
 
By utilizing the opponent's power, a larger amount of power can be controlled with a smaller one - that is the advantage of this power but -
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<nowiki> - bekiii! -</nowiki>
 
<nowiki> - bekiii! -</nowiki>
   
But even so, how much power did that man's attack have, to be flung away with enough force to break the roadside trees he crashed into.
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But even so how much power did that man's attack have, to be flung away with enough force to break the roadside trees he crashed into.
   
 
Kazuma looked down in silence at the man that tumbled from the nearby crashed trees. There is no negligence in those eyes. It was an expression convinced that he will definitely get up.
 
Kazuma looked down in silence at the man that tumbled from the nearby crashed trees. There is no negligence in those eyes. It was an expression convinced that he will definitely get up.
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It was torn off when its limit crossed-over.
 
It was torn off when its limit crossed-over.
   
".....Is this what you call ''pump up''?" asked Ayano, lacking a sense of reality.
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".....Is this what you call ''pump up''?," asked Ayano, lacking a sense of reality.
   
 
By repeating muscle contraction, by means of pumping large quantities of blood containing oxygen, the muscles will dramatically expand - there certainly is such a technique. But still -
 
By repeating muscle contraction, by means of pumping large quantities of blood containing oxygen, the muscles will dramatically expand - there certainly is such a technique. But still -
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The fist pushed out a second time and Kazuma dealt with it using the same circular motion.
 
The fist pushed out a second time and Kazuma dealt with it using the same circular motion.
   
But, whether Aiki or Hapki, although it appears like a supernatural movement for the untrained eyes, the principle is still the same.
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But, whether Aiki or Kakei, although it appears like a supernatural movement for the untrained eyes, the principle is still the same.
   
 
Even using the principle of leverage, if the opponent's power is bigger, there won't be any effect.
 
Even using the principle of leverage, if the opponent's power is bigger, there won't be any effect.

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