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"You, don't behave selfishly with the social standing of a rich woman! Return my Oolong tea!"
 
"You, don't behave selfishly with the social standing of a rich woman! Return my Oolong tea!"
   
".....Still, don't you think that it's unsightly......" Ayano murmured, dejected by the excessive cheapness.
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".....Still, I don't you think it's that unsightly......" Ayano murmured, dejected by the excessive cheapness.
   
 
Rare nowadays, she was full of disappointment.
 
Rare nowadays, she was full of disappointment.
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As for Ayano, she was conceited about the fact that Kazuma was her partner. More than Kirika, she was far more helpful. She fought for the sake of Kazuma.
 
As for Ayano, she was conceited about the fact that Kazuma was her partner. More than Kirika, she was far more helpful. She fought for the sake of Kazuma.
   
''"It's fine because it's Ayano."''
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''"It's fine because it's Ayano"''
   
 
He never told her such words, not even once.
 
He never told her such words, not even once.
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With a red face and clouded eyes, as if fever made her delirious, the girl slowly shook her head.
 
With a red face and clouded eyes, as if fever made her delirious, the girl slowly shook her head.
   
"I see. Then, take care."
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"I see. Then, take car.e"
   
 
Not really thinking about it, Nanase started walking - aiming at the tennis court.
 
Not really thinking about it, Nanase started walking - aiming at the tennis court.
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"Hey, he's still coming?"
 
"Hey, he's still coming?"
   
A second year in the tennis club, Sughino Mie murmured so, displeased from the bottom of her heart. Before her eyes, sticking to the tennis court's fence, a short and fat shadow was peeking.
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A second year in the tennis club, Sughino Mie murmured so, not pleased from the bottom of her heart. Before her eyes, sticking to the tennis court's fence, a short and fat shadow was peeking.
   
 
Just by looking, he was a suspicious man.
 
Just by looking, he was a suspicious man.
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Weirdly stared at by Utsumi, pressing his shutter as if possessed, the girls were murmuring between themselves.
 
Weirdly stared at by Utsumi, pressing his shutter as if possessed, the girls were murmuring between themselves.
   
As if hiding behind her back the first years that have just joined the club, revealed their thought when looking for the first time at the ominous living creature.
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As if hiding behind her back the first years that have just joined the club, revealed their thought when looking for the firs time at the ominous living creature.
   
"Se- senpai......what is ''that''?"
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"Se- senpai......what is ''that''? "
   
"That's a pervert."
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"That's a pervert"
   
 
Mie immediately replied with no hesitation. That answer was something the first years, who didn't know the circumstance, could't comprehend but just because of that, their disgust and dread didn't soften.
 
Mie immediately replied with no hesitation. That answer was something the first years, who didn't know the circumstance, could't comprehend but just because of that, their disgust and dread didn't soften.
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And then -
 
And then -
   
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GASyAN!
GASYAN!
 
   
 
An ominous sound interrupted Utsumi's triumphant speech. His camera, rolling on the ground, was trampled upon with all her strength by Nanase.
 
An ominous sound interrupted Utsumi's triumphant speech. His camera, rolling on the ground, was trampled upon with all her strength by Nanase.
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With a pose similar to Munch's Scream, Utsumi shouted.
 
With a pose similar to Munch's Scream, Utsumi shouted.
   
"Ah, ah, a..."
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"Ah, ah, a"
   
 
Leaking out as murmurs, as if his soul escaped his body, he looked up at Nanase in blank amazement.
 
Leaking out as murmurs, as if his soul escaped his body, he looked up at Nanase in blank amazement.
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Ten seconds after, the club's door was opened for a second time and all the girls in the club rushed out with rough steps. They speedily encircled Utsumi and glared at him with eyes burning in anger.
 
Ten seconds after, the club's door was opened for a second time and all the girls in the club rushed out with rough steps. They speedily encircled Utsumi and glared at him with eyes burning in anger.
   
A bit later the first years came out of the club-room. The reason they were late could be clearly seen. They collected the lynching tools. As expected they avoided the rackets, the emphasis was on the mop. But one person was holding a battered metal bat taken from somewhere.
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A bit later the first years came out of the club-room. The reason they were late could be clearly seen. They collected the lynching tools. As expected they avoided the rackets, the emphasis was on the mop. But one person was holding a bettered metal bat taken from somewhere.
   
".....Thank you, Nanase-san. That's enough." Mie said in a restrained voice.
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".....Thank you, Nanase-san. That's enough," Mie said in a restrained voice.
   
 
"Yeah."
 
"Yeah."
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''"Should I stop it?"''
 
''"Should I stop it?"''
   
"It's fine."
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"It's fine"
   
 
As if reading Nanase's thoughts, a smiling voice could be heard from her side. Turning her face around, before she knew, the one that commanded the punishment, Mie stood beside her.
 
As if reading Nanase's thoughts, a smiling voice could be heard from her side. Turning her face around, before she knew, the one that commanded the punishment, Mie stood beside her.
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"Na - na - se."
 
"Na - na - se."
   
Being spoken to in such a harsh voice, Nanase didn't show any sign of being perturbed. While steadily chewing her fries she just put in her mouth, she declared as a matter of course.
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Being spoken to in such a harsh voice, Nanase didn't show any sign of being perturbed. While steadily chewing her the fries she just put in her mouth, she declared as a matter of course.
   
 
"I told you I'm in the middle of eating. You were raising dust."
 
"I told you I'm in the middle of eating. You were raising dust."
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"Yu - ka - ri...."
 
"Yu - ka - ri...."
   
"Wh ~ a ~ t?"
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"Wh - a - t?"
   
 
Contrary to Ayano's dark tone, Yukari's reply didn't have an atom of darkness. The song-like tone felt like the elegance of a bright spring.
 
Contrary to Ayano's dark tone, Yukari's reply didn't have an atom of darkness. The song-like tone felt like the elegance of a bright spring.
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Ayano let out a low, small whisper. It seems it was lost in wind but it was the kind of sentence that would definitely reach the other party.
 
Ayano let out a low, small whisper. It seems it was lost in wind but it was the kind of sentence that would definitely reach the other party.
   
The tiptoes of Ayano's feet placed on the floor, lightly scratched the concrete.
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The tiptoes of Ayano's fingers placed on the floor, lightly scratched the concrete.
   
 
When the few moments before the strife began expanding over and over - at that time -
 
When the few moments before the strife began expanding over and over - at that time -
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"Oh, it's open!"
 
"Oh, it's open!"
   
Several boys came to the rooftop with a basket ball. It seems they wanted to exercise some after eating.
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Several boy came to the rooftop with a basket ball. It seems they wanted to exercise some after eating.
   
 
The minute that the door was opened Ayano and Yukari returned to their former positions so fast it didn't even leave an afterimage.
 
The minute that the door was opened Ayano and Yukari returned to their former positions so fast it didn't even leave an afterimage.
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The boy in the front - apparently a first year - finally perceived Ayano's group. His eyes opened wide in surprise.
 
The boy in the front - apparently a first year - finally perceived Ayano's group. His eyes opened wide in surprise.
   
"Shi- Shinomiya-san? Kudo-san and- and even Kannagi-san?"
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"Shi- shinomiya-san? Kudo-san and- and even Kannagi-san?"
   
 
The good fortune of being able to see the Academy's top three beautiful girls in the same place made the boy's face become loose. On the faces of the boys following him, an expression of supreme bliss floated.
 
The good fortune of being able to see the Academy's top three beautiful girls in the same place made the boy's face become loose. On the faces of the boys following him, an expression of supreme bliss floated.
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"How to put this - both of you have a tremendous skill in hiding your true selves."
 
"How to put this - both of you have a tremendous skill in hiding your true selves."
   
"Isn't it fine? There're all happy.", Yukari replied with a nonchalant face.
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"Isn't it fine? There're all happy," Yukari replied with a nonchalant face.
   
 
Ayano didn't reply, on account of resuming her lunch.
 
Ayano didn't reply, on account of resuming her lunch.
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"Were they?"
 
"Were they?"
   
"Yes.", Yukari declared with no doubt.
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"Yes," Yukari declared with no doubt.
   
 
That was an information unavailable to a simple student but neither Ayano nor Nanase were suspicious about it. Frankly this girl, without changing her gentle exterior appearance, or maybe in accordance with her image was randomly well connected.
 
That was an information unavailable to a simple student but neither Ayano nor Nanase were suspicious about it. Frankly this girl, without changing her gentle exterior appearance, or maybe in accordance with her image was randomly well connected.

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