Editing Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 2

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He believed so because he was a chosen man. Because it's impossible for him to loose to that scum.
 
He believed so because he was a chosen man. Because it's impossible for him to loose to that scum.
   
That's why he ought to have a hidden power.
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that's why he ought to have a hidden power.
   
At that time, something pulsated inside his body. A pulse that seemed to make his heart explode and made his blood boil.
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at that time, something pulsated inside his body. A pulse that seemed to make his heart explode and made his blood boil.
   
 
Simultaneously he strangely could see clearly the movements of the beasts that until now only seemed an afterimage.
 
Simultaneously he strangely could see clearly the movements of the beasts that until now only seemed an afterimage.
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Even their paths as of now, their position one moment in the future were decided with level of foresight that exceeded simple prediction.
 
Even their paths as of now, their position one moment in the future were decided with level of foresight that exceeded simple prediction.
   
His glittering yellow pupils lengthened vertically and captured all vectors.
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His pupils lengthened vertically and captured all vectors glittering yellow.
   
 
Equally simple like shooting the targets in slow motion, no as if they stopped, Shin shot the huge beast jumping low.
 
Equally simple like shooting the targets in slow motion, no as if they stopped, Shin shot the huge beast jumping low.
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"R - retreat, Fenrir!"
 
"R - retreat, Fenrir!"
   
With a suspicions discomposure, Kou made Fenrir retreat. The big wolf's image blurred and returned to the underworld with a wounded body.
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With a suspicions discomposure, Kou made Fenrir retreat. The big wolf's image blurred and returned to the underworld with a wound body.
   
 
The fact that Kou became confused and was panicking over Fenrir's wounds was only natural.
 
The fact that Kou became confused and was panicking over Fenrir's wounds was only natural.
   
Summoning magic was a double edged sword. He was able to use the power of a mighty demon but the moment the demon died, his own body receives those damages.
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Summoning magic was a double edged sword. He was able to use the power of a mighty demon but the moment the demon died, his own receives those damages.
   
 
Kou personally tested that with his own body.
 
Kou personally tested that with his own body.

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