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Completely burning and exorcising the evil spirit in a single stroke, Kannagi Ayano turned around. - And then her eyebrows frowned at an acute angle.
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Completely burning and exorcising the evil spirit in one single stroke, Kannagi Ayano turned around. - And then her eyebrows frowned at an acute angle.
   
 
What was reflected in her field of vision was the silhouette of a man looking at the sky with a somewhat distant look.
 
What was reflected in her field of vision was the silhouette of a man looking at the sky with a somewhat distant look.
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".......You're so..." groaned Ayano in a gloomy tone.
 
".......You're so..." groaned Ayano in a gloomy tone.
   
But, of course, Kazuma ignored that and started walking by himself.
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But of course Kazuma ignored that and started walking by himself.
   
 
"Aa, hey, wait!"
 
"Aa, hey, wait!"
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With the same frivolous, slack smiling face like always, teasing Ayano as always, wondering about like always, with an attitude that couldn't be grasped just like the wind, he spent his days like that.
 
With the same frivolous, slack smiling face like always, teasing Ayano as always, wondering about like always, with an attitude that couldn't be grasped just like the wind, he spent his days like that.
   
There was no indication he was forcing himself. There was no change from before ---- Even though, that was impossible.
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There was no indication he was forcing himself. There was no change from before ---- Even though that was impossible.
   
 
He must be hurt. He must be sad.
 
He must be hurt. He must be sad.
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She thought it was dangerous for Kazuma not to show others his weakness.
 
She thought it was dangerous for Kazuma not to show others his weakness.
   
But, what she feared even more was the possibility that she didn't understand anything about Kazuma.
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But what she feared even more was the possibility that she didn't understand anything about Kazuma.
   
In spite of the fact that he was hurt, he did not seem to be so.
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In spite of the fact that he was hurt he did not seem to be so.
   
 
If that's the case, assuming Kazuma would get hurt even more in the future, would she not even be able to see that?
 
If that's the case, assuming Kazuma would get hurt even more in the future, would she not even be able to see that?
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She was supposed to get to the core, even just a little, to the inner part of his heart that was pretending to be superficial.
 
She was supposed to get to the core, even just a little, to the inner part of his heart that was pretending to be superficial.
   
But, if all of it was nothing more but a delusion...
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But if all of it was nothing bore but a delusion...
   
 
''"Kazuma-------"''
 
''"Kazuma-------"''
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For Kazuma, the one who contracted the Spirit Lord of the Wind - the <<Contractor>>, it means that all of the wind spirits are extensions of himself.
 
For Kazuma, the one who contracted the Spirit Lord of the Wind - the <<Contractor>>, it means that all of the wind spirits are extensions of himself.
   
To have them turn on him, was theoretically impossible.
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To have them turn on him, it was theoretically impossible.
   
 
"............."
 
"............."
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But, without turning his eyes to Ayano, Kazuma was only staring directly at the boy in the front.
 
But, without turning his eyes to Ayano, Kazuma was only staring directly at the boy in the front.
   
That's right - the ''enemy'' blocking their way was even younger than Ayano, a boy of thirteen or fourteen.
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That's right - the ''enemy'' blocking their way was even younger that Ayano, a boy of thirteen or fourteen.
   
 
His body, dressed in a stand-up collar shirt and thin pants, looked more delicate that his years and he was shorter than Ayano.
 
His body, dressed in a stand-up collar shirt and thin pants, looked more delicate that his years and he was shorter than Ayano.
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He was a very androgynous but adorable bishonen.
 
He was a very androgynous but adorable bishonen.
   
But, the impression until now was overturned by only two things.
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But the impression until now was overturned by only two things.
   
 
The first were those eyes. The color was dark brown, very common for Asian people. But the light that dwelt in them, like the difference between a cat and a tiger cub, made it clear that the boy was a warrior.
 
The first were those eyes. The color was dark brown, very common for Asian people. But the light that dwelt in them, like the difference between a cat and a tiger cub, made it clear that the boy was a warrior.
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"..........."
 
"..........."
   
In silence, the boy thrusts the long spear forward.
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In silence the boy thrusts the long spear forward.
   
Until now, it was positioned next to his waist. He stretched his left foot back on grand scale.
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Until now it was positioned next to his waist. He stretched his left foot back on grand scale.
   
Without saying anything, he only did that. But only by doing that the spear that until now seemed disproportionate turned one with the boy as if it were so from the beginning.
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Without saying anything he only did that. But only by doing that the spear that until now seemed disproportionate turned one with the boy as if it were so from the beginning.
   
 
"Kuuh-------!"
 
"Kuuh-------!"
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Unsheathing Enraiha, she faced the boy. And then----- she waited.
 
Unsheathing Enraiha, she faced the boy. And then----- she waited.
   
She won't make the first move against the spear that has the longer reach. First, she'll let herself be hit and move after.
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She won't make the first move since against the spear with he longest reach. First she'll let herself be hit and move after.
   
 
That was the proper practice. Besides---
 
That was the proper practice. Besides---
   
Ayano fleetingly looked at Kazuma. If the enemy is a Fujutsushi, this man won't fall behind. If he would fire the same wind blades like before, Kazuma's barrier will definitely endure it.
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Ayano fleetingly looked at Kazuma. If the enemy is a Fujutsushi this man won't fall behind. If he would fire the same wind blades like before, Kazuma's barrier will definitely endure it.
   
 
Using that gap should be good.
 
Using that gap should be good.
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A certain kill blow that could simply pass through Kazuma's barrier.
 
A certain kill blow that could simply pass through Kazuma's barrier.
   
Without thinking of blocking it from the beginning, Ayano tumbled in order to avoid it.
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Without thinking of blocking it from the beginning Ayano tumbled in order to avoid it.
   
 
She barely escaped.
 
She barely escaped.
   
But, in compensation, her posture was fatally disordered. In the two seconds she needed to reorganize herself - she can die ten times over.
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But, as a compensation, her posture was fatally disordered. In the two seconds she needed to reorganize herself - she can die ten times over.
   
 
"Kuu."
 
"Kuu."
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''"Wha.......so much bullshit?"''
 
''"Wha.......so much bullshit?"''
   
At the overwhelming power difference demonstrated, Ayano was soundlessly petrified.
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At the overwhelming power difference demonstrated, Ayano soundlessly petrified.
   
 
But, without any sigh of confusion, as if expecting it, Kazuma fired the second and third attack.
 
But, without any sigh of confusion, as if expecting it, Kazuma fired the second and third attack.
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Greatly bending backwards his upper body, he let himself fall just like that, curled his body to disperse the shock and rotated backwards.
 
Greatly bending backwards his upper body, he let himself fall just like that, curled his body to disperse the shock and rotated backwards.
   
Taking a defensive attitude, he escaped Kazuma's offensive range.
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Taking a defensive attitude he escaped Kazuma's offensive range.
   
 
"Kuuh....."
 
"Kuuh....."
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The boy already didn't answer to Kazuma's persiflage continuing fluently.
 
The boy already didn't answer to Kazuma's persiflage continuing fluently.
   
Did he used it all up or had he no intention of replying, in any case, the point of the spear thrust without disturbance was more eloquent than a thousand words, announcing the boy's intent.
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Did he used it all up or he had no intent of replying, in any case, the point of the spear thrust without disturbance was more eloquent that a thousand words, announcing the boy's intent.
   
 
But even so, Kazuma didn't lose his composure and confronted him with a daring smile.
 
But even so, Kazuma didn't lose his composure and confronted him with a daring smile.
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But despite that his martial arts form was stronger than Ayano's, which the girl found exceedingly annoying----
 
But despite that his martial arts form was stronger than Ayano's, which the girl found exceedingly annoying----
   
Anyhow, since Kazuma was especially engaging in close combat, she started thinking that, may be the key to capturing him in those circumstances but --- the answer was unexpected in various ways.
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Anyhow, since Kazuma was especially engaging in close combat, she stated thinking that may be the key to capturing him in those circumstances but --- the answer was unexpected in various ways.
   
 
With a tendency to pout, as if sulking, Kazuma said.
 
With a tendency to pout, as if sulking, Kazuma said.
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The opponent is someone who might have surpassed even Kazuma, a Fujutsushi ''outside human common sense'' grade.
 
The opponent is someone who might have surpassed even Kazuma, a Fujutsushi ''outside human common sense'' grade.
   
And yet, from the way he spoke just now, she didn't feel any sort of threat -
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And yet, from the way he spoke just now, she didn't felt any sort of threat -
   
 
"......I said I have no business with you."
 
"......I said I have no business with you."
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The moment his field of vision cleared, those two figures were nowhere to be seen.
 
The moment his field of vision cleared, those two figures were nowhere to be seen.
   
"Did you run away.........?," murmured the boy staring in wonder while feeling surprised.
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"Did you run away.........?" Murmured the boy staring in wonder while feeling surprised.
   
 
But immediately pulling himself together, he searched for <<Kehai>> in the surroundings.
 
But immediately pulling himself together, he searched for <<Kehai>> in the surroundings.
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After several seconds ------ the boy turned northeast with confident eyes.
 
After several seconds ------ the boy turned northeast with confident eyes.
   
However, he didn't chased after them immediately but looked up at the sky with a somewhat dark expression, staring at a distant place.
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However, he didn't chased after them immediately but looked up at the sky with a somewhat dark expression, starring at a distant place.
   
 
".......The power of Enraiha's user is only this much? With this......"
 
".......The power of Enraiha's user is only this much? With this......"

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