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Kazuma was neglecting the boy's attack, without even warding it off with wind, he was just avoiding it as much as possible.
 
Kazuma was neglecting the boy's attack, without even warding it off with wind, he was just avoiding it as much as possible.
   
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Was that the best he could do, was his composed smile only a bluff -
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Was that the best he could do, was his composed smile smile only a bluff -
   
 
"Don't get cocky, small fry!"
 
"Don't get cocky, small fry!"
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Without any feeling, Kazuma was simply looking at the boy's bloodless face.
 
Without any feeling, Kazuma was simply looking at the boy's bloodless face.
   
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He was thirteen or fourteen. Just a spoiled child.
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He was thirteen of fourteen. Just a spoiled child.
   
 
Even if he's the direct descendant of the Fuan Family, his body is immature, his training ten years at most, even the power he can use doesn't amount to much.
 
Even if he's the direct descendant of the Fuan Family, his body is immature, his training ten years at most, even the power he can use doesn't amount to much.

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