Editing Kenshin no Keishousha:Volume 1 Chapter1

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The Swordie students wouldn’t even look him in the eye, even the teachers would only engage in formal conversations with him the entire time. Of course, the teachers were all Swordies.
 
The Swordie students wouldn’t even look him in the eye, even the teachers would only engage in formal conversations with him the entire time. Of course, the teachers were all Swordies.
   
All the girls would evade him as he walked along the hallways. Regardless of where he was, he always heard derisive words being spoken behind his back.
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All the girls would evade him as he walked along the hallways. Regardless where he was, he always heard derisive words being spoken behind his back.
   
 
Apparently there was a large barrier between Swordies and humans.
 
Apparently there was a large barrier between Swordies and humans.
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This unimaginably cute and slender beauty was practically fairy-like.
 
This unimaginably cute and slender beauty was practically fairy-like.
   
The swells on her chest were enormous and their shape was quite satisfactory. She was snappily thin at the waist. Those legs of hers that were encased by those tight ballet pants were extremely soft, also her feet seemed pretty tiny......
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The swells on her chest were enormous and their shape was quite satisfactory. She was snappily thin at the waist. Those legs of hers that were encased by those tight ballad pants were extremely soft, also her feet seemed pretty tiny......
   
 
“Alright, very nice.”
 
“Alright, very nice.”

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