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A Swordie’s light surfaces the moment they are born. Thenceforth, they are able to harness it with training and amplify it through a refining process. Manaka possessed this innate powerful light force and after much bitter training, she was able to control the light regarded as the “strongest among the seven”.
 
A Swordie’s light surfaces the moment they are born. Thenceforth, they are able to harness it with training and amplify it through a refining process. Manaka possessed this innate powerful light force and after much bitter training, she was able to control the light regarded as the “strongest among the seven”.
   
Without needing to mention humans, even Swordies would probably have a strenuous time holding a sword upright in the face of Manaka’s fully emitted light.
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Without needing to mention humans, even Swordies would probably have a strenuous time holding a sword upright in face of Manaka’s fully emitted light.
   
 
Nevertheless, Lars maintained his cool when confronted with Manaka’s light force.
 
Nevertheless, Lars maintained his cool when confronted with Manaka’s light force.
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“Fufu, you won’t be able to win if you’re just defending Lars.”
 
“Fufu, you won’t be able to win if you’re just defending Lars.”
   
Due to the acute angles at which her sword maneuvers struck, Manaka’s Dancer would never break regardless of how their blades crossed. In some ways, it resembled the Olden Style utilized by Kurou.
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Due to the acute angles at which her sword maneuvers struck at, Manaka’s Dancer would never break regardless of how their blades crossed. In some ways, it resembled the Olden Style utilized by Kurou.
   
 
“As expected of Onee-sama! You’re so strong!”
 
“As expected of Onee-sama! You’re so strong!”
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“Putting on an act or messing around wouldn’t result in such fluid wielding of the sword.”
 
“Putting on an act or messing around wouldn’t result in such fluid wielding of the sword.”
   
Manaka’s sword was much lighter compared to Lars’s or Sefi’s swords. Being lighter only resulted in increased agility. Although there was a trade off in power, as long as she struck the opponent’s weak points then she would be able to remedy the issue. Of course, that kind of technique was already refined by Manaka ages ago.
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Manaka’s sword was much lighter compared to Lars’s or Sefi’s swords. Being lighter only results in increased agility. Although there was a trade off in power, as long as she struck the opponent’s weak points then she would be able to remedy the issue. Of course, that kind of technique was already refined by Manaka ages ago.
   
 
“Flames, go forth!”
 
“Flames, go forth!”

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