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Each of the nine streaks of light from the sword maneuver headed towards the incoming enemy.
 
Each of the nine streaks of light from the sword maneuver headed towards the incoming enemy.
   
Kurou still should have been incapable of spotting that minute opening from the incredible speed of the Dancer.
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Kurou still should have been able to spot it, that minute opening from the incredible speed of the Dancer.
   
 
However, as long as his sword was in motion it should be fine. It was as if he was trying to chase after the light and become one with it.
 
However, as long as his sword was in motion it should be fine. It was as if he was trying to chase after the light and become one with it.

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