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“That’s true.”
 
“That’s true.”
   
Despite her attitude, Manaka was someone worthy of being one of the Seven Swords. One or two arts users were probably no big deal.
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Despite her attitude, Manaka was someone worthy of being one of the Seven Swords. One or two arts users was probably no big deal.
   
 
Kurou and Sefi both walked out of the lounge and scurried along the path. They kept a close watch on all sides as Kurou retrieved his cellphone to call Manaka.
 
Kurou and Sefi both walked out of the lounge and scurried along the path. They kept a close watch on all sides as Kurou retrieved his cellphone to call Manaka.
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Sword Saint Hyouka cheerfully stated towards her disciple who disgracefully had his sword knocked to the ground.
 
Sword Saint Hyouka cheerfully stated towards her disciple who disgracefully had his sword knocked to the ground.
   
Kurou pressed against his hand as he gazed towards the katana that had been sent flying a couple meters away. He tightly bit his lips. He understood he was clearly defeated, but having this mentioned to him made him feel as if he was slayed.
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Kurou pressed against his hand as he gazed towards the katana that had been sent flying a couple meters away. He tightly bit his lips. He understood he was clearly defeated, but having this mentioned to him made him felt as if he was slayed.
   
Almost seven years had passed since he became Hyouka’s disciple and embarked on training deep into the mountains with her.
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Almost seven years has passed since he became Hyouka’s disciple and embarked on training deep into the mountains with her.
   
 
The mountains were solely chosen as a place for training. Except for the small hut he lived in with the Sword Saint, there weren’t any other man-made structures. Nearly every day involved crossing swords with authentic swords by a small stream next to the hut. This sort of thing would repeat itself daily.
 
The mountains were solely chosen as a place for training. Except for the small hut he lived in with the Sword Saint, there weren’t any other man-made structures. Nearly every day involved crossing swords with authentic swords by a small stream next to the hut. This sort of thing would repeat itself daily.
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The Olden Style relied on preventing your opponent from being able to predict you while being able to thoroughly read your opponent’s movements. This kind of prediction did not rely on visualizing those movements or physical capabilities, but rather experience and intuition. Of course, this sort of matter wasn’t facilely attainable.
 
The Olden Style relied on preventing your opponent from being able to predict you while being able to thoroughly read your opponent’s movements. This kind of prediction did not rely on visualizing those movements or physical capabilities, but rather experience and intuition. Of course, this sort of matter wasn’t facilely attainable.
   
“Do you think you can master the Olden Style? Although Kurou is far from being capable of doing so, your father’s research was incredible. As his son, it would be a disservice to him if you are only able to become some dabbling sword master.”
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“Do you think you can master the Olden Style? Although Kurou is far from being capable of doing so, your father’s research was incredible. As his son, it would be a disservice to him if you are only able to become some dabbling sword master.”
   
 
“Guh......”
 
“Guh......”
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“We let her escape again. Curses......aren’t we about to be eliminated by Neena?”
 
“We let her escape again. Curses......aren’t we about to be eliminated by Neena?”
   
Kurou surveyed his surroundings. Not only was he unable to find a fire extinguisher, the sprinkler system was also unresponsive. The flames on the other hand were burning more intensely without any indication of dying out.
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Kurou surveyed his surroundings. Not only was he unable to find a fire extinguisher, the sprinkler system was also unresponsive. The flames on the other hand was burning more intensely without any indication of dying out.
   
 
“We have no choice, let’s go around that way. Sefi, follow me. As things stand, we no longer know who to trust anymore.”
 
“We have no choice, let’s go around that way. Sefi, follow me. As things stand, we no longer know who to trust anymore.”
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This action, which exuded womanly charms, sent the heartstrings shaking.
 
This action, which exuded womanly charms, sent the heartstrings shaking.
   
“As expected, Manaka sure is terrifying.”
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“As expected, Manaka is sure terrifying.”
   
 
There it was, Kurou’s heart began pounding nonstop.
 
There it was, Kurou’s heart began pounding nonstop.
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This time there wasn’t seven duplicates, but five instead. Looks like the wound she had suffered from Lars was quite grave.
 
This time there wasn’t seven duplicates, but five instead. Looks like the wound she had suffered from Lars was quite grave.
   
However, the disparity in strength between Kurou and hers was still too great even though she had been dealt a wound like this. Even just five of them utilizing the Chaos Dancer would probably desecrate Kurou without difficulty.
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However, the disparity in strength between Kurou and hers was still too great even though she had been dealt a wound like this. Even just five of them utilizing the Chaos Dancer would probably desecrate Kurou without difficulty.
   
 
However, he couldn’t lose here.
 
However, he couldn’t lose here.

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