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What was shocking was things went about as usual as if yesterday’s disturbance within the warehouse never happened. The elimination matches stayed on track and resumed as usual.
 
What was shocking was things went about as usual as if yesterday’s disturbance within the warehouse never happened. The elimination matches stayed on track and resumed as usual.
   
Because of the agreement between Kurou and the Sun Cultists, they did not pursue them. In consideration of Lima’s honor, the matter of her being wounded by a human was never disclosed. However, it was quite unimaginable that the incident’s follow up was conducted in a way as if nothing ever occurred.
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Because of the agreement between Kurou and the sun cultists, they did not pursue them. In consideration of Lima’s honor, the matter of her being wounded by a human was never disclosed. However, it was quite unimaginable that the incident’s follow up was conducted in a way as if nothing ever occurred.
   
 
Lars’s cover up of the incident was quite horrifying. You wouldn’t want this guy as your enemy.
 
Lars’s cover up of the incident was quite horrifying. You wouldn’t want this guy as your enemy.
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“......”
 
“......”
   
However, Hinako wasn’t a fast runner. It was obvious that she didn’t have adequate exercise since she had always been imprisoned in a Sun Cult facility. Nevertheless, there was no way he could just ditch her.
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However, Hinako wasn’t a fast runner. It was obvious that she didn’t have adequate exercise since she had always been imprisoned in a sun cult facility. Nevertheless, there was no way he could just ditch her.
   
 
“Kurou-kun.”
 
“Kurou-kun.”
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Manaka took a peek at the girl who was laid down on the spectator stands————Hinako.
 
Manaka took a peek at the girl who was laid down on the spectator stands————Hinako.
   
“Oh, so that means the Blazes are in cahoots with the Sun Cult?”
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“Oh, so that means the Blazes are in cahoots with the sun cult?”
   
“Didn’t I just mention this? We were originally a rare race. The Sun Cult on the other hand consists only of humans. To us, there is some exploitative value in them.”
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“Didn’t I just mention this? We were originally a rare race. The sun cult on the other hand consists only of humans. To us, there is some exploitive value in them.”
   
 
“Rounding up people......could it be, you guys are plotting a military coup?”
 
“Rounding up people......could it be, you guys are plotting a military coup?”
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He didn’t feel stressed in the least bit from that sudden exchange.
 
He didn’t feel stressed in the least bit from that sudden exchange.
   
Manaka was a Blaze and there was the fear that she was the one manipulating the entire situation from behind the scenes. He trusted her and even handed over Hinako who was now taken away————was she planning on using her? Or did she plan on returning her to the Sun Cult? Furthermore, just when did she realize that Kurou and Lars had to be eliminated as well?
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Manaka was a Blaze and there was the fear that she was the one manipulating the entire situation from behind the scenes. He trusted her and even handed over Hinako who was now taken away————was she planning on using her? Or did she plan on returning her to the sun cult? Furthermore, just when did she realize that Kurou and Lars had to be eliminated as well?
   
 
Without a doubt, the Sword General was Kurou’s enemy.
 
Without a doubt, the Sword General was Kurou’s enemy.
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That kind of thing, why would it happen now————
 
That kind of thing, why would it happen now————
   
“I......I see. Now I see why the Sun Cult highly coveted Hinako. Perhaps the group’s orders to obliterate Sefi were also————”
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“I......I see. Now I see why the sun cult highly coveted Hinako. Perhaps the group’s orders to obliterate Sefi were also————”
   
 
“Perhaps so......however, I’ll have to contemplate over this later. Right now we still need to determine a victor.”
 
“Perhaps so......however, I’ll have to contemplate over this later. Right now we still need to determine a victor.”
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Sefi and Hinako, what happened between them? In order to find out, he had to protect his own life here.
 
Sefi and Hinako, what happened between them? In order to find out, he had to protect his own life here.
   
“Yes, if Kurou-kun were to lose here then I’ll end up killing Sefi. Hinako will probably once again be imprisoned by the Sun Cult.”
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“Yes, if Kurou-kun were to lose here then I’ll end up killing Sefi. Hinako will probably once again be imprisoned by the sun cult.”
   
 
“How regrettable, I won’t let that happen. Although bathing with you was nice, it’s unfortunate that it wasn’t with a younger girl.”
 
“How regrettable, I won’t let that happen. Although bathing with you was nice, it’s unfortunate that it wasn’t with a younger girl.”

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