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“It’s my first time doing so. I feel like I’m capable of using it now.”
 
“It’s my first time doing so. I feel like I’m capable of using it now.”
   
Sefi also felt that she was currently maturing as a swordsman. Although it was just a battle royal, Kurou’s fight with her felt different. Even the light deep within her body had never felt so enriched before.
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Sefi also felt that she was currently maturing as a swordsman. Although it was a just a battle royal, Kurou’s fight with her felt different. Even the light deep within her body had never felt so enriched before.
   
 
“……Very good. Except, it’s a shame that Sefi-sama didn’t bring the Starbreaker with her.”
 
“……Very good. Except, it’s a shame that Sefi-sama didn’t bring the Starbreaker with her.”
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Sefi struggled to hold on to her sword as she stood up.
 
Sefi struggled to hold on to her sword as she stood up.
   
The force of a mystic arte being cast at close distance is really something…...From the looks of it, when the flames crashed against Sefi’s light enhanced body and blade, some sort of explosion took place.
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The force of a mystic arte being cast a close distance is really something…...From the looks of it, when the flames crashed against Sefi’s light enhanced body and blade, some sort of explosion took place.
   
 
Sefi took off the shirt to her uniform that had already been burned. Even the cuffs to her shirt were roasted black. Fortunately, her hand only seemed to have suffered minor burns. At that degree, it would only take three days for it to heal with a Swordie’s recovery ability.
 
Sefi took off the shirt to her uniform that had already been burned. Even the cuffs to her shirt were roasted black. Fortunately, her hand only seemed to have suffered minor burns. At that degree, it would only take three days for it to heal with a Swordie’s recovery ability.
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“Yeah, of course I saw it on my way here.”
 
“Yeah, of course I saw it on my way here.”
   
Considering this was a neighborhood that did not even have streetlights, Swordies were able to see in the dark with their visual acuity. It fit the description of a ghost town perfectly, a place where it would send a chill down your spine.
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Considering this was a neighborhood that did not even have streetlights; Swordies were able to see in the dark with their visual acuity. It fit the description of a ghost town perfectly, a place where it would send a chill down your spine.
   
 
“It looks like a pretty dead neighborhood right?”
 
“It looks like a pretty dead neighborhood right?”

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