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The motorrad called Hermes responded, “Yup, I see it. It’s pretty amazing.”
 
The motorrad called Hermes responded, “Yup, I see it. It’s pretty amazing.”
   
“Yeah,” the rider nodded.
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“Yeah,” the driver nodded.
   
 
They were looking down on a valley whose width was incomparable to the others. The hill on the other side could barely be seen at all. And in the center of that valley, there was a country.
 
They were looking down on a valley whose width was incomparable to the others. The hill on the other side could barely be seen at all. And in the center of that valley, there was a country.
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A brown wilderness and a green forest. The interior and the periphery of this circle were two completely different worlds.
 
A brown wilderness and a green forest. The interior and the periphery of this circle were two completely different worlds.
   
“Kino, what is that water?” Hermes asked. The rider called Kino responded.
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“Kino, what is that water?” Hermes asked. The driver called Kino responded.
   
 
“Probably underground waterway pulses. The enormous river formed by this valley must still be flowing in places deep underground.”
 
“Probably underground waterway pulses. The enormous river formed by this valley must still be flowing in places deep underground.”
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Someone was peering at Kino and Hermes from far, far away through a pair of high-magnification binoculars. They dug a hole in the ground and covered it with a cloth of the same color.
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Someone was peering at Kino and Hermes from far, far away through a pair of high-magnification binoculars. They dug a hole in the ground and covered it with cloth of the same color.
   
 
That someone clicked his tongue. “This is bad…. They’re going to enter that country.”
 
That someone clicked his tongue. “This is bad…. They’re going to enter that country.”
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The sun was slowly, but steadily setting.
 
The sun was slowly, but steadily setting.
   
“I’m sorry, but it will take quite some time,” said the male examiner to Kino, who was absentmindedly sitting on Hermes.
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“I’m sorry, but it will take quite some time,” said the male examiner to Kino, who was absent-mindedly sitting on Hermes.
   
 
After a long wait, when the sun had completely set, the examiner came out of the gatehouse.
 
After a long wait, when the sun had completely set, the examiner came out of the gatehouse.
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It was the examiner who had been at the gate before.
 
It was the examiner who had been at the gate before.
   
“No… It can’t be…,” Kino muttered under her breath. No matter how she looked at him, it was evident that the man before her was over fifty years old. It was a different person.
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“No… It can’t be…” Kino muttered under her breath. No matter how she looked at him, it was evident that the man before her was over fifty years old. It was a different person.
   
 
Kino expressed her thanks to this man, and turned to the woman beside him. She became speechless.
 
Kino expressed her thanks to this man, and turned to the woman beside him. She became speechless.
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Outside of the hotel, there were about twenty people. Kino and Hermes observed them beyond the glass windows. Their ages were different, but every man and woman had the same face.
 
Outside of the hotel, there were about twenty people. Kino and Hermes observed them beyond the glass windows. Their ages were different, but every man and woman had the same face.
   
Hermes asked Kino, “Aren’t you surprised?”
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Hermes asked Kino. “Aren’t you surprised?”
   
 
Kino shook her head lightly. “… I’ve already gotten used to it.”
 
Kino shook her head lightly. “… I’ve already gotten used to it.”
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“Good morning, Miss Kino, Mister Hermes. I’m from the town hall. In case you need one, I came to be your tour guide. How does that sound? I can answer any question you have about this country.”
 
“Good morning, Miss Kino, Mister Hermes. I’m from the town hall. In case you need one, I came to be your tour guide. How does that sound? I can answer any question you have about this country.”
   
“Thank you very much. I’ll take you up on your offer…. There’s one question I would like to ask right away,” said Kino to the guide.
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“Thank you very much. I’ll take you up on your offer… There’s one question I would like to ask right away,” said Kino to the guide.
   
“Yes, what is it… is what I would like to say, but the truth is I already know what your question will be… ‘Why does everyone here have the same face?’ am I right?” the guide said with a smile.
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“Yes, what is it… is what I would like to say, but the truth is I already know what your question will be… ‘Why does everyone here have the same face?’ am I right?” the inspector said with a smile.
   
 
Kino nodded. The guide also nodded.
 
Kino nodded. The guide also nodded.
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Soon its form was revealed. It was small, with arms and legs pointing downwards, and a large head. There was a tube extending upward attached to its belly button.
 
Soon its form was revealed. It was small, with arms and legs pointing downwards, and a large head. There was a tube extending upward attached to its belly button.
   
“A baby… before it’s born…,” Kino muttered.
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“A baby… before it’s born…” Kino muttered.
   
“Amaaazing…,” said Hermes happily.
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“Amaaazing…” said Hermes happily.
   
 
“Correct. That is a fetus. It has been about thirty-five weeks since this child was conceived. It’s flailing about, so I’m turning off the lights,” the guide said.
 
“Correct. That is a fetus. It has been about thirty-five weeks since this child was conceived. It’s flailing about, so I’m turning off the lights,” the guide said.
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“Can you see her? You can see her, right?”
 
“Can you see her? You can see her, right?”
   
“Y-yeah…,” was all Kino managed to say.
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“Y-yeah…” was all Kino managed to say.
   
 
“Isn’t she cute? She’s so adorable, isn’t she?” The woman began to shower Kino with questions.
 
“Isn’t she cute? She’s so adorable, isn’t she?” The woman began to shower Kino with questions.
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“It is just as the name would indicate. It is a place where eligible individuals are taught various things. First, I will explain who these eligible individuals are.”
 
“It is just as the name would indicate. It is a place where eligible individuals are taught various things. First, I will explain who these eligible individuals are.”
   
The guide explained as he walked. “In this country, people over sixteen years of age who desire to have children must undergo an examination. Married or not, the questions are based around confirming the ability of the individuals to raise a child properly. There are several primary factors for this. The person’s bodily and mental state, their economic status, their job or educational status, their experience with raising children, whether or not they have people in their neighborhood that can help them, for instance family, are all tested. Their documents are inspected, they go through an interview, notes are taken on them, then they practice, among other things, and finally, an examination in an isolated facility lasting ten days is performed. In order to see if the person has tendencies toward violence, they are put in a simulated state where they are unable to do as they please, and then pushed to the limit psychologically. We judge their ability to cope, and unless they score ninety-eight points or more on this test, they will not be qualified to receive a child.”
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The guide explained as he walked. “In this country, people over sixteen years of age who desire to have children must undergo an examination. Married or not, the questions are based around confirming the ability of the individuals to raise a child properly. There are several primary factors for this. The person’s bodily and mental state, their economic status, their job or educational status, their experience with raising children, whether or not they have people in their neighborhood that can help them, for instance family, are all tested. Their documents are inspected, they go through an interview, notes are taken on them, then they practice, among other things, and finally, an examination in an isolated facility lasting ten days is performed. In order to see if the person has tendencies toward violence, they are put in a simulated state where they are unable to do as they please, and then pushed to the limit psychologically. We judge their ability to cope, and unless they score ninety-eight points or more on this test, they are not qualified to receive a child.”
   
 
“Pretty strict, isn’t it?” said Hermes.
 
“Pretty strict, isn’t it?” said Hermes.
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“I see…. In one country I visited, there was a saying: ‘I’d like to see how his parents are like.’<ref>''“Oya no kao ga mitai”'' is a Japanese expression used when criticizing the behavior of a child. That is, if a child misbehaves, one thinks that the parents are equally to blame for not bringing him up properly.</ref>” Kino said.
 
“I see…. In one country I visited, there was a saying: ‘I’d like to see how his parents are like.’<ref>''“Oya no kao ga mitai”'' is a Japanese expression used when criticizing the behavior of a child. That is, if a child misbehaves, one thinks that the parents are equally to blame for not bringing him up properly.</ref>” Kino said.
   
“‘I’d like to see how his parents are like,’ eh? Those are fine words indeed…. I’ll remember them. Incidentally, in this country, if a parent murders their child, they are given a death sentence without question. If a child murders a parent, however, it is not considered a crime no matter what the age of the child or their reason for doing it. It is only natural, because after all, children were raised by their parents. If the child you raised would strike, kick, or even kill you, then you have no right to complain. It is entirely the fault of the parents who raised the child. You just have to accept it.”
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“‘I’d like to see how his parents are like,’ eh? Those are fine words indeed… I’ll remember them. Incidentally, in this country, if a parent murders their child, they are given a death sentence without question. If a child murders a parent, however, it is not considered a crime no matter what the age of the child or their reason for doing it. It is only natural, because after all, children were raised by their parents. If the child you raised would strike, kick, or even kill you, then you have no right to complain. It is entirely the fault of the parents who raised the child. You just have to accept it.”
   
 
“……”
 
“……”
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“I see,” Kino muttered as she looked below.
 
“I see,” Kino muttered as she looked below.
   
“And finally, the day they have been waiting for, the ‘birth’, finally arrives. It is the first time they can hold their child with their own hands. … It is truly a moving experience, to take a small life made entirely from your own ‘information’ into your hands. Even though everyone knows that in this country, the men are all the same as the men, and the women are all the same as the women, their own child is still more special than the rest. And in the case of married people like me, the wife I love and my daughters, who are just like her, are much more special to me than anybody else.”
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“And finally, the day they have been waiting for, the ‘birth’, finally arrives. It is the first time they can hold their child with their own hands. … It is truly a moving experience, to take a small life made entirely from your own ‘information’ into your hands. Even though everyone knows that in this country, the men are all the same as the men, and the women are all the same as the women, their own child is still more special than the rest. And in the case of married people like me, the wife I love and my daughter who is just like her, are much more special to me than anybody else.”
   
 
The guide narrowed his eyes and continued. “Unfortunately, there are no births scheduled for either today or tomorrow. I cannot show you the profound emotion during the moment of birth. That is my one regret.”
 
The guide narrowed his eyes and continued. “Unfortunately, there are no births scheduled for either today or tomorrow. I cannot show you the profound emotion during the moment of birth. That is my one regret.”
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The two, who looked every inch exactly the same as each other, bowed at exactly the same time.
 
The two, who looked every inch exactly the same as each other, bowed at exactly the same time.
   
“My second eldest son, Hex, eight years old; and my youngest son, Hepta, seven years old.<ref>Most of these names were from numbers: Hen was probably from ''ein'', the German word for one. The rest are probably from Greek. Duo is two, Tria is one form for the number three, Tettara or Tetra is from ''tettares'' related to four, Hex is from ''hexa'' which means six, and Hepta is seven. Freja is not a number though; it is German for Freya, the Norse goddess of love and beauty.</ref> They are all my precious family…. Oh yes, and then my wife.”
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“My second eldest son, Hex, eight years old; and my youngest son, Hepta, seven years old.<ref>Most of these names were from numbers: Hen was probably from ''ein'' the German word for one. The rest are probably from Greek. Duo is two, Tria is one form for the number three, Tettara or Tetra is from ''tettares'' related to four, Hex is from ''hexa'' which means six, and Hepta is seven. Freja is not a number though; it is German for Freya, the Norse goddess of love and beauty.</ref> They are all my precious family…. Oh yes, and then my wife.”
   
 
“Oh, I am honored that you remember me,” his wife joked.
 
“Oh, I am honored that you remember me,” his wife joked.
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“My work for today is to be with the traveler. It’s fine as long as the boss doesn’t find out.”
 
“My work for today is to be with the traveler. It’s fine as long as the boss doesn’t find out.”
   
“Dear, that is misuse of your authority, mixing public and private life, you know,” the wife, who spoke in an exasperated tone, and Kino, met eyes and smiled wryly.
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“Dear, that is misuse of your authority, mixing public and private life, you know,” the wife, who spoke in an exasperated tone, and Kino met eyes and smiled wryly.
   
 
Hermes, surrounded by the kids, made a splendid plaything for them.
 
Hermes, surrounded by the kids, made a splendid plaything for them.
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From the bottom of the valley resounded roars akin to lightning hitting a house next door. All of the cannons produced white smoke. The soldiers in the headquarters tent climbed up the hill. Kino also rode Hermes and climbed up.
 
From the bottom of the valley resounded roars akin to lightning hitting a house next door. All of the cannons produced white smoke. The soldiers in the headquarters tent climbed up the hill. Kino also rode Hermes and climbed up.
   
From afar, a black flower bloomed at once above the skies of the country. The succeeding explosions produced smoke that looked like flowers. The sound of those explosions reached them after some delay.
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From afar, a black flower bloomed at once above the skies of the country. The succeeding explosions produced smoke that looked like flowers. The sound of those explosions reached after some delay.
   
 
The cannons from the back roared once more, and several flowers bloomed again. This was repeated several times.
 
The cannons from the back roared once more, and several flowers bloomed again. This was repeated several times.
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“Why of course. That is a country where everyone had the same faces. We would like to erase that devil’s country from the face of this earth”
 
“Why of course. That is a country where everyone had the same faces. We would like to erase that devil’s country from the face of this earth”
   
“Which means——” Kino tried to speak, but the violent volleys of cannon erased her voice. She spoke once more.
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“Which means——,” Kino tried to speak, but the violent volleys of cannon erased her voice. She spoke once more.
   
 
“Which means, one of you have entered that country?”
 
“Which means, one of you have entered that country?”
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‘Hahahaha!’ the man beside him laughed heartily, and then spoke, “My condolences, your excellency. Perhaps this amount of work is too much for just one citizen. Maybe I should watch over you more.”
 
‘Hahahaha!’ the man beside him laughed heartily, and then spoke, “My condolences, your excellency. Perhaps this amount of work is too much for just one citizen. Maybe I should watch over you more.”
   
The guide, who apparently was the leader, shrugged his shoulders.
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The guide, who apparently was the chief, shrugged his shoulders.
   
 
“Oh dear. I wouldn’t find a boss as strict as you anywhere else.”
 
“Oh dear. I wouldn’t find a boss as strict as you anywhere else.”
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In the ruins, people flowed out of the exit. All men had the same face as one another. All women had the same as one another.
 
In the ruins, people flowed out of the exit. All men had the same face as one another. All women had the same as one another.
   
The guide-turned-leader looked around him, and said with a smile,
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The guide-turned-chief looked around him, and said with a smile,
   
 
“If you have the will to survive, it is not that easy to perish.”
 
“If you have the will to survive, it is not that easy to perish.”

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