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Kino and Hermes arrived in a small country.
 
Kino and Hermes arrived in a small country.
   
At the bottom of a mountain covered with a dense forest was the expanse of a town with a modest castle in its center. One can go full-circle around the ivy-covered walls in one afternoon walk.
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At the bottom of a mountain covered with a dense forest was the expanse of a town with a modest castle at its center. One can go full-circle around the ivy-covered walls in one afternoon walk.
   
 
Kino knocked on the gates and asked the gatekeeper for permission to enter the country.
 
Kino knocked on the gates and asked the gatekeeper for permission to enter the country.
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“……” “……”
 
“……” “……”
   
Both Kino and Hermes fell silent.
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And both Kino and Hermes fell silent.
   
 
The citizens were wearing ‘ears’ on their heads. A pair of ears was sticking out of their hair, symmetrically positioned on both sides. The neatly triangular-shaped ears were exactly like a cat’s.
 
The citizens were wearing ‘ears’ on their heads. A pair of ears was sticking out of their hair, symmetrically positioned on both sides. The neatly triangular-shaped ears were exactly like a cat’s.
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“Welcome! Traveler and motorrad, welcome to our country!”
 
“Welcome! Traveler and motorrad, welcome to our country!”
   
A representative of the citizens said this and shook hands with Kino. It was a man in the prime of his life who seemed to be the leader. Above his smiling face and firmly hardened hair, dark brown ‘cat ears’ were attached.
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A representative of the citizens said this, and shook hands with Kino. It was a man in the prime of his life who seemed to be the leader. Above his smiling face and firmly hardened hair, dark brown ‘cat ears’ were attached.
   
   
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“Decorate their heads with crow feathers, enter a room hopping with their right leg, eat while their left hand is pointing at the sky, put on white make-up around their eyes, greet with thumbs up and say ‘Yay!’, maybe?”
 
“Decorate their heads with crow feathers, enter a room hopping with their right leg, eat while their left hand is pointing at the sky, put on white make-up around their eyes, greet with thumbs up and say ‘Yay!’, maybe?”
   
“Yeah, that’s it. I too won’t give any spoilers to the travelers we meet. Everyone will be happy if they get to drag someone to their tradition.”
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“Yeah, that’s it. I too, won’t give any spoilers to the travelers we meet. Everyone will be happy if they get to drag someone to their tradition.”
   
 
“Jeez…, there’s one over here too,” <ref> Not sure if it’s an expression, but Hermes said something to the effect of, ‘If over there, there’s those people, right here we have this person’, which I assumed to mean that Kino was being naughty like the citizens.</ref> Hermes said with an upset expression to the very relaxed Kino.
 
“Jeez…, there’s one over here too,” <ref> Not sure if it’s an expression, but Hermes said something to the effect of, ‘If over there, there’s those people, right here we have this person’, which I assumed to mean that Kino was being naughty like the citizens.</ref> Hermes said with an upset expression to the very relaxed Kino.

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