Editing Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1 Chapter4

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But new reports arrived there.
 
But new reports arrived there.
   
Having taken off from Oahu, a small private plane had spotted the enemy fleet. According to radio reports from Oahu, the enemy didn't seem to be heading for the Arenuihaha Channel, but rather for the North Kaua'i Channel.
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Having taken off from Oahu, a small private plane had spotted the enemy fleet. According to radio reports from Oahu, the enemy didn't seem to be heading for the Arenuihaha Channel, but rather for the North Kauai Channel.
   
"Okay, if that's the case, then we needn't worry about enemy subs. Head for the Kaua'i Channel."
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"Okay, if that's the case, then we needn't worry about enemy subs. Head for the Kauai Channel."
   
 
Kimmel, his eyes shining, came to a decision.
 
Kimmel, his eyes shining, came to a decision.
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A report from the Seidens came in. They said that the Kimmel fleet had changed course slightly.
 
A report from the Seidens came in. They said that the Kimmel fleet had changed course slightly.
   
"They are heading for the Kaua'i Channel after all."
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"They are heading for the Kauai Channel after all."
   
"Is that so? Could we change the fleet's speed? We must not arrive at the Kaua'i Channel too early or too late. The time at which we meet is critical to this operation."
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"Is that so? Could we change the fleet's speed? We must not arrive at the Kauai Channel too early or too late. The time at which we meet is critical to this operation."
   
"According to calculations, if we advance as we are now, we will arrive at the Kaua'i Channel at 13:20."
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"According to calculations, if we advance as we are now, we will arrive at the Kauai Channel at 13:20."
   
 
"When is Kimmel due to arrive?"
 
"When is Kimmel due to arrive?"

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