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'My acting skills were clearly perfect that time... But you still remained unmoved, Haruomi.'
 
'My acting skills were clearly perfect that time... But you still remained unmoved, Haruomi.'
   
"Because the timing in the transition from your original subject of conversation to the outpour of tears was a teeny bit unnatural."
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"Because the timing in the transition from your original subject of conversation to the out-pour of tears was a teeny bit unnatural."
   
 
'Getting duped willingly is a show of manliness in times like those, you know♪ Oh right, before I forget it,' the crafty organization leader suddenly changed the subject.
 
'Getting duped willingly is a show of manliness in times like those, you know♪ Oh right, before I forget it,' the crafty organization leader suddenly changed the subject.
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The sort-of magnificent bookshelves were fully occupied by the book collection of the Haruga family, a lineage said to have produced many a collector over the generations, although only few of them were from his father. Despite having read tens of thousands of volumes, he tended to digitize the majority of books after reading.
 
The sort-of magnificent bookshelves were fully occupied by the book collection of the Haruga family, a lineage said to have produced many a collector over the generations, although only few of them were from his father. Despite having read tens of thousands of volumes, he tended to digitize the majority of books after reading.
   
This naturally arose from a lifestyle of frequent relocations.
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This naturally arose from a lifestyle of frequent relocation.
   
 
"Oh, so that's where Pops kept it."
 
"Oh, so that's where Pops kept it."
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"This thing is really good, just as I thought. And you clearly said you'd give it to me once you're done with it..."
 
"This thing is really good, just as I thought. And you clearly said you'd give it to me once you're done with it..."
   
The silver watch was circular with a diameter of 10cm.
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The silver watch was circular with a diameter of 10 cm.
   
 
It was slightly too large as a pocket watch, but Hal still stuffed it into a pocket in his pants.
 
It was slightly too large as a pocket watch, but Hal still stuffed it into a pocket in his pants.
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Hal only needed to think slightly before understanding immediately.
 
Hal only needed to think slightly before understanding immediately.
   
The acronym UFO officially stood for "Unidentified Flying Object." It did not originally mean flying saucer but was a codename for unknown flying entities. In that sense, just as Mutou-san pointed out, the dragons were currently the biggest and most numerous UFOs.
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The acronym UFO officially stood for "Unidentified Flying Object." It did not originally mean flying saucer but was a code-name for unknown flying entities. In that sense, just as Mutou-san pointed out, the dragons were currently the biggest and most numerous UFOs.
   
 
"Then your club activities involve--"
 
"Then your club activities involve--"

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