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While the train carried them along the New Town Loop Line, they were instantly presented with the striking scenery. This was because the Sumida River was visible from the elevated railway where the train was traveling.
 
While the train carried them along the New Town Loop Line, they were instantly presented with the striking scenery. This was because the Sumida River was visible from the elevated railway where the train was traveling.
   
"Oh right, it’s possible to see that side from these parts," mumbled Hal softly while holding onto the train’s ring-shaped handgrip.
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"Oh right, it’s possible to see that side from these parts," mumbled Hal softly while holding onto the train’s ring-shaped hand-grip.
   
 
Stretched out on the opposite shore of the Sumida River was the scenery formerly known as the Asakusa district.
 
Stretched out on the opposite shore of the Sumida River was the scenery formerly known as the Asakusa district.
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Hal and Asya sighed together after remarking quietly.
 
Hal and Asya sighed together after remarking quietly.
   
Concession territories ceded to dragonkind were scattered all over the world, numbering more than two hundred. Erected at each of these locations was the same type of ominous black pillar—the Monolith.
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Concession territories ceded to dragon-kind were scattered all over the world, numbering more than two hundred. Erected at each of these locations was the same type of ominous black pillar—the Monolith.
   
 
"Old Tokyo" consisted of what used to be Tokyo's hub area back when the city was still Japan's capital.
 
"Old Tokyo" consisted of what used to be Tokyo's hub area back when the city was still Japan's capital.
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Hal and Orihime immediately responded with the same action. They both nodded.
 
Hal and Orihime immediately responded with the same action. They both nodded.
   
Twenty years prior, dragonkind had "returned" to the planet Earth.
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Twenty years prior, dragon-kind had "returned" to the planet Earth.
   
 
However, these super lifeforms did not choose to make Earth their place of residence.
 
However, these super lifeforms did not choose to make Earth their place of residence.
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Crossing the atmosphere, they had colonized satellite orbits and the moon's surface.
 
Crossing the atmosphere, they had colonized satellite orbits and the moon's surface.
   
The dragons all possessed flight capability and survivability enabling them to break through the atmosphere by their own power. Humans were no longer surprised even after learning of this fact. But after learning of dragonkind's certain habits, people probably prayed to their worshiped gods or cursed their own fates.
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The dragons all possessed flight capability and survivability enabling them to break through the atmosphere by their own power. Humans were no longer surprised even after learning of this fact. But after learning of dragon-kind's certain habits, people probably prayed to their worshiped gods or cursed their own fates.
   
 
Dragons frequently attacked, spurred by impromptu destructive impulses.
 
Dragons frequently attacked, spurred by impromptu destructive impulses.
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Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragon Strikes" with extreme anger.
 
Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragon Strikes" with extreme anger.
   
These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of dragonkind and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.
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These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of dragon-kind and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.
   
 
This resulted in that particular "king" appearing in front of CNN's cameras and generously declaring in an astounding tenor voice:
 
This resulted in that particular "king" appearing in front of CNN's cameras and generously declaring in an astounding tenor voice:
   
"It is truly regrettable that such problems have arisen. Consequently, as the representative of dragonkind, I promise you all, humans, we shall refrain absolutely from interfering if you were to exercise your right to self-defense against berserk members of our kind. I hereby swear upon my title as king."
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"It is truly regrettable that such problems have arisen. Consequently, as the representative of dragon-kind, I promise you all, humans, we shall refrain absolutely from interfering if you were to exercise your right to self-defense against berserk members of our kind. I hereby swear upon my title as king."
   
 
Despite the clearly solemn tone of voice, the words coming from his mouth were absolutely irresponsible.
 
Despite the clearly solemn tone of voice, the words coming from his mouth were absolutely irresponsible.
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However, one saving grace could be considered a blessing mixed in the curse.
 
However, one saving grace could be considered a blessing mixed in the curse.
   
Lesser dragons, forming the majority of dragonkind, were relatively easy to defeat.
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Lesser dragons, forming the majority of dragon-kind, were relatively easy to defeat.
   
 
That being said, that assessment was based on expert perspectives and differed somewhat from common perceptions. In the process of evacuating from the library's fifth floor underground to the ground surface, Orihime murmured with worry, "Dragons... will reach New Town?"
 
That being said, that assessment was based on expert perspectives and differed somewhat from common perceptions. In the process of evacuating from the library's fifth floor underground to the ground surface, Orihime murmured with worry, "Dragons... will reach New Town?"
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Coming from her, an experienced combatant, these words felt even more real.
 
Coming from her, an experienced combatant, these words felt even more real.
   
"In addition, although it's quite rare, if instead of lesser dragons—Raptors—we have the Equites that are capable of human speech... in other words, elite dragons, then the danger level will immediately rise to Code Red."
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"In addition, although it's quite rare, if instead of lesser dragons—Raptors—we have the Elites that are capable of human speech... in other words, elite dragons, then the danger level will immediately rise to Code Red."
   
 
"Raptors? What are they?"
 
"Raptors? What are they?"
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As expected, she was a layperson—At least currently still. Hal nodded secretly to himself before supplementing his explanation.
 
As expected, she was a layperson—At least currently still. Hal nodded secretly to himself before supplementing his explanation.
   
"It's a shortened form of the scientific nomenclature used for dragonkind. You should be learning it in the near future... How's the situation on the surface now?"
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"It's a shortened form of the scientific nomenclature used for dragon-kind. You should be learning it in the near future... How's the situation on the surface now?"
   
 
The trio had finally finished climbing stairs, arriving at the ground floor.
 
The trio had finally finished climbing stairs, arriving at the ground floor.
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The serpent swallowed its own tail, forming a "∞" symbol in the air.
 
The serpent swallowed its own tail, forming a "∞" symbol in the air.
   
The infinity symbol gradually materialized, turning from massless light into a corporeal creature. Then it transformed even further.
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The infinity symbol gradually materialized, turning from mass-less light into a corporeal creature. Then it transformed even further.
   
 
While Hal and the others watched, the light from the pentagram finished transforming into a "serpentine dragon."
 
While Hal and the others watched, the light from the pentagram finished transforming into a "serpentine dragon."
   
This was a dragon whose form greatly differed from the dragonkind who stood as mankind's enemies.
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This was a dragon whose form greatly differed from the dragon-kind who stood as mankind's enemies.
   
 
Its body was long like a snake and had four extremely short limbs. There was a horn on its head that resembled a deer's antler in shape. Its entire body was covered with emerald scales. Overall, there was a kind of fish-like air to its appearance.
 
Its body was long like a snake and had four extremely short limbs. There was a horn on its head that resembled a deer's antler in shape. Its entire body was covered with emerald scales. Overall, there was a kind of fish-like air to its appearance.
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Minadzuki. This was apparently the name of this leviathan shaped like a serpentine dragon.
 
Minadzuki. This was apparently the name of this leviathan shaped like a serpentine dragon.
   
Leviathans were the artificial dragons born from occult and magic. Created for fighting dragonkind, these "serpents" possessed bodies similar to dragons and shared their lives with witches.
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Leviathans were the artificial dragons born from occult and magic. Created for fighting dragon-kind, these "serpents" possessed bodies similar to dragons and shared their lives with witches.
   
 
SAURU, of which Hal and Asya were members, was the organization overseeing the birth of leviathans and their covenants.
 
SAURU, of which Hal and Asya were members, was the organization overseeing the birth of leviathans and their covenants.
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Furthermore, the remains of dragons also became extremely fragile, making the tough resilience from when they were alive seem fictional. In actual fact, more than half of this Raptor's body shattered from the impact of the fall.
 
Furthermore, the remains of dragons also became extremely fragile, making the tough resilience from when they were alive seem fictional. In actual fact, more than half of this Raptor's body shattered from the impact of the fall.
   
Watching the death state unique to dragonkind, Hal thought to himself.
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Watching the death state unique to dragon-kind, Hal thought to himself.
   
 
Amidst the misfortune of a dragon attack, how lucky it was for all of them to survive unharmed.
 
Amidst the misfortune of a dragon attack, how lucky it was for all of them to survive unharmed.

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