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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
"As an endless traveler hailing from dragonkind, I hereby offer my greetings to all of you."
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"As an endless traveler hailing from dragon-kind, I hereby offer my greetings to all of you."
   
 
The small bronze dragon landed lightly on a streetlight like a bird of prey.
 
The small bronze dragon landed lightly on a streetlight like a bird of prey.
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"M-My serpent!?"
 
"M-My serpent!?"
   
"Dispel... He used a countermagic spell! Watch out, Juujouji—Urgh!?"
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"Dispel... He used a counter-magic spell! Watch out, Juujouji—Urgh!?"
   
 
No sooner had he issued a warning, Hal knelt down. That was because his legs suddenly lost strength.
 
No sooner had he issued a warning, Hal knelt down. That was because his legs suddenly lost strength.
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Like last time, Orihime rushed over to him. That girl never minded her own business nor feared for her own life.
 
Like last time, Orihime rushed over to him. That girl never minded her own business nor feared for her own life.
   
Why did she choose the path of shared destruction instead of abandoning deadweight? Just like last time, Hal burned with fury at his own ineptitude.
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Why did she choose the path of shared destruction instead of abandoning dead-weight? Just like last time, Hal burned with fury at his own ineptitude.
   
 
However, the only difference in situation this time was Asya's presence.
 
However, the only difference in situation this time was Asya's presence.
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A number of lights were descending on the earth from satellite orbits.
 
A number of lights were descending on the earth from satellite orbits.
   
This was not a sudden meteor shower. Nowadays, dragonkind had built a number of colonies on satellite orbits and the moon's surface where large numbers of Raptors—lesser dragons—inhabited.
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This was not a sudden meteor shower. Nowadays, dragon-kind had built a number of colonies on satellite orbits and the moon's surface where large numbers of Raptors—lesser dragons—inhabited.
   
 
"Are you summoning minions too!?"
 
"Are you summoning minions too!?"
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'So in ancient times, it's possible that males might have been able to form covenants with serpents?'
 
'So in ancient times, it's possible that males might have been able to form covenants with serpents?'
   
'Possibly, but that said, living in contemporary times, we have no choice but to shove the danger onto young girls, in order to actualize the magic to oppose dragonkind...'
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'Possibly, but that said, living in contemporary times, we have no choice but to shove the danger onto young girls, in order to actualize the magic to oppose dragon-kind...'
   
 
While dreaming of a nostalgic conversation with his late father—
 
While dreaming of a nostalgic conversation with his late father—
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Then the devil who led people to hell proposed without holding back.
 
Then the devil who led people to hell proposed without holding back.
   
"I shall confer to you the power of dragonbane—the conqueror's runes that dragonkind unquestionably reveres and seeks out. The special privilege of the dragonslayer shall be bestowed upon you."
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"I shall confer to you the power of dragonbane—the conqueror's runes that dragon-kind unquestionably reveres and seeks out. The special privilege of the dragonslayer shall be bestowed upon you."
   
 
Dragonbane. Dragonslayer. Hal could not help but doubt his hearing. In other words, killing dragons.<!--dragonslayer rendered in katakana in the original JP for the final mention-->
 
Dragonbane. Dragonslayer. Hal could not help but doubt his hearing. In other words, killing dragons.<!--dragonslayer rendered in katakana in the original JP for the final mention-->
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"Y-Your proposal is way too shady..."
 
"Y-Your proposal is way too shady..."
   
"Form a covenant with me, brat. You shall become king&mdash;the one to rule over all 'serpents' in this world and bear the brunt of dragonkind's fear and hatred."
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"Form a covenant with me, brat. You shall become king&mdash;the one to rule over all 'serpents' in this world and bear the brunt of dragon-kind's fear and hatred."
   
 
Hal felt troubled. This was way too sinister.
 
Hal felt troubled. This was way too sinister.
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Despite suffering from the intense heat and pain that almost rendered him unconscious, Hal still muttered.
 
Despite suffering from the intense heat and pain that almost rendered him unconscious, Hal still muttered.
   
The runic symbol felt like it belonged to the same system as the cuneiform gathering the wisdom of dragonkind, but Hal had never seen it before.
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The runic symbol felt like it belonged to the same system as the cuneiform gathering the wisdom of dragon-kind, but Hal had never seen it before.
   
 
(This is a dragonslaying seal among the secret runes that only conquerors are capable of wielding... I am bestowing upon you my favorite and most trustworthy rune, that of the Bow.)
 
(This is a dragonslaying seal among the secret runes that only conquerors are capable of wielding... I am bestowing upon you my favorite and most trustworthy rune, that of the Bow.)
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In that instant, the wall of Tokyo Station's Marunouchi entrance suddenly collapsed, producing a large cloud of debris.
 
In that instant, the wall of Tokyo Station's Marunouchi entrance suddenly collapsed, producing a large cloud of debris.
   
Then a giant super lifeform intruded from the large hole produced from the destruction.
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Then a giant super life-form intruded from the large hole produced from the destruction.
   
 
"The fleeing game ends here, human child."
 
"The fleeing game ends here, human child."
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In other words, Soth had extended his "right arm."
 
In other words, Soth had extended his "right arm."
   
Hal was grasped inside what corresponded to the super lifeform's palm.
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Hal was grasped inside what corresponded to the super life-form's palm.
   
 
"Speaking of the conqueror's runes held by the Crimson Queen, naturally there is the mighty bow of dragonslaying, renowned far and wide... Was there a seal in her surroundings? Speak now if you know. If you do not know&mdash;"
 
"Speaking of the conqueror's runes held by the Crimson Queen, naturally there is the mighty bow of dragonslaying, renowned far and wide... Was there a seal in her surroundings? Speak now if you know. If you do not know&mdash;"

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